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Nice. Nice indeed
Always good to see another Chapter of this one.
Loli Athena is something I need to see in my life.
Also, loving anything to do with Skyla. Nav adores her.
Edit: Loving this.
NAVIOLI NAVIOLI
ATHENA IS NOW A 30,000 YEAR OLD MAGIC LOLI
I keep forgetting navs a genius lol and smol athena is coote
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>30,000
Try 30,000,000,000
Ravioli ravioli give me the athenaloli-oli?
11098701
Try two and a half times the age of the universe?
I love child logic: Simple, silly, and accurate.
Athena's new look makes it sound like she looks like Filo from The Rising of the Shield Hero.
static.wikia.nocookie.net/poohadventures/images/7/7b/Filo_Anime.png/revision/latest?cb=20200517232816
~KBO.
11098840
Boo. Knock-off Love Freak.
Heaven bless you. Loli Athena is funny. The whole breakfast scene this chapter felt off. The genie? Didn't Pinkie say that when he went to the European Festival?
If Nav doesn't drop the bomb shell on Fleur about learning she blackmailed Clementine while in the coma "during" the interview, and then giving Clemy the right to publish it using her higher noble standing to counter her co an quote friends demands for it not to be, then I and I bet many others will be sorely disappointed at not seeing Fleur get her just desserts.
Also wasn't the blackmailing something Nav was trying to beat out of Fleur? it would just feel wrong to not teach them a curl yet humbling lesson in the next chapter.
If I was in Nav's place I would feel bad aboput doing this to Fleur, but I'd feel even worse if I let them get away with it.
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You were bucking right and its still going!!
Yet another banger of a chapter.
It just occurred to me this is probably the only fic where saying "Man I can't wait until this story goes to hell" is a complement.
This honestly felt like a filler chapter. Besides loli Athena, nothing of note happened. The conversation between Nav and Fleur was mostly inconsequential, aside from Fleur being extra grating.
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To be fair, several of the more recent chapters feel like filler. For the last 100k words (give or take) the biggest thing to happen has been a trip to see the deer.
But I suppose this story has always been like that, I just didn't notice until I caught up and actually had to wait for updates.
Anyway,still following.
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Yep, with Nav having to recycle the same conversations with different people.
Navneeds to make a Smol squad and code name the Wilder Kids?
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Things go to hell figuratively almost every time Nav isn't closely coached by her vassals/friends. Shoot, I bet things could go to hell if Nav was simply left alone in a room by herself.
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I should clarify I was talking about the upcoming Tartarus expedition that keeps getting mentioned.
11099899
Yep, I can recall one of the earlier chapters where there's a timeskip of an entire season, I think it was winter or something. Now it takes a few chapters just to get through a single day.
It's pretty erratic pacing, but that's what makes this story so fun and enjoyable. I'm hoping the interview and the upcoming pageant will be worthwhile
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The pacing doesn't seem so bad if you aren't already caught up and waiting on the next chapter. Once I get to marathon reading, I'll hardly notice that particular detail. As far as time skipping a season, this story is so far off the rails I'm not sure that even applies anymore. It starts at a certain point in the timeline and ricochets off to who knows where, though I'm not saying that's a bad thing.
There were certain points it just seemed to drag on and on for though. Apart from this particular stretch, the three or so chapters with Nav stuck in the haunted bunker come to mind. Part of the way in I just started to skim to find parts that might have added to the plot as a whole rather than just setting the current scene.
And I'm wondering if the Dragon (zombie?) armor was forgotten about. It was made, used once with bad side effects, and last mention of it IIRC was Athena wanting to take a look at it to see what's up, and Nav still hasn't brought it to her despite several return trips to the book since then, nor any further mention.
Oh, the lewd porn dialogue connotations this intentionally/unintentionally brings up. I'm sure pervy/ slutty Nav would appreciate it.
Aren't the only requirement for femininity that one be able to bear offspring and nurture them? Or to put it more crudely; to have a cunt and tits?
its interesting now you bring up the deal she made with discord. being that she has a bite of the golden apple of chaos :P
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Considering this is millions to billions of years in the future from 'current time' (well, 2012)... Yeah?
Given Discord, we can't even rely on the age being based on 'Well, the sun hasn't exploded yet'. It could literally be a dozen of billions of years.
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It's not anywhere close to that far into the future, dude. None of the ruins like the bunkers would still exist if it were. Not even traces of them.
Despite complaints of “filler”, I on the other hand am glad we have more Spike time. Still remember their time in Egypt and the undead wastes of Antarctica. Good to see how far he’s come.
The only reporters with a legit grudge against the MC…. Oh dear
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im pretty sure it was destroyed at some point? i remember them talking about it after the fact of finding out it was super cursed. i think at some point he just decided it wasn't worth it in the end.
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Maybe it was destroyed. This thing is so large its hard to keep track.
Can someone give me a link to the DOAM discord? Or at the very least,somewhere where I can see fan art of this fic. Thank you
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I'm pretty sure Nav has said multiple times it's been millions of years, and while average everyday building ruins wouldn't last millions of years, doomsday super bunkers built to preserve humanity by mega corporations with technology 30-40 years in the future that apparently include some pretty robust nanomachine technology? If the planet isn't affected by an extreme terraforming event on the scale of a massive meteor impact, then I don't see why it couldn't. They made the Elementals, making a building that's impenetrable and self-repairing with nanomachines on the outside layer of the structure sounds easy in comparison. Nanomachines are op as fuck, and mastering the use of them will probably be one of the biggest leaps in technology humanity will ever see.
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I was really commenting on the latter part.
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There should be a URL in the author's note of the chapter. Is it busted again?
https://discord.gg/tVQMbwF
Woooosh
that was a sound of Athena making a huge leap, jumping up in a list of favourite characters
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It's literally stated its been at least millions of years though - Literally hundreds of species have risen and fallen in the age of the Elementals alone, of which only the very oldest remember humanity at all.
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currently, yes. that was the hinging circumstance of my guesswork.
I finally made it back to the most recent chapter. This will be fun.
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Dude he can rite somthing that can make her better so Luna X Navaron
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Peculiar indeed. These are the Diaries of a Madman afterall.
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It has been corrected lord commissar.
It is when the dice of fate are cast
This would sound better as:
It is when the die of fate is cast
I'm liking the new Athena.
And Fleur should really try to stop making Nav a lady. The more you try to force something, the more Nav just resists. Compromise a little, Fleur. Less "try to be a noble lady" and more "try to be civil".
Haha Nav maxed out the bio tree and not the Tech and now he's regretting it