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That letter Navi wrote was funny.
Since Twilight pretty much worships the ground Celestia walks on how much will this shatter her world?
All my lol
But the whole Twilight thing is also somewhat sad or some other depressing feeling I can't put my finger on...
All in all my reaction to this chapter:
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Lol silly twilight your efforts are futile.
More please,
this is awsome!
Daaamn....
Nothing else to say.
EDIT:
I fucking love this story, how this story developers in a realistic way makes me want to hit other story's I have read in their faces, for not having consider the most logical reactions and responses.
There have been humans that respond to everyone of Twilight's questions, like if they own her something, and others in which consider the ponies perfect beings, perfectly innocent and any another species other than ponies never appears or is caroughtought unless their going to kill the human. This story kicked any illogical human reasoning -not including Nav's not giving a shit moments- out the fucking window.
He does what he knows that is best for himself -up to the moment he cared about anyone else- and in most desitions I could even say that I would of done the same, because of his situations, that's the best alternative.
And he doesn't try to be anything other than himself and does what humans do best, whatever necessary to survive.
The desition I always test the story's I like to read -if they pass through MLP FIM season 2- to make sure that their well thought out
story's, is the Fucking wedding, the changeling invation, because no one gives a damn about the changelings motives, it was more than obvious that they had to have a motive, AND a big one if you start a full blown invation having a species that can changechift into anypony -never proven otherwise-.
And the fact that the changelings still matter after the wedding kick other story's logic in the balls.
So congrats Grand Master on this awesome piece of art you call "Diaries of a Madman"
You have gain a permanent reader that will not stopreading doesn't matter what comes ahead.
Hope it doesn't go as horrible as I think it will.
I wouldn't be that surprised if Discord's recruitment thing didn't start to extend to Twilight at some point. Hell, I would start thinking that this is a "Twilight's Fall" sort of story if Nav wasn't in it.
In all honesty, almost all of the ponies should not be considered friends to Nav. They don't respect his space, privacy or personal possessions. Some of their behavior doesn't even come close to friendship. And you can only play the "we just want to help you" card so much. Twilight is just ignorant, arrogant and self centered. She assumes she is entitled to answers about his life. She doesn't even realize that her actions have larger implications. Anyone else in Navs position would have stopped being friends with her a long time ago. Why doesn't he leave them and get new friends? How much annoying can this guy handle before he really gets pissed?
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No, I wholly agree with you. We just can't go and suggest things too soon yet. And like you I enjoy HiE stories, I could never get into the whole perspective of an already created chow character...
Thanks for sharing you opinion though! I like having conversations on other peoples stories! :D
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Twilight's pretty much... broken when it comes to Celestia. If I go with one of my plans, there will be revenge. Evil, cruel revenge.
Also, so much Twilight hate.
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He is about at his breaking point in more ways than one. He just needs an excuse. One that he'll find very soon.
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Please when he reaches his breaking point make him take a break from the ponies for a short time or something.
He jerked back a bit. “Really? You don’t want to see the square dancing area? Or the memorial? Or the horse drawn horse drawn carriages?”
I'll assume the repeat horse drawn was intentional?
“Correct. I’m fucking Samson.”
Where's Delilah?
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Nav learns from the mistakes of others. He ain't giving his super powers away.
1942542 everyone should learn from the mistakes of others.
History is not there for us to study and repeat, it is there for us to learn from.
Well that was some common sense, now for your regularly scheduled random shit.
Twilight is a fucking cunt, from before it was just mean normal things she did to Nav. Now she is blowing up shit, insulting professors and making a fool of herself. Sorry twilight your name is now cuntlight.
I've enjoyed this, but at chapter 51 I feel like I can't read any more. The lack of happiness, hope and direction in Nav's life is oppressive and it just keeps getting worse. I feel like you're building to something great, but it's coming too slowly and too painfully.
I will say one thing, though, I can easily see how Nav is becoming more and more like Discord. There is almost literally nothing for him in the world anymore.
Literally mere seconds before I read this line I was thinking that the Changelings are reminding me more and more of the Necrons. Awesome.
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And I can smell Discords failure when he realizes humans are much different from him. He strives for chaos, Nav doesn't... Besides all stories have a happy ending, right?
RIGHT?!
2445086 Wrong. There's Chrysalis's pussy!
2445086 Nay, if you're not used to the real world here's a thing you might want to know: Happiness comes with a price, that price is immense amounts of pain, depression hatred and sadness.
I believe there is a small saying.
'If you're always happy, sadness hits you all the harder.'
And there's the opposite.
'If you're always sad, happiness makes it all better'
Yo, baby cakes.
Seriously, nav.
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Yeah, she's too fat to be a baby cake. More like a Southern black woman cake.
3393891red velvet cake. remember horse meet is sweet after all.
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;D
"No one but Celestia" did he still tell her in this version, I am not sure but my gut says no he didn't. I would like to confirm but I haven't finnished reading the rewritten chapter and I can't remember the relevent chapter.
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He did.
"after my past rodeo instincts came back", is this a reference to the sky rodeo?
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Fixed
Not entirely true. while tattoos CAN act as an identifier, i'd say that our faces are our identifiers. unless a person is a twin and they look the same, no two faces are alike. overtime, they change. like the twins can get into an accident and one would be hurt more than the other.
3632214 Incase the concept was lost on you, they meant a mark to identify occupation. Such as the pheremones or cutie marks.
I think you spelled Appaloosa wright, which is ironicly wrong for MLP. Appaloosa is a bread of horse, the town in MLP is Appleloosa, which is suppost to be a pun.
3632214 just like fred weasley and goarge weasley from harry potter u couldnt tell them apart until one of them had there ear blown off
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*breed
So Twilight is like a lumbering Diesel Engine, and Changelings in general are tiny, wimpy looking electric/hybrids, but damn, they can get a lot of juice out of it.
Also, Twilight, this is why Nav doesn't show you anything.
"If I was going to look like a warrior, I wasn’t going to have my ability to fight go unimpeded."
Heheh, nother double negative.
ponies, man...they drive me nuts
So uh...yeah. Guess Nav is extremely prejudiced against diamond dogs. "Oh, one that survived the massacre I initiated. Gotta lock him away and use his body to feed others."
So Nav is turning into an outright asshole, becoming more and more unsympathetic as the story goes on at a pace that can only be called "on purpose", and the pedestal Twilight has put Celestia on is slowly crumbling down more and more.
You see, Twilight, this is why we can't have nice things.
4291730 I'm still on the fact that the dogs are willing to kidnap changelings eggs and raise them to be their slaves, as well as willing to kidnap as many changelings as they want without a second thought. Fault Chrysalis for stealing emotions...
...but don't fault her for being a mother willing to feed her children by any means necessary.
4287404 I believe the phrase is "Confound these ponies, they drive me to drink"
God I went back and read my comment on this chapter and I cringed, I think I actually felt pain when I read it. I was such an idiot back then, and my mental state is so different it's really weird
Haha, bitch.
3393891 pffft, ha. Fucking here in Texas, man. Every time you go our there's one.
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Congrats good sir, you have made me hate ponies more than I thought possible. I am actually trembling with rage at how perfectly you have captured the major annoyances that are Twilight Sparkle and her fucktard pals, not to mention Navs rage and sorrow. This is an amazing story.
Argh!!! I don't know who to root for!
I want to root for Nav, but, I don't know if he will change too much for my liking. I want to root for ponies but they are slowly but surely show their...Dark Side of The Force..Ahem... I want to root for Discord but his moral is alien [not good, evil nor neutral (or blue and orange morality)] and him being overpowered kill it for me...I want to root Taya but I don't know if she will lose herself making it not worth the effort...
Ah well, continue reading.
4291730 The case was that said diamond dog had assaulted (a) citizen(s)of another nation on what we can only assume are false grounds, feel free to throw your hate at me, I'll just quote Hitler or Osama whenever you do.
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Nav has a rubber band in his hair, how come the scientists needed rubber?
Yes, I'm a terrible person, I complained because of two words.
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Rubber band, scrunchy, whatever.