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An update! Yeehaw.
New chapter up? 41k words? Good thing it's Quarantine season!
just saw the chapter size the wait was worth it.
200 freaking chapters, just shy of 3 million words, and has been going on since 2012?
That's...honestly intimidating, and quite impressive too.
Just wondering if this awe-inspiring behemoth will ever actually get a green Complete tag...
Why are you making this story go on for so long? No story should be this long. Just end it already!
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he will just let him figure out a good way to end it.
Havent read the newest chapter yet but gonna mention theres whole stories that never reached 50k on this site and this monster just yeeted one chapter on us at 41k kudos my friend kudos.
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You're objectively wrong. I don't even NEED to explain why.
It's 2am, I just finished reading through the chapter were Nav and Twilight got trapped in Athenas book for the first time. DUDE, WHAT! IM READING THIS!
Emotions... I remember.
My only complaint is that because this chapter was so long, I went through all 20 days of Ayreon The Human Equation twice while reading it.
Been getting that feeling again for the last few days. That feeling that a new chapter was due out.
I get the sense that the air elemental is starting to have an effect on Pinkie. And that you've been getting antsy to get the Coma Arc over with. And also that you've been playing a lot of Skyrim or Oblivion recently.
It's been a good arc, though. Reminded me of tons of things I've forgotten over the years (or maybe sometimes just brought me up to speed on things that were inserted with the rewrites) and feels like it moved a lot of plot points forward. Plot points that, in some cases, seemed to be puttering a bit.
And that's why Cadance is the best horse. Smart, cute and quite possibly the only mostly sane one in the species.
Also I've given up on fighting my brain on picturing Taya as Cozy Glow. It's just not a battle I can win.
41k words, and i devoured them in less than half an hour. Oomph. Amazing work, may this story continue forever!
THE TAREPE IS OVER NOW FOR THE CHANGE
So, is this what we should consider the start of Nav's arc? And it only took 199 chapters, glory be! I hope the following chapter is as spicy as I think it will be. Another great work in what I consider an art-form all its own. Can't wait for 200.
That was an ordeal. I think it is safe to say this arc has come to an end. It took me almost two and a half hours to read this chapter. It was a marathon. And still, for some reason, I still want more. How much of a masochist am I?
~KBO.
So the coma is finally done, I somehow managed to enjoy the entire coma arc while hoping it would end soon only to realize that there's a shit tun of story written up to this point that needed to gone through.
Sooooo Whens' the next chapter?
Yesssssssssssss~
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It's going on so long because it's still a magnificent story. Why are you complaining despite the fact that the story doesn't have the feeling going on for the sake of going on. Nav's journey isn't finished yet and to have a rushed and sloppy ending would be a crime against this epic. So cool your jets and enjoy the fact that we still seem to have a lot of Nav time to come.
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It will certainly be a day to remember if that does occur I'm sure.
Time for Nav to wake up to his new and improved body!!!! Which may or may not be extra twisted due to growing new parts she did not want at all...hrm. Well at least she got some good introspection done!!!
Hey @whatmustido, don't see you participating in the comments and not sure if you like to discuss the story down in these comments or not, but I had a question in mind so I figure I'd throw it out there.
How much of this story do you have planned in advance, not just now but in general as you've been writing it? It's so huge I can't imagine you had it planned out in anything other than the vaguest ideas when you started. Did you have an (even vague) ending in mind then or have you only figured that out as you went along? How far ahead do you have story events concretely planned now?
I do recall you've gone back and rewritten some chapters to retcon some things. So I guess you have changed some story details after the fact to have had to have done that. Have you done this in cases that didn't require a rewrite (eg something you had in mind that you didn't write down but planned to call back to later, but then changed your mind later well after publishing the chapter but it didn't need changes)?
In this chapter we see what sort of decisions Aqua influenced. Did you consciously write the story that way at the time? Or did you decide later these decisions were out of character and retconned Aqua to make them?
The memories we see from others POVs, did you already know the characters were doing these things when you wrote out the main chapters they take place alongside, or did you just go back for the coma and write those scenes to bridge things together or explain plot holes?
Great work either way, must have been a pain to write the whole coma having to go back and decide what to include (unless you had it planned in advance for a while!). It was interesting, but I'm glad we're getting out of it back to advancing the story.
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Why in the fuck do you want this to end, hell especially now. The reason why everyone is calling you a moron is because the fact is the story isnt stale nor is it boring nor is it retreading ground it already went through, and most importantly it just set up a ton of new interesting issues that need to be dealt with and will be entertaining to see how that goes down. Tldr: your a idiot and deserve all the comments your gonna be getting and have already gotten
I am so buying a copy of this book (books?) if it finally does come to print. That way I won't ever have to rely on needing the internet or power to enjoy this amazing story!
I’m speechless, the idea of Nav using magic, bringing Humans back, advancing technology, fixing Nav, Giving him a kingdom, and all his relationship being affected either positively or negatively is just too much. At the beginning of the coma I wasn’t sure if this was a good idea writer wise, for a moment I thought you just wanted some filler, rewriting some old chapters while you got some break time, but boy how wrong I was, and I apologize for it. I can say that the coma was simply incredible. I thought the story had already reached it’s prime but you prove me wrong with each arc. I thank you for putting such work and dedication into a project which is free for everyone but you, you alone keep me coming back to this site and fandom again and again.
Nice ending to this scene. I always look forward to reading your new chapters when they come out!
were finally free from recap hell.
im joking by the way :X
but we can finally see changes and move forward to. im not sure how long this story plans on being but i say we're 60-70% done right?
feels like we have an end game coming up.
Finally out of the coma well I wonder what will happen next
Well.
On the one hand, glad the Recap episodes are over.
Don't get me wrong, great exposition, excellent Moral coverage (if you know what you're looking for), just awesome excellentness all around really.
But it will be good to have Nav back in the world, and DOING again.
You are a master of words. I am not, so I can't even hope to cover it, but this story, especially the recap with Nav dealing with everything, is amazing.
Tartarus next, right?
Hopefully some fun Shenanigans before hand though, considering how much heavy shit Nav (and the people reading this, who Nav is TOTALLY GOING TO KILL! MYSELF INCLUDED!) has had to wade through to get some Sanity Points back.
Keep being 20% more awesome!
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You see Cozy Glow.
For some reason I keep getting it into my head that she's GREEN, yet it's been mentioned multiple times that she's..... purple? Shit, I still keep thinking GREEN! Like Evergreen Pines Green.
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It's the personality. Previously I struggled with picturing her as something akin to Diamond Tiara with her hair down. But then Cozy Glow came along, and she IS Taya sans Taya's love for her mother and dwindling capacity for empathy.
And there goes an hour and a half of sleep I should have gotten. Thanks!
Now we wait again
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Whatmustido you are a god xD
It LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVES!
Yeah that spell needs more use.
I felt that chapter was a bit longer than usual.
Then I saw it was double.
Fuck me I love this story.
Reaching this bit just after reading the latest chapter of Sunsets Isekai, where she hooks up with SG-1, is like reading opposite sviewpoints of th same scene.
If Hera has such goddess power, shouldnt she be waiting for Nav the next time to ask or demans about his voyerisation of them talking? For those who say this cant happen, even Doctor Anonymous would be able to describe in detail just how, and show how it links into teh time travel loop mechanism.
Next up, the Coma Recap Chapter for the Recap Coma?
I Love You, Thank you for this gift!!
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Fair enough lol
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I sorta imagine the kid from that one buck ball episode in season 9 to be what taya looks like, that filly even has the same bratty attitude
FINELY he's out of the coma, now that the recap is over we can get back to the real story!~
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In words of the great whatmustido.
NEVER!!!~~
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When I first started, I didn't have much planned. You can tell by how much it meandered. This story is basically an experiment in writing for me and when I'm done, I hope to write something I can actually sell. I started actually planning things around when Nav meets Flo. Even now, most of the plans I write are basic plot outlines of things that I intend to happen. When it comes to actual details, I fill those in at the time I write. At this point, the vast majority of it is planned out and just requires execution.
I intended for the coma chapters to accomplish two things. First, to act as a recap since this story is huge and a bunch of stuff happened. Second, to give Nav more perspectives to help her change. At the time I was writing the original chapters, I wasn't planning a recap like this, so none of the scenes in the coma were originally intended. That said, I did my best to work things in to seem chronologically consistent.
Aside from the major rewrite I did a while back, I haven't changed anything major. There are several things I'd like to change given the chance, but doing so would require more rewriting than it's worth.
When Aqua was in Nav, I purposefully did have Nav do some OOC things. That said, I didn't decide which I would include as things Aqua caused until I actually got to that section in the coma. The only two definite ones were making Luna a vassal and letting Taya become an eternafilly.
Things are finally looking up for Navarone. I'm looking forward to seeing what she'll do now that she's a more complete person.
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From memory, the rewrite was only really involved the beginning through to the second Egypt trip where he meet Taya (about 20 chapters). He also changed his 'timber dog' so it didn't come on his trip with him, because whatmustido kept forgetting about him and had to keep rewriting bits of chapters to include his pup. I think I've still got a copy of the story before the rewrite laying around somewhere.
......glorious I didn’t even notice how long the chapter was because it was that engaging
I knew it. I called it from the beginning of this Arc. 10 chapters of coma to put Navs glorious return for chapter 200.
This has been such a wild ride Whatmustido. The amount of care and attention to detail that you have and continue to put into this story is amazing. Almost 3 million words. I hope you are proud of the fantastic adventure you have written, because you absolutely should be. I am so excited to be able to buy a physical copy of this story. I'm just sad it can't be truly published due to the fact that it's a fanfic. This story is a million times better than so much of what's out there.
We're in the endgame now boys, and i can't wait to see the coming arcs.
Damn bro, this chapter is the length of a small book by itself. I'm glad I chose to reread this entire fix for the third time.
Immensely gratifying read.
Just finished reading. This chapter was an excellent finisher for the coma! So much to look forward to. I'm thoroughly impressed by how you wrote this section of the story.
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Speaking of Taya, I was wondering something. Could one of the water elementals (likely Flo), help Taya continue to develop mentally? Given they can apparently erase and remake personalities, couldn't having one in Taya over a prolonged period of time help her mind continue to develop in the correct ways for mental maturation? So at least mentally she's not stuck as an eternafilly (even if she would remain one physically)? The elementals probably have sufficient knowledge to simulate the mental maturation of the mind if her body won't do it willingly on it's own.
That was a much needed, satisfying read. I am pleased with the conclusions Nav has reached. I really do think this coma helped her... though I'm half dreading what Hera has likely done to Nav's body... and how everyone else is going to react when they see Nave emerge from that book!
Thanks for the mega-chapter. Looking forward to the next!