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Holy shit... longest story on the site?
"Oh hey, look at this story. The description makes it sound interesting, views/votes tell me it must be half decent. Now I wonder how lo-"
HOLY SHIT!
Yay for another new chapter! I've missed this story a lot. Had to re-read it a few times while I waited. But who cares? Yay for story!
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Eeeyup.
Magiguard..... or Robocop?
EDIT: *Facepalm* I hadn't read the 'feast' scene yet.
♫ Du'da'du'da'dum Inspector Magic du'da'du'da'dum'da'daaaaa! ♪
The penis, man's worse enemy.
Did you purposefully leave up the comments on the end there?
Funny to see some interactions between you people behind the scenes of this great story.
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I always fucking forget those. Every time.
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And best friend.
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You know the Robocop statue they put in Detroit? Yeah...
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This chapter took way too long. I hated it. Everything about it.
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That's a common reaction. It starts pretty bad and gets better.
2757861 They were hilarious though
Even if this chapter wasn't exactly a delight for you to write, this was an absolute blast to read. Not only was it plenty entertaining to see Nav wreck that sleazeball, it was great seeing Rarity given some perspective on what she did all those years ago. Is it bad that I kind of want to see a complete retelling of the first day from Rarity's perspective?
i love this story it really well done and I reallly like discord GAME
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I'm intrigued by the description, now I'm just trying to figure out how I'd ever make it to the end of such a mammoth tale!
Definitely going in my Read Later, and maybe I'll manage to finish it someday this century!
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You can see all the comments on my chapters up from seventy-something if you click on the gdocs link I leave in the author notes.
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My original plan was a complete split perspective, detailing each ones day and then go into more detail later. However, I just couldn't think of anything for Ravarone to do. Navity was easier, but even then I had to skip a lot of it just because I couldn't make myself write it. That's why so much of this chapter is barebones.
Been reading this for a month on my Nook. It updates every couple of weeks, meaning I have to update the version on my Nook. Lol. Anyway, monor complaints aside, this is an AMAZING story with a ton of depth and character development. I really reallllly like Navarone, he reminds me alot of Karon from Machinations of A Trickster by Deviance. And I'm pretty sure they would make a good team. I will continue to read this, and hopefuly finish it :) thanks for being such an awesome and dedicated author whatmustido. Good luck to you in the future, and I hope there is a sequel :D
yup. and its ongoing.
Damn, what an interesting life Nav lives eh? Also, it's still hilarious how people keep comparing Detroit to a apocalyptic wasteland. It ain't that bad really, its just people's preconception of what a city in the United States should be like.
I'll always read this story, I don't care how much I don't care about Nav. I always will.
You are Rarity, you can't see magic...
Nav still knows how to deal with dreams, even in Rarity body. Shouldn't be Luna guarding dreams somewhere near? Robocop really?
just some math here
avarage reading speed is 250 wpm
there are 1,138,928 words in this story SO FAR
thats 4,555.7 minutes of reading, which is the equivalent of 76 hours of reading...
if someone were to read this in one go, it would take them...over three days of straight reading if they never stopped and stayed at the same reading speed for the entire duration from chapter 1 all the way to now, at chapter 85...
thats missing out on roughly...27ish hours of sleep depending if you actually for 9 hours each night
one person would probably read anywhere from 5-15 chapters at a time which would take roughly that entire night considering its THIS story...
dayum...not even twi would be able to read this behemoth in one go
Are you going to turn this into a book? I would love a hard copy!
Interesting chapter, will that be the last we see of magiguard, I hope to see a small showdown in the near future.
-Mis
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I knew I was going to fuck up somewhere. And Nav knows how to deal with dreams, but he doesn't know how to actually do it without Flo's help. Remember, he learned how to do it in a passive, peaceful place with Flo guarding his mind the entire time. In the mire and sludge that is his night terrors, there's only so much he can do himself.
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This probably will be the last of him, yes.
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That's too bad, at least we have more Navarone!
-Mis
Every time..... Every. Damn. Time!
Huh, now I wonder how Rarity, having seen a glimpse of the true nature of Celestia, is going to use that information....
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You saying that for two +++ months he is still can't do a f*** in dreams?
Don't talk to your daddy like that...
Reactor? I have to question whether or not you actually researched this?
Why is it that when I read 17k words of this story it takes 40 minutes but feels like only 10 minutes, but with other stories with about 2000 words a chapter it feels like they take 15 minutes to read?!?? Is you story so intertaining that times dilation seems to take place?
2758543 nope, because for getting out of his own dream, he would need to concentrate, and that is impossible to do in a nightmare.
I like how people just skip to the latest chapter just to comment on how long it is.
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He can. But it doesn't help him when he can barely realize that he's in a dream. Remember, he never learned how to do it himself, just with Flo's help. He'll be sure to learn how to do it after this.
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That was the first word that came to my mind. It wasn't the right word, I know.
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When you go to a story's front page and just leave a comment, it comments on the latest chapter.
2758286 you are basing that on averages i can tell you personally i have read from beginning till the chapter before on this story in one 36 hour power binge i slept for 14 hours afterwords but i did it XD. However on average yes that would be about the time it takes of one person to read thankfully I have the gift of slight madness and a crap ton of energy drinks. All in all though this is to whatmustido I loved this chapter because of the poetic justice givin to rarity albeit late, so bravo good sir bravo! Can't wait for the next chapter now and as always love the story.
The lovable scoundrel,
Eve
So now Celestia rapes nav. Even If it wasn't him in the body, that doesn't mean he will be ok with it. Consequences?
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That wouldn't have been rape if it had been Nav, in my mind. Remember, Celestia and Nav had a working fuckbuddy relationship. Nav would have known immediately from the letter that Celestia sent that she was looking for sex. Agreeing to it would have been tantamount to consent. And the 'headache' thing isn't that much of an excuse as far as both of them were concerned. If Nav didn't want something, he would have said up front that he didn't want it. It's only rape when you throw in somebody who didn't know the relationship they had and didn't know how to read between the lines—or say no.
*Sees DoaM updated*
"Yes!"
*Reaches the end of the chapter*
"... And it's gone."
Nav should have done more to the governor.
I was honestly expecting Detrot to be more exciting, but meh.
Just got the notification for this at 4:54am. Thanks, whatmustido, I was just planning on going to sleep. :l
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You're welcome.
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It was supposed to be more, but I couldn't make myself write anything more. This chapter was just... terrible. God, it was awful. Absolutely awful. I hated it.
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If you can tell me an easy way to double space all the paragraphs, let me know. I'm not going to do it manually and it didn't copy the formatting over from gdocs or from microsoft word.
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There wasn't anything else he could do. He isn't familiar with the body and he didn't have many spells. He wouldn't want to risk getting possibly hurt.
2757861 Great chapter. Too bad it was a pain to write,I (and everyone else, probably) would have liked more details on their days. O well, it was great anyway, and not forcing yourself to work on this one means that the next one gets done sooner right?(I hope you like the next one better, it's neither fun nor fair if you write without liking it)
2757921 those two together would not end well. No place in the multiverse would be safe, and no mare unscrewed.
Despite the fact that you didn't enjoy writing this chapter, I appreciate it that you resolved this plot thread that was mentioned way the hell back in Chapter Thirty-Six.
Seriously, this now-resolved plot thread was the one thing in this story that bugged the hell out of me.
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I've been thinking about it for a while. I needed filler, so I finally decided to try it.
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I'm hoping the next chapter will be easier. I'm thinking shit will go down, since it'll be Luna's party and the last chance for her to attempt to get him back.
2759920 All I can say is good luck, and have fun, I'm curious as to what happens next.
~N
I want more Celestia+Nav and maybe Pinkie+Nav! =p
Damn, I wanted to see a Nav/Cadance/Shining Armor threesome, not a Nav/Bon Bon/Lyra threesome....... although...... why not have both?!
And Rarity's view of the princess plummeted down, down, down. Actually hoped Luna had found Navi(Rarity) that would have been fun.
I'm in Florida. It's usually warm in December... Except during the last half.
Sorry you don't like your own chapter... Hold on...When was Nav in Taya's Body? ... Must have been a while... Because I remember Nav being returned to youth briefly, but not that...
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As a whole. Continuous reading of all story took personally from me 5 days.
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http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45860/47/diaries-of-a-madman/chapter-fortyfiverewards-and-more-spells