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Fun Fact: Originally, this chapter was a paragraph long and it had a happy ending, not a sad ending. My prereaders complained and they pointed out that my personal history got involved with Navarone's relationship and that I needed to put on the rose-tinted glasses of someone that hasn't had only abusive relationships in the past. So I looked further into some of Luna's interactions with Nav and realized how I wrote her. This chapter is the result of what I discovered.
Element of Patience is Navi. She abused him three times before he called it quits.
This is their breakup song.
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He was willing to forgive so much because she was in Estrus. But there's only so much a guy can take before he says fuck it.
Clop... clop everywhere
So I skimmed through the sex part... I personally think he would be a lot more pissed. After all he blew off PinkiePie without batting an eyelash, using the whole "friends betray me all the time" reason. So, for physically and mentally being scared, I would think he would be a tab bit more pissed.
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That's understandable. The reason he's not is because he's too damaged to really care anymore. He had high hopes, but at this point he probably would have been more surprised for it to end well than for it to go south. He's been burnt too many times.
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Quite disappointing, if I was him I would use my cash to fund a war against equestria or something. I'm also lucky I'm not him, because I would have most likely lost it at the first rape and killed a few peo- er ponies. After this chapter I feel that never has the need to slap a bitch been greater.
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I like what you discoverd about Luna, I notice her dominant necesity over Nav after the last sex scene betwene them, if this chapter finished happy im sure it would have gone ugly.
Still love the well though out chapters.
It sure is a Fun Fact.
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Unfortunately, he doesn't have the chance to yell at one of the princesses for several more chapters. When he does, he yells at Celestia. It's a few more chapters until he really loses it. I really understand what you mean about how badly you wants to slap a bitch, because if I was him I would feel the same need. However, we have yet to learn anything about Navarone's life on Earth. When we do, we might just see a few reasons why he's like this.
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Nav is okay with being dominated, as long as it isn't something he doesn't want. He has boundaries that he does not want crossed, same as anyone. As long as they aren't crossed, he's all fine and dandy. Luna, however, doesn't have any dom practice. She's new at it and she goes way too far way too fast.
I find it sad that the moment he tells a couple of his friends that is dating Luna it completely falls apart. It's like he can't have nice things. If Cadance ever finds out she will never let him go until she fixes him. He's going to be running the moment he sees her.
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Come on, man, don't spoil it for everyone else.
Spoil what?
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Exactly.
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I'm guessing nav is gonna have problems with the princess of love in the near future? Also, why the hell do those stones still exist? Personally they would terrify me, if I was nav I would do all in my power to destroy them.
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They will have a use that isn't sex. Eventually. Blame those perverted mares; they're the ones that decided to use them like that.
And I will neither confirm nor deny the love princess problems.
You took out the fairy tale ending out and replaced it with a big peace of hard cold reality. Three chance and all of them got blown, that has got be some kind of record. The torture and blood I did not see coming, it's like it came out nowhere. How the hell is he still standing? The mental trauma should have left him a vegetable or nervous wreak. Now I understand what you meant by Cadance involvement in the future. I like the two guard scene, did he win respect points for beating them?
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Nightmare Moon still holds some sway in Luna's mind. It's not much, but it's enough to do stuff like that. Especially during Estrus, when her reasoning was low and her hormones were high.
And no, the guards were just too embarrassed to mention to the princess how he kicked their asses.
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I am guessing that this will eventually come back with him having to fight more guards or proving himself or something. THe night guard has his back, but the solar might have issues. Unless he puts all that money to good use with charities and all that.
Are you sure Nav isn't corrupting their world just by existing? Because I feel the few episodes of MLP I have watched weren't anything like this! (Sarcasm + rhetorical)
I can't even begin to think of any useful use for those godless stones. My position can somewhat be described by the following images.
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THEY MUST BE DESTROYED, THE GODS DEMAND IT!
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Oh yeah. There's something coming up soonish that will pit him against the day guards. It'll be fun.
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Navarone himself has said that he thinks that just by being there, he's corrupting the world. He mentions how he's a bad influence on a lot of the ponies. He is correct in that assessment.
This story is too good to stop reading, the realism is so surreal and the sarcasm is ridiculous though i'm starting to feel that Nav was falling apart before he came to Equestria and that his past is really dark...Can't help but feel sympathy for poor Nav
1357088 First and Last Picture was freaking awesome, tell me where to find them.
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Um, if you're asking for the original website, I don't really think I could tell you because I've been browsing the internet for a long time. If you mean the source, then the second picture is from "The Simpsons". More specifically, the second episode of season 8 "You Only Move Twice".
1360031 I still like the first picture, naked in the shower holding a rifle trying to move away. Seems like me when the zombies rise when I am taking a shit. Worst way to die, on the crapper.
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About the stones, right there they are easy to use in a pinch to change someone's identity.
They cant get you when the description of the criminal says its a female, and you are male.
Maybe a way to stir up trouble with reluctant noble. Make them switch in their sleep or whatever, they wake up confused as hell and you have the "cure" for a price.
The stones have big potential as one of the world's greatest prank/party tool.
Gender switch a monster to change behavior and/or create confusion when you need it.
Im sure there could be some sort of medical application for these things, i just don't see it.
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The main medical application I can see is free abortions. Sure the ponies don't need it; horses can automatically abort their fetuses. But every other race could use it. I guess it could also be used to get rid of cancer that's on a gender specific body part.
Not sure how much he is really corrupting them given that ponies are xenophobic to the extreme and not as innocent that they claim to be. The way you've set up this world is that they're really just ignorant thanks to their Princesses trying to shelter them from a hard life. The ponies that have lived a hard cruel life are little human in how that act really.
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And I still bloody think those things should be destroyed, like the unholy demon filled stones they are.
if instead of it, I believe.
Weakly, instead of weakling
1 do to many?
anymore supposed to be 1 word here, or am I wrong?
suggest instead of suggestion?
Btw, I feel a bit like a dick always posting these little things. Tell me if you want me to stop with it
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Why would I want you to stop? What kind of writer wouldn't want his work to be the best it can be? If you see a mistake I've made, post it and I'll fix it.
Finally!!!! holy crap thank you sir/miss for doing that I mean its horrible whats happened to Nave but atleast the abuse is at an end...for now
so yeah...chrysalis anyone?, she seems the less abusive and all her odd quirks are either not aimed at him or are adorable (filly chryssie, bed time story's),
discord is either pissing himself laughing or huddled in a corner eating ice-cream and getting trixie to wipe his memory
Wow, so that was it huh? All things it wasn't so bad, I don't know if you edited out the details of Luna's horrible gore fetish... but either way it got the point across without being overly gruesome. Which I'm actually surprised by considering the rest of the story, I would have expected you to go into full detail. In fact I'm also a bit disappointed that you didn't... all that build up for nothing
I am also extremely surprised at how well Nav took it. I would have expected i to be more... unforgiving I guess.
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If you really want to read it, I actually did write it. You just have to download the entire thing to get it: http://pastebin.com/KD2TFT0Z
I didn't want to put it on fimfic because I didn't want to add the gore tag.
I knew you wouldn't just leave the good parts out... I mean I've come this far in the story, why should I deny myself the darkest moments that it has to offer? Assuming of course that this the darkest moment. But that is a large download for someone who operates by phone alone...
Why not add the gore tag, the story is gory enough as it is....
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If you operate by phone alone it might be easier to just download it. I don't think fimfic has a mobile page, so if you download it you won't have to load pictures every single time.
How much data is it? I don't want to dl excessive amounts. I have unlimited data, but my SD card is almost full...
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pdf is ten megs, rtf is seven.
Nav theres 2 sides to every coin...er wait... equestria... yes that's it equestria you just ended on the wrong side my boy, the side that was against the muddy ground being trampled by people for years before someone finally decided to pick up just to be thrown back down like a broken rag doll.
I'm not even a tiny bit happy. I really wished it had gotten off, this is the first story where Luna gets somebody and she loses him. Really sad if you think about it
My legs were crossed so tightly that by the time I got to the good ol' watersports and bloodbath... I think I accidentally made myself female.
1352267 So you have had abusive relationships?
Does this mean pinkie has a chance now :D I wub pinkie she's awesome :) (even if pinkameena is psychotic :D )
2791428>>2791428>>2791428 a fuck pinkie cuz she is just annoying (in nav's perspective) and if that does happen I'm prolly gonna lie down and scream.... Also god.... I hope Luna and nav get together again... Eventually :/ .... It was a cute couple to say the least....
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I reckon I could've made the enire week in his shoes... Using your own blood as a sexual lubricant(likely for hiself, ouch) is a tall order indeed... But pain reminds we're still alive and gore is just red liquid and holes and slashes.
2392065 If she did that to me...
She would be dead.
SHE.
WOULD.
BE.
DEAD.
This is the part of me I fear, the part that scares me from falling asleep, the part I keep running from no matter the cost.
I don't look in mirrors anymore because I know that it won't be me that stares back, it'll be... Her...
If you wounder who 'Her' is, she's the... The wicked part of me, I keep her locked away and hide the key.
She makes it out somtimes, under pain, torture, fear, anger, all strong emotions.
I fear myself, silly isn't it? I fear the part of myself that have saved my life one too many times, she's... Dangerous. I can't kill myself, she stops that.
I have a feeling this curse will never lift, but if Luna ever considered doing something like that against me, sadness, depression, hate, anger, sorrow - All of them, they would just overwhelm and she would take over.
Nothing, and I mean NOTHING escapes my grasp once... She takes over, she's a killing machine! One time a few years ago in school I got picked on, i'm usually quite okey with that, I mean - Words don't hurt.
That was until the one that did it hit my friend in the gut, I just got completly overthrown with rage and... I.... I did something terrible.
Navarone, one would say that he dosen't have this... Personality inside himself, but we all do, deep inside, hidden in either emotions or a lack of them.
But when she brokes out, well 'It' since I doubt it's female for them all, there will be bloodshed.
The world is dangerous, even if you're alone, having something force your actions in blind emotions are frightening, and dangerous too, chances are that Luna wouldn't even have a horn if Navarone let his inner demon out.
3027156 There are not words in this world with more truth than that.
I get the feeling all this abuse and shit comes from good old Discord, after all, Trixie DID say that the elements were corrupted. That would explain the crazyass shit the mane 6 pulled off.
This whole world is going to hell in a wicker basket and the patchwork freak is laughing in the background. Somebody should punch his other tooth.
3027156 I find your inner fear rather adorable.
*reading* oh, up to the clop...... EH, lets not skip it this ONE TIME *after reading* ........ of all the times, I picked to read the clop..... I get the domination scenes...........