How do you write so quickly?

My favorite Lord of Chaos is Q.

Amazing like always. Man, you have the best story ever like I always look forward to you posting.

Well that was some great character development and you said you were bad at it. silly

Yay! An update!

This would be interesting to see what will happen next afterwards.

Is it so wrong that the implication of Twist sending Nav candies that have been in her vag entertained me so much?

So how far into the storyline do you think you are by now? Seems like you've got tons of time left unless you start doing some major time skipping.

"It makes you wonder if he is going to write a sequel story for his travels into the unknown."
"Hopefully the author makes the story at least twice as long as this one, he knows how add his slice of life if I do say so myself.
"What I can't wait for is Nav to learn more about discord. If he founds the truth about it all I think I might count it as the most......how about I just say 'Shock and Awe' scene this story will have to offer."
"Too true mate, too true. But if it does go in that direction than the story will be finished by late 2014 not to particularly bash on your story and all it has good pacing and all but still, some are less patient than others."

Yay, Nav is growing into a not as terrible father!

-Mis

2478343 I have no idea how he does it, but you won't find me complaining about it!

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"Depends on how you mean it mate, humorously of sexually."
"I'm just going to assume humorously for my sanity and yours RED.
"Thanks mate."

2478618 Both.

Nav x Twist crack ship.

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"Sorry, Red Sniper is not here now because he is reading a guide to understanding idiots for idiots. No it's not about you, promise!"

Spike getting shot down like that? Bad.

Spike finally losing interest in Rarity? Good.

Spike getting laid by an experienced changeling maid? Awesome.

Good for you, little buddy!

Nav is such a boss, chilling with a changling while eating sex candy

And curse you, updating in the middle of the night, i have to be up for college in an hour ....

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT! WOOHOO!!

Meh chapter... I have to ask though, have you actually read the books you've mentioned in your story?

.....ok eww......GAH I TASTE CANDY CANE!!!
....someone finally making spike into the bad-ass he was meant to be THANK YOU SIR!!/

Oh dear God I wish these came out twice a week or something. Though I'd probably cream myself if that happened.

Another freaking awesome chapter :) Keep up the good work!

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He's only been trying to hook them up forever.
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I wish they did, too. The next chapter might not take as long, given that it's already about halfway finished.
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What's wrong with some nice candy?
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I've read most of them. I haven't read The Prince yet, though. And yeah, I know this wasn't a good one. I don't much care for slice of life. That's what you guys voted, though.
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I updated around six or seven for me.
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I had a number of people telling me that he needed to spend more time with her. This was the result.
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No clue. I wish I knew. We're finally getting places, though.
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It's a little messed up, yeah. But it's also amusing, so it's okay.
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I have a bunch of people helping me write by prereading and giving suggestions. They helped a lot.
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What do you mean, quickly? This update took a while.

Bravo, sir, bravo.

This is definately one of my favorite stories, and it's close to being up there with Peroth's Growing Pains. (if you havn't read that one i recommend it)

Unfortunately, there are far too few stories that go on this long, and have such a great story with entertaining characters. Bravo again.

Finally Nav is getting some much needed character development and the manner in which it happened was awesome.
I also love the Discord parts and how the whole situation slowly slides out of his control.

Gah, if only you would update this story quicker. But I suppose I rather have quality over quantity.
Then again, you are doing over 10k words a chapter. So I suppose I'm getting both.
But the fuck do I know? I wrote maybe 1k words a chapter if I'm lucky.
So enough of my rambling...
This chapter was 'ight. Between borderline pedophilia with te candy, Spike getting some pussy pot pie, and Nav getting better, it held me content. :P
But good job fitting about a month of a time span in one chapter. Didn't leave much out.
Last thing (like you care. 'Cause ya don't probably.) I feel sad for Taya. Make her happier. Nuw. NUW.

2479010 9 days to update, not bad at all dude. It was really a filler chapter, but this story needed more of them to hash out his interactions with others, can't be going on an adventure every single chapter now!

Is Cadance still hiding away in Nav's home, thought by now she would have left?

Navi's relationship with his daughter has leveled up!
Spike has leveled up! Shame on you Rarity.
I know Discord intended to have Navi corrupt everyone around him, but now it is getting to the point were the changes he makes are actually counterproductive to Discord a lot more frequently.

Finally some realistic character development! That was a very satisfying chapter. Now I just have to find out what to do and read for the next 16 hours I'll be awake! And its only midnight! IF ANYONE HAS ANYTHING ELSE TO SAY (such as where I can find great HIE gb's) PLEASE SEND IT TO ME IN AN EMAIL! NOW CLASS DISMISSED! (Royal capslock is such fun!)

2479010 Machiavelli is a great writer!

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She's still there because I have her in mind for a single scene that's coming up in a chapter or two. After that, she'll probably leave. Season three content is coming relatively soon, and she needs to be in position for it. And it was less than nine days, because I had to make the poll. This probably took four or five days to write up. I already have around six thousand words for the next chapter because it was halfway done before I started this one.
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Out of his control? My good sir, I believe you forget Discord's name. Things falling 'out of his control' is a good thing for one with the name of chaos.
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It's not really pedofoalia. Twist has had her cutie mark for some time, which means she goes into estrus. She's old enough. And there ain't nothing too bad about having short chapters. I just prefer to make them long so I have less of them. Just imagine how many chapters I'd have if each of mine were a thousand words long.
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Rarity wasn't really interested in Spike. There's no real problem with that. But assuming he was gay was just a little bit too much. Still, it was nice of her to offer to help him, I guess. And again, don't assume that Discord doesn't know what he's doing...
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I have a lot of stories, but most of it is greentext.
You like humor, http://pastebin.com/u/JazzTeeth
Romance: http://pastebin.com/u/Leucine
Military/adventure: http://pastebin.com/u/PonyAirman
Gay Spike: http://pastebin.com/u/SitOnBooks
Brutal rape: http://pastebin.com/u/Uncle_Brainhorn
Cute slice of life romance: http://pastebin.com/u/Crimson-Devil
Bored and want to find a random: http://pastebin.com/xGf9RcL9

2479436 Well it doesn't really matter if you include foalcon or not in your story. One thing I like about this story is that you're not afraid to include different genres so far

2479326 To think, soon Discord might try to honestly off Navi... Imagine how fucked up it would be if Discord manipulated Taya into doing it...

Clarify please, Author... How old is Spike in your frame of mind? Like 15 or so?

2479436 Thanks Man....now I finally have stuff to read!!! But just one more question...on the stories that you led me to...Where do I start? Top or Bottom? *Goddamnit Moment* No innuendo please? And if you could somehow help out with a story That I'm writing/typing that would be really appreciated?

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I leave ages in this story extremely vague on purpose. There's a reason no one has ever told Navarone how old anyone else is. In my mind, Spike is around the age of Pinkie and the others at this point, due to his different dragon aging. He's about as tall as they are, too.
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I would not mind writing it, personally, but Nav would mind very much doing it. It's one thing to eat her candy, it's another thing to eat her candyvag.
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Most of those lists go from bottom to top, meaning the older chapters are on the bottom and the newer chapters are on the top. Jazzteeth does mostly oneshots, while the other people have actual stories. Just look at the names of the chapters to judge. The masterlist is just an alphabetical list of writers. Some are better than others.
And what kind of help are you looking for? I'm usually pretty decent at finding grammar mistakes and such, but I'm also an asshole when it comes to proofing. I've made writers quit before. If you want story ideas: http://pastebin.com/5kbQjMM4
If you want basic stuff: http://pastebin.com/bnMmZ2T3
If you want stuff outside of that, send me a PM and we can talk.

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but I'm also an asshole when it comes to proofing. I've made writers quit before

You sound like a man I need to proof my shit.
Also, thanks for the clarification. I enjoy stories about child fucking just as much as the next guy, but to hear it mentioned by Nav so casually threw me off.

Well, we asked for a character development chapter, and you delivered. It was good, I really enjoyed seeing a bit of happiness in Nav's life. He spent more time with Taya, and came to terms with the fact that he needs to be a better father to her. There were some good therapy sessions with Flo, who is shaping up to be one of my favorite characters in the story... she's like the replacement for Nav's conscience which slowly died as he had to do all those terrible things. Nav eating twist's special sex candy was kinda fucked up... but I couldn't help but laugh when he popped it back in his mouth and said he'd done worse. (I'm probably going to hell for that)
Spike finally getting laid is a plus, maybe that will be a good way to blow off some steam and get rid of some pent up aggression. Lord knows ponies probably aren't prepared to deal with a hormonal adolescent dragon. Also, WTF is up with Rarity telling spike to go get a coltfriend? That shit would really piss me off, were I in his shoes... err, claws I guess, I would have burned that bitch's mane off. You gave me some Rainbow Dash being a bro, which I specifically asked for, and greatly appreciated. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next, and how Nav's relations with his group of friends changes as they head off on the epic journey that lies ahead.

Also, this: “I would have hated growing up without music… Let’s see. You’re black. How about rap?”
“All changelings are black. It is a massive generalization that I would like a certain music based on the color of my carapace.” I DIED laughing when I read that... Does that make me a bad person?

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They tried dealing with a hormonal teenage Spike in the show. It ended very poorly until Rarity teased him into submission like the slut she is. Nav actually stopped that from happening in this one way back when by slapping him in the back of the head and telling him not to be a dick. And yeah, Spike wasn't very happy about her choice of telling him she wasn't interested.
Would you believe that Dash is actually second worst pony for me? In the show, she's such a cunt. Still, she can't be worse than Pinkie, and she's only a little better than Rarity. Still, I figured she could get along easily with Nav since they're both the same kind of asshole.
And yes, you are a bad person for laughing at racism. You're also a bad person for laughing at implied pedophilia. But you're a bad person in good company, because a lot of us are as well.

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He didn't really mention childfucking. He just mentioned that he's done worse things than eating good candy that's been despoiled by a wee little lass.

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Remember, Egypt made Spike hit a growth spurt. He doesn't not look like the pudgy drake from the show.

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You're right about the fact that she's a cunt in the show... and that disappoints me greatly. She is obviously the most awesome pony, but the fact that she has had barely any character development and still acts like a bitch sometimes bothers me. So, if not Rainbow Dash... then who is best pony?

Do you hate Rarity or something? You're kind of- are making her a bitch.

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How is what she did to Spike not in keeping with her character? If she honestly thought he was gay, she would of course turn him down and offer to set him up with someone that she thought was right for him. All the ponies have Spike in their mind as a baby dragon still, not realizing that he ages differently from them. He's bigger, but they assume that it's natural growth since he's a dragon. And he acts rather effeminate in the show and in the background of my story, wearing his frilly pink apron and doing all the things he does, so she assumed he was gay. And then she offered to help him out. She's being generous.
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After season three, there is no best pony. There are only worst ponies. Pinkie is worst, Dash is second worst, Rarity is third worst, Fluttershy is fourth, Twilight fifth, Applejack sixth. Or at least, in terms of the main six. Going outside of those bounds changes a few things, putting Celestia at best horse.

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...I see your point. Spike does need to- er, man up?

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That's the problem with democracies, sometimes the people vote for something that's bad for them. Then again, bad is a relative term.

Well, I'm glad you were willing to do this chapter. Even apart from all the character interaction it was a good breather and let things proceed at a more normal pace instead of a timeskip.

Sex scene between Spike and Doppel when?

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Why would Nav record that in his journal?
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Meh. It just let me do a few things I was planning on doing sooner, like Taya telling Nav what happened and Nav getting off sex.
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I don't really know how character development is bad, but meh.

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Fan service.

I love the way you put comedy in your story.

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Well... that's an interesting way to look at it. So, does that make pinkie your favorite worse pony or Applejack? And Celestia is best horse... yeah, I'll go with that. Though I am a fan of princess Luna myself, but she's not quite horse size yet.

2479734 I was referring to Spike. Which is why I asked for clarification.

2480124 You really think Doppel wouldn't let him watch if he wanted to? Not sure why he WOULD, just sayin...