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After many years you managed to surpass your previous longest chapter. Congrats
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Jinkies!!
No wonder it took so long to read
Are we going to get an actual lemon of that next chapter? The only lewd thing that happened (that wasn't skipped over) during the festival was with Twilight, Cadance, and Shining (and I believe the Griffon was skipped over, might be misremembering). Since we haven't had any lemons with Diamond Dogs in the entirety of this story, could we get an actual sex scene next chapter? At least to cross that species off the list?
I mean... 2.5 million words, and we have clop scenes for just about every race in this story except for Diamond Dogs and... etc. I get that writing sex scenes may not be that exciting, but some of us do enjoy them.
And we missed out on seeing a knot (or anything else) with Phinny.
Most stories are shorter than this one chapter. Bask in your long-going glory.
Bacon.
Huh, didn't actually expect you to upload this chapter so fast. Thought you were gonna just let it stew in the google docs for a month while people read it form the link you put in the previous chapter .-.
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Nah, they're regular pones.
I can’t stand this story. Every chapter seeks to progress plot lines that don’t seem to be even 10 chapters away from concluding. It’s maddening! I need at least 100 more chapters on my desk by Friday. This is even more important than the pictures of Spider-Man!
Dude. I gotta say that right now. This could be the longest story yet. For fucks sakes man this chapter alone had so much in it!! I await your godly gifts with baited breath
I love these chapters that just end with "it was neat," or some such.
For the love of god someone torch Nav and get rid of aqua already!
I realize most of this chapter was typed quite a while ago, but period/turning back to human got addressed in the previous chapter.
Unless..you want readers to assume that Nav turned pony in between the chapters for whatever reason.
Nice touch with Aqua's crap at the end. Not surprised but pleased.
Holy shit...twice in one week?!
I honestly hope Aqua unexists.
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Shite.
Makes the buildup to it better, though.
So we can guess at Aqua's plans now. She obviously plans on marrying Nav to Celestia. And it's possible that one or more of the other Waters may be in on things, or at least she thinks she can recruit them.
I would hope that the first would be enough of a red flag that one or more of Nav's allies will call bullshit...but more likely they're all just going to assume he's been playing them or something. Luna especially I see thinking Nav betrayed her, Twilight too if Aqua's planning on having Nav dump her.
Honestly about the others, it would not surprise me that some of them were actually in on this. At this point I believe their campaign against Flo was just to get her out so they could set him up for something like this.
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Well i mean it passed the lenght of the entire eragon series put together awhile ago so like ya it is the longest story. Im not jokeing i looked up each book and added all the word counts together and this story has about twice the amount of words as the 4 fairly thick books in that series put together
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Fucking damn. Can I get a link to those other stories? I need something to read. I'm dry as shit here.
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No like eragon is a book series like legit book series like Harry potter and actually i think this story is commin up real close to passing the harry potter in word count
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Oh. I see
I swear Aqua is becoming more and more unhinged with every chapter.
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No, thank god.
I'm dying. Help.
Btw, one my favorite chapters so far.
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could have sworn it passed harry potter in word count awhile ago
is this in any way different to the one that was linked in google docs the last chapter? just want to know if I need to re-read it is all
Oh goodness, the rate is picking up again.... AND its a long ass chapter to boot! Awesome!
Also, if Aqua's plan is to have Nav marry Celestia, I can see that EASILY being the breaking point for everyone who knows the both of them. I feel like this is the "rushed" ending for Aqua, however, purely because of how much everyone hates her. I feel like Aqua is more intelligent than that, intelligent enough to analyze the others would immediately recognize Celestia and Navarone wouldn't be caught dead married to eachother now, especially not when he shared the coup with so many.
Plus, publicly reveal Aqua is within him? I just can't believe she's that stupid....
On that same vein, I also don't care.... Because fuck Aqua. Seriously, its going to feel so goddamn cathartic when she gets vaporized. Yea, it sucks it feels rushed, but again, don't care, fuck her with a goddamn glowing spade.
Two chapters in a week? Is it my birthday?
also when Luna saw Nav talking to himself I really think she should have been remembering her time when she was dealing with nightmare moon and she should have asked if he was infected to gauge his reaction
and twilight should have seen Navs eyes turn blue when Aqua was controlling his body in the arena
looks to me that you are going over plot holes just to make sure she gets beaten in the bunker, seriously a lot of stuff has come up that people might find suspicious, and there is no way you can tell me at least TWILIGHT won't be suspicious that he agrees to marry Celestia after how long he has called her evil and shit
serious plot holes are starting to show
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it won't feel cathartic to see a semi-competent villain turn fully insane just to get her out of the way faster, it's like building up this character through dialogue with NPCs, learning how much of a intelligent strategist and monster they are, then when you meet them you manage to easily beat them and move on like it was nothing, it's like someone went out of their way to craft a truly magnificent cake then ran out of shits to give so they just used their own feces as icing to get it over with
also, you went over how aqua wants to make (forgot the fillies name) Nav's child have a better life, can you at least have nav use that to make aqua feel bad about the marriage? Aqua knows who the filly wants nav to marry and yet she is going to marry him to Celestia, someone the filly hates, so please, PLEASER make nav bring that up to fuck with Aqua
Stranger in Strange Land never did finish that book.
This is a quality of life thing, but could you alter the chapter titles so they just use digits and the name so that people can actually select specific chapters without going to the story page.
I just wanted to say, that you are literally the best writer on this site WhatmustIdo, please, always keep up the great work, you wonderful and amazing artist you, this is quite literally one of if not the best piece of literature I have ever read and for that, I sincerely thank you.
Gotta say that the conflict in Nav's head is getting a little samey, to the point i'm starting to skim through it.
The whole
Has a bit too much repetition in the last three or four chapters. I am starting to really want SOME kind of resolution to this ark as soon as possible.
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I agree but I fear rushing to get it over will ruin the entire point of this ark
Two chapters on the same week. Man I love summer vacation. And two amazing chapters that makes me hate aqua even more. Must be my bd.😁😁😁😁
Aqua has this weird dynamic for me right now where she starts to grow into a... not sympathetic, but a villain that raises a few valid points before reverting to an unlikable cunt for the short exchanges of stalker levels of insanity. I have full faith that WMID will finish the arc in a fulfilling way but i have a small hope of an aqua redemption direction due to the confirmation that discord corrupted her.
These chapters are the spice of life
A new 35k word chapter a day after the previous one!?
It must be my cakeday..
Rekt
Fucking the dragon was teh only way I could think of that was even possible given comparaticve stats, but I thought the size and strength meant that Nav wouldve had to go to the elbow, or do some serious balling, but still that ending was mean, nasty and excelent.
How long could a dragon last under stimulation before they died from dehydration or system fail, and how much longer could Nav keep going?
I can see Nav now going round dragons and offering payment protection schemes. Payup or be pleasured.
Oh well, giving Princess Gilda a good time, good thing Navs plant form means their saliva isnt as sexually fertile as other flowers?
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It's like, imagine a man trapped on an island. Only 100 yards across with no food or water, and a boat comes along and the guy on the boat says "I'll save you if you serve me" and the man says "okay"
Now imagine the boat coming up and the guy saying "You work for me now. Get on the boat" The man trapped on the island would be like "...nah I'm good, thanks"
It's not if he's helping or not, it's all about CHOICE.
Aqua isn't giving Nav a choice so even if she's helping, he doesn't want her help.
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Tell me about it. For some reason even if a story sounds REALLY good if I see that anthro tag I'm like "oh. And this story looked good too."
It's weird because I'm completely fine with anthro art. But a pony story should be with ponies.
Loving these long chapters! Some stories I read are updated weekly but only 1000 words. Such a tease!
Wow, this made up for the festival in a big way!
Aqua's helicopter parenting took a slight backseat to some action scenes, even if she did help squeeze some new feels out of Nav on Gilda's behalf.
I actually read straight through this one, a couple other chapters had me taking the occasional break. Looks like there should be some strange and interesting times ahead!
Cheers!
Is there any romantic interests the protagonists has?