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A great thing to wake up to
Dope
Damn cliffhangers. Another great monthly update... Now to eagerly await the next
Yay
THAT'S SOME GOOOD SHIT I TELL YOU!
Also, I might go ahead and reread this series after I finish up some wuxia novels I'm in the middle of.
Does that "yet" mean that Taya will eventually join Navarone in the coma?
~KBO.
Man, it's easy forget how mush SHIT Nav's been through over the course of this story. Damn.
Thanks for the chapter on my Birthday, perfect timing! 😃
Okay what I get is Apple jack, rainbow, dobble, blossom, shining, cadence maybe fluttershy, are on the positive spectrum for me. Actual good guys, mostly all others have hurt nav and/or others hell a lot =negative spectrum.
Damn love how deeper and many ways this ribbit hole goes.
I originally underestimated how long this arc would be, but it's a fantastic character study that I'm actually really enjoying.
Oooooh, at this rate we might get to the bunker next chapter or the one after that.
ah a trip through memory lane, Fluttershy and Applejack are technically the only two elements of harmony he hasn't been sexually involved with yet.
YAY
I wonder where in the list of lengths of stories on the site this collection of chapters of coma reminises would end up. Top 100?
Its funny how often it hits me how good of a way this is to flash back, and technically do filler all at the same time. Its NOT filler because it intrinsically affects the character, BUT if you were to do this in a different show where the character simply need to reaffirm their position in the coming problem, it would be a great way to flash back while creating a new experience.
Just a thought.
First, this was another wonderful chapter and I can't wait for the next. Second, do you know how many more chapters in this arc you are going to have to write, or is that something that evades you?
It’s a great concept to cement how irreversibly evil Celestia was after the fact. Nice.
Truly a very interesting read. These past few recap chapters are not everyone's cup of tea, but I enjoy the flare that is brought to them. And having some of the original story be changed to confuse those who read his journals. A brilliant idea and perfectly executed, color me impressed.
I am looking forward to the Bunker. It will be interesting to see the Visions there. I also wonder if the "drugs are bad mkay" episode will be brought up at all. I'm very interested in what those prophecies are.
Anyway did not mean to talk so much. Another fantastic chapter. I look forward to the next! !
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friendly reminder to join the diaries discord
https://discord.gg/fyynyfQ
I understand that having ponies and non-ponies who interact with Nav join up with him is a way of progressing the plot and proving that the interaction meant something, but I'd be very interested in seeing how it plays out in the long term. It's brought up multiple times how unstable many of the minor characters are, and the more interesting of them have elementals to keep their worse habits at bay. If they didn't have that, it would surprise me how long the group held together. Many of them are distrustful of one another. I would love for someone with some knowledge of true magic come along and just rip them all out, the chaos that would cause. Finally, a true enemy Nav would have to face, one that knows them i.e. the people who know them best. I'm really enjoying Nav vs Nav right now though. I was looking forward to this series of chapters for a long time, and I think it'll be great for them. Nav has a lot of character flaws they should work on, even if real world growth isn't so clear cut as falling into a coma and talking everything out once.
My only gripe is that in story, female = feminine. I get the whole "you're a noble now and have to show it" talk from secondary characters, but I really think Nav could be doing more to fight that directly. Idk I'm not trying to start shit that's just my opinion.
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...I can’t believe I hadn’t thought about him remembering the prophecies when he finally gets there. I wonder if he looked in a mirror when no one was watching... and if he remembers Spike...... ooooh la la
...It seems to me that the coma magic really doesn't want people doing the coma for some reason. Seems like it spends a lot of time second guessing Nav's decision to do it.
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Happy Birthday
😁🎁
Brilliant as ever.
I just want the author to understand that whenever I see another chapter it makes me so happy to see it, typically drop everything asap to read it.
My god, this shit is only getting better and better, how do you do it. Almost all the other authors would have given up already. Yet you continue to make chapter after chapter with the same or even better quality of the first ones.
I always have this little "oh, god damn it" moment when I get to the end of a chapter. You have an absolutely infuriating mastery of the cliffhanger.
So Celestia is much less of a chessmaster than I thought she was. She was just playing at empire with cheat codes active and liberally applied. Explains how one halfway intelligent individual could throw a wrench into the gears of thousands of years of scheming & indoctrination so quickly, Discord-approved or no. Or maybe she just got out of practice after coasting along for so long on easy mode. In any case, seeing events through her & Luna's eyes has been a real trip. Can't wait to see more. Especially the stuff revolving around The Bunker (because you know that's going to be something) and recent events.
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Right? I alt-tabbed out of the game I was playing real quick to check for any new alerts since I hadn't looked in a few hours. Checked for a new chapter just in case right before I went back to what I was doing, saw that there actually was a new chapter up and promptly turned the game off.
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I was thinking about that with the last chapter. I figure one of four things is the case:
I don't actually believe that last one for a moment. But then I would have said the same about *Grogar half a month ago. Shows what I knew.
*Finale spoiler
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Top 10, maybe.
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i kind agree some what with that statement, as much as i would prefer the story to move forward, its still nice to have this sort of Recap with behind the scenes info. Obviously the author is going to do what they want because its their story. but if they hadn't added the extras to it it almost feels to me like a "Stalling" arc just to get more time for planning more "actual" story arc. Apologies if my explanation is a bit weird, couldn't quite figure out how to put my thoughts to words with sounding like a pretentious ass.
Oh wow. This... damn.
Daaamn, this arc is gon be long, very happy for a recap though. But seriously I'm glad Nav's finally got to it! Stuff is moving forward again in a way that I have missed for a looong time. I love this story!
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Yeah progression is technically not moving in the coma, but the recape is so much more in depth then I could have ever hoped
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agreed. But personally Ieave it a few days to build up my own personal hype and then I find a nice quite place for a few hours and just read.
Is there a doam discord server?
I feel like it isn't the coma that's affecting Nav, rather the messages that are left behind.
Oh it's the uhhh. that villian from the movie right?
Konosuba?
Nav don't diss on papa Reginald.
Holy shit Celestia fucking op. Doesn't matter if she can't move the sun, she can slam a fucking comet at you.
awww that's so wholesome
Doppel best mom
And there we go. The end of another Arc
I'm excited to see how Nav will change his actions. Saying that you'll do something versus actually doing it is very different so I'm afraid of the possibility that Nav might back out.
This arc in general was pretty nice. I was definitely feeling overwhelmed by the amount of shit Nav went through and, unlike others, I don't really re-read novels, so this was a nice way for me to reeducate myself oh the story. I also enjoyed how hope was the last one truly accompanying Nav and how he suggests that he would hug hope. Maybe this symbolizes that Nav does still believe in hope? And he would have embraced hope and therefore the idea of hope? The last scene was just a perfect combination of great writing, while still maintaining the style of the story. Pretty wholesome arc for a story so grim, I'm sure some of us needed this.
On a completely separate note:
Is there going to be an explanation of why Nav can see the magic on unicorn horns or was that already addressed?
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Yes there is a server I remember seeing it in a chapter in the authors notes but I don't remember which one it was in
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Thanks. The search continues
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people are posting the discord every update.
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Thank you, comrade. I have already looked through all the chapters. Apparently the first mention is around 170ish
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I kinda like this recap, it's at least relevant to the plot, and is gonna result in actual changes to the story. It's better than a beach episode or something, where you could skip it entirely and not notice the difference. Plus it's way easier to read a dozen chapters than a couple hundred, if you wanna refresh your memory before new chapters. I mean, I wouldn't recommend rereading the recaps to read more recaps, but if the story goes on for another fifty+ chapters after, the recap will be awesome. Although saying that does kinda make me wanna reread it from the beginning...
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GKO-pAciF3SlPtK7zw_c3lFdRfs-RE-hj1-LNflQK6c/edit
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Thank you for the Google Docs! Been dying for these to return!
My headcannon theme for Navarone.
My headcannon theme for old Celestia.
My headcannon theme for Discord (as he presents himself).
My headcannon theme for Discord (as he really is).
My headcannon theme for Taya.
My headcannon theme for Luna.
Finding one for Navaron and Discord were difficult, but I feel these ones fit very well for their intensity.
I can't wait to see more of Navarone's Bizarre Adventure. Seriously, I binge read the fuck out of this and now I'm at a loss for what the heck I'm supposed to do now, other than be patient.
I'm excited for him to wake up, but there's a long way to go....
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Don't get me wrong, most of us know Navarone is kind of a terrible person and a sociopath at that. A lot of what they say or do is pretty inexcusable, but I think that is the point? At least the reason why Discord uses them the way that they do.
Regarding the ablest comments? just ignore them. A lot of people here tend to identify with Navarone, sometimes strongly so. Now Nav is obviously a toxic personality, (which is explicitly stated several times in the course of this story) but since no one wants to see themselves as toxic, they tend to make excuses for the behavior, which kinda sucks. Please know that not everybody here reading this is a dip who tries to defend the character's every action. Honesty the fandom surrounding this story needs more people like you to call out the bullsh*t of the toxic part of it. If you decide to continue following this story, then I welcome you to the DOAMM fandom.
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Hmm...
I suggest I See You by MISSIO for Flo.
And Bloodfeather by Highly Suspect rounds out Kat pretty well.
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mate you are in for one hell of a ride