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Pinkie now knows almost everything, and she went from a pony that adored her princess to wanting to beat Celestia into the ground. I think she could do it to. Then Navi dumps her into Molestia's hooves.
Pinkie being a cute pudgy girl makes me smile.
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lol
Nav could have tried to make peace with all the races. Him being the mediator did not give him the chance to make peace for the changelings and earn more reputation. Now I see what you meant about Kumani. So Nav is now rooting for the elementals all out, all powerful beings watching your back does sound rather enticing. Molestia, oh god. Poor Pinks.
Lol this always makes my day.
Best ending ever. I cant stop laughing.
I know navs a mean guy and all but leaving pinkie to that was just plain cruel
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Celestia cares deeply about the well-being of all her little ponies. Even if they're humans. Trust me when I say that whatever Celestia does to Pinkie, it would be something they would both enjoy.
Especially if it's something that makes Navarone suffer.
Hilarious chapter.
Now, while reading that, imagine it's being narrated by Morgan Freeman. Really makes the difference, eh?
...(puts a sombrero on pinkies head and whispers into her ear)....Pinkie: (in bad Mexican accent) revolution!
good..first you get the power...then you get betrayed..then you get raped...then you get tortured...then the REVOLUTION!...then you get the women(dragones).....hope molestia doesent have a problem with that
i love the story pure gold
Nav is such a troll to celestia and pinkie
I was so confused about what was in the drawer, and why he turned pinkie into a boy.
*reads last few sentences*
*tries to contain a smile*
*bursts out laughing*
IM SORRY I COULDNT HELP MYSELF!!!!
Poor pinkie is finally going to be on the recieving side of things XD
So why did Pinkie go around in one of Nav's random spare outfits and not the outfit designed by the guy in the clothing shop for the female Nav. Wouldn't that have fit and looked better on Pinkie, not like Navs going to use it a lot. Navs got a lot of common sense, but he slipped up on that one.
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Pinkie is a lot fatter than he was as a chick, with bigger and sexier pretty much everything. She needed his male clothes because they were baggier and had more room in them.
There needs to be more of this right in there... Just sayin
I'm actually kinda surprised with Nav, he i thought was getting better. Then when he got Flo he seemed to get worse and better at the same time, if Flo was removed he'd be worse, but together he's better. It was quite worrying to see him treat the others like that, I felt like Discord would pop out any second or something. Flo doesn't speak up much, she spoke up for the Fashion guy, why not Pinkie? I thought Flo would be more caring and sensitive, kinda like Fluttershy but old and wise and not really shy, just caring
*sigh* I'm actually disappointed that you didn't put in the pinkie scene because the only other time he does it with her he's being raped ..... and *cough cough* pinkie needs a sex scene without rape. Just saying.
SPONGEBOB!!!!!!!!!!
Oh, dis gon be guud!
3353566 I've noticed that the earlier chapter's seem more... Happy, less dark, less Mad any particular reason for this?
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More fitting with the show and the characters. Their downfall should be more gradual, as befitting them.
Am I the only one noticing that Nav is apparently using "true" magic now, albeit unwittingly? Like how before he couldn't lift off carrying Pinkie, but after trolling Celestial he had no problem, when he didn't think twice about it? Hmmm...?
3492354 Celestia's craving Pink
Story's?
Store's?
Idunno, but i'm fairly certain that "storeys" are not correct.
(Chapter 62, Date Night.)
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http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/storeys?r=75&src=ref&ch=dic
Check the dictionary before assuming I'm incorrect.
You know... at some point you mentioned that you won't bother to write out any sex scenes that are repetitive... and yet the one and only humanxhuman moment in the story just gets a mention ('course I guess that can be seen as repetitive considering real life and such).
Also, Pinkie really needs to slip a journal entry of her own into Nav's things.
Finally, is it normal that the only reason I care is because of the character depth these scenes tend to add?
3731891 Chill bro. All you had to say was look it up.
To be frank it strikes me as wrong as well, but I wasn't nearly sure enough to comment on it.
Not all criticism is bad.
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I get a ton of people leaving either comments or PMs saying that certain words I use are wrong or don't exist, when the word is right and most definitely does exist. It gets very old very quickly. If one of the mistakes they find is valid, which I definitely get plenty of, I'm all too happy to fix it. When something is right and someone says it's wrong, I'm not nearly as happy.
:O I loved that series!
LOLOLOL
Wonderful.
Ok, Pinkie's a lot better, now. She didn't overstep Nav's comforts to the point of proper annoyance, she was nice, and the character development was nice. Also, after all this time, it's nice to see another... (Darts eyes to the left. Darts eyes to the right. Continues) Equestria Girl. (Runs for the hills)
Hmm. I wonder.
If we shoot discord in the face with a howitzer will Nav explode?:
Or maybe stop being a dick to everyone?
Ladies and Gents, I have discerned that whatmustido is a very angry person. Seriously. This fic bashes EVERYONE.
Well, at least Nav realised that he was making Pinkie turn suicidal. It was about time Flo said something.......
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5992060 KILL IT BEFORE IT LAYS EGGS
--SYA, The Horse
I actually wanted to see some of the 'long night.' Maybe even just some of the highlights. I would have found it quite entertaining. Oh, well.
“Once upon a time there was an ugly pony. He was so ugly that everybody died. The end.”
...you just made a spongebob reference. Didn't you?
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There are many things I'm ashamed of. That isn't one of them.
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I think you meant "you're taking this a lot better than I expected."
I see Navi is separating Celestia from her main source of protection.
Agreed.
its been a while since I've seen this reference
6488004 Spam is annoying, no matter how old it is.
Dang. And here I thought he turned Celestia into a Helestia