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“I will wait for you.” well shit
i had the same thought. And i gotta say i really enjoyed this chapter, good one man
nice and keep runing
Honestly I'm completely ignoring that this has anything to do with Discord and it's Fan-freakin-tastic
"well shit" pretty much sums up his life recently
I see that D&D reference you made there, mentioning charisma as a dump stat, and I appreciate it.
know what he needs......a therapist
I'm impressed there are a lot of emotions being conveyed from this fic...maybe someone should send Mr.main character on a "time skip" montage to become badass and less depressed
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Wouldn't you be depressed in his boots? Forced into a life of dealing with talking animals and never able to go back home, made to live with the person that ruined your life, told that most of the skills that you spent so much time developing were useless, considered a freak of nature by a good chunk of the population and feared by some, and finally you're told that a princess that had a spat with crazy a thousand years ago and with the power to crush your head like a grape has a crush on you that led her to try to murder a friend that she thought was her rival. I can understand his being depressed in that situation...
Especially when you go through a few more chapters...
You know, I originally expected the moth thing to be Chrysalis. Buzzing wings, hard to describe in the dark, looks poisonous. Then there was a pony outside that mysteriously disappeared. And the fact that the moth was in The Element of Loyalty's room. How far into season 2 are we now?
The speed with which you made this the longest story on fimfiction is highly impressive. Also this chapter holds great meaning to me, as I just returned from the lighting of a belfyre of my own... More need to read this story.
the flickering of a flame is something to behold indeed just like watching the world pass when your staring at it from underwater or watching lightning in a thunderstorm it seems just so... enticing
One thing I'll note about this fic, just a scant 7 chapters in from binge reading, is that it's absolutely held back and burdened by the entire discord fiasco.This fic could have started on chapter 1 and that note 'Discord' made in one of the earlier chapters could be removed and the story so far would be much better for it.
You lost me at "Luna tried to kill Rainbow Dash with big bug thing."
Seriously... Everything after that pretty much confused the shit out of me.
Dont you mean "weakly I gave her the finger?
Would'nt? You mean?
Oh god the hilarity of it all. I was like HAHAHAHAHA then
I was like awwwww
I can't stop thinking about the moth thing. My brain made it seem like the most evil and horrible creature ever I will never sleep again thanks for that.
I think I understand the Cain comment at the beginning now. Adam and Eve brought Pain into the world, but Cain was the first to introduce true Strife.
Navarone, based upon Cain, turns everything to shit by his mere presence. THings in Ponyland are going worse just because he exists in their world.
Interesting. Perhaps silly, but interesting. You're a Vampire fan, aren't you?
Honestly, I don't get his reasoning about how 'he wouldn't want a relationship to be based on appearance'. Other than the other 'reasons' he's giving, isn't one of the main ones he's saying no because he's not into bestiality and therefore didn't even consider the possibility of falling in love with Luna (therefore making it so it couldn't happen)? If she was human from the beginning, would he really not have considered it at all?
I don't know, that's just the feeling I got from this. I have no idea if this has come to fruition in the next 75+ chapters that are out at this point in time, but that argument stuck with me the entire way as being kind of stupid and asinine.
I....I don't know. This chapter got me thinking at the end. Stories hardly ever get me to do that. You sir are a excellent writer of emotions. I don't give two shits what others think. This was one of the best endings I've read. Good job, my friend.
I found myself humming a song from a game I once played… I don’t want to set the world on fire. Not the most fitting song, for at the moment I wanted to burn everything I could see, but I suppose it was somewhat fitting. Fallout Reference!
>rape
Well, now I know that he IS not Discord, at least in memory, but he WILL become a new Discord so to say, in seven years to be exact.
My sides are in orbit!
Never has a prhase captured the hearth of a history like this one
"I hate dealing in politics; it’s usually easy, as people are easy to manipulate, but sometimes shit like this comes up and just blows up in everyone’s face."
ok.....one millions words to go......
Funnily enough, I change my sleep schedule about 5-8 times a years.
Fps? Faps per second? :3 I'm such a pervert
Wow it's weird rereading this it's like a completely different story from how it is now on the timeline like a completely different person too :T
Not by any chance a reference to xkcd's "every major's terrible" song
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Nah. Underwater basket weaving is a pretty popular reference: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Underwater_basket_weaving
I had heard of it way before starting to read xkcd and I've heard it in tons of places since.
I just read these few words and already broke into laughter! Oh my sides!
XD
With the whole Nightmare Night chapter being re-written I say saying "I am Death." Would scare them a lot more, or just pull the "We are Death, and thou's time has come."
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I haven't rewritten anything past four yet. Most of these will get changed, don't you worried.
Two questions, well actually just one but who cares?: will you remove all the sex scenes and mark this story as teen with both tags or just Mature?
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I won't, no. I might go back and add the sex scene here later if I ever feel like writing clop again. But writing it just got so dull. It's wave penis in vagoo until cum. The end.
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Which is why you should fill clop with comedy aspects, for example the scene with domination scene with luna later where Nav is in charge, It was a chuckle worth to see him treat her so casually and scanned through her "toys" so nonchalantly.
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Most of that wasn't clop itself. In a lot of cases, I write up to the stuff right before the actual scenes. I do know that I'm going to add another one in the rewrite, but possibly just one. Unless I get back into liking it, then I might go back and add more. Only in places they already were, of course.
The changes seemed to create a more cohesive whole and figure better into some of the later chapters. Are you keeping the originals somewhere to look at so people can understand references people will or have made? I kind of liked the Z scene even if the Gala you used this time worked much better for advancing the overall plot.
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They're all in the downloadable version in the pastebin link in the description of the story. And I'll be fixing the references over time. But my first priority is putting out another chapter. It should take just a few more days, since I'm already at 8k words.
I think that was supposed the be adverse.
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http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/averse?r=75&src=ref&ch=dic
I noticed that Nav didn't seem to know who Philomena was when dash and flutteshy we're talking in the castle it is a small error that may need to be corrected
This chapter is almost the same. And it still pisses me off that Nav doesn't know about the whole plan. (Read through the story tice. U know what I mean)
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Fixed
*sigh* there's a lot of things that need to be fixed and I think the Z part needs to be put back and honestly I really don't see how he's so shocked in this version of the story because it seems like he actually is trying to get her to like him in this version. He invites her to two carnivals and spends the entire time with her then meets her family. Well I guess that could be normal friend stuff but I still don't see how he's so shocked though. It also seems you took out way too much stuff for there to be this many chapters still. Well I'm going to keep reading to see what else has changed. ALSO Happy Thanksgiving everyone :D
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I never thought the day would come when someone says, "Wave penis in vagoo unil cum. The end."
I found several other mistakes in this story as well.
When Celestia say: "I understand that you have needs that must be met, though you could very easily fulfil them in ways other than killing animals." The "fulfil" should be fufill with two L's.
And also when Nav says: "Who all knows that Luna tried to murder Rainbow Dash?” I think the "all" is supposed to be else.
Other than that, I really love the this story and plan to read the other 88 or so chapters. Keep up the good work!
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http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/fulfil?r=75&src=ref&ch=dic
Fulfil is technically correct, but it looks stupid. Easy enough to change.
"Who all" is Southern speak. Nav dips into that a lot, especially when he gets stressed, so expect to see stuff like that a lot. I still have people trying to correct me whenever he says "Might could."
Well...if it takes him a year to figure out the girls are his friends (him being unused to having any), of course it's going to take him longer to figure out if he can handle having a marefriend....I look forward to reading more...I'm into mentally scarring myself. I really am.
What I truly love about this story is the lack of foreknowledge that every other story provides. You learn with the character, as if you actually are him, instead of before him. This makes this story unique, and undoubtedly one of the best on this site. You've outdone yourself, good sir. *claps*
Friends that love each other, care for one another, provide for one another, help one another....
and rape one another
Southern Twang, people...Southern Twang.