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Oh god you are right, now that i think about this. Aqua subjected to the potion along with the Navi would cause massive results for the both of them. And literacy wise that would make quite a tidy redemption arch for the wayward water spirit. And it would underline the element of Kindness which Navi failed with the Kobold and the Volcano.
What woud Navi do if Aqua would be redeemed and would release her grasp?
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Yeah, I know. Just pointing out. I'm not saying that's a plot hole, just a fun fact. Or a terrifying fact for guys.
One or the other.
So Twilight got whored off and Nav became a maid to a rich weebo. How the hell isn't that the strangest thing to ever happen in this story?
Competitive spirit and rich nerds always ruin the chances to get a good train run going.
8874578
I dont think she really has a choice. Navarone does not change his mind unless there is actual logic involved... or Taya tells him which makes him think about how it'll effect her.
And I'm using him/his cause it looks like he's beginning to actually sound like he did when he was male, full of hidden anger and spite. of course it is actually probably him getting out of a funk.
8874619
Well. Fuck.
Always leaves me wanting more.
8874578
He would curse at her and stab her anyway.
8874759
Indeed!
Man that Griffin paid more for 1 night with nav then celestia did for months away from home killing a ambassador fighting assassins and capturing a pirate vessel. Navs gonna break in a virgin like those girls back at the human bar by showing him how a naughty maid needs to be punished. I got this feeling twis gonna need to be saved before the end and navs gonna be doing some killing.
That was fun.
Wasn't expecting that end though. Poor Nav.
LMAO OMG I did NOT see that ending coming
I died.
I wonder if that guard was Sunshine Smiles in disguise.
This was fun. I am still looking forward to Aqua getting her comeuppance.
~KBO.
8871850
And this isn't even the worst of the HiE bunch.
I like how Aqua said that Flo spoiled Nav. I seem to recall her saying Flo was extremely abusive so if that abuse was spoiling, that says a lot about how Aqua wishes to treat Nav.
8875269
Succ never dies.
YES
A GRIFFIN WEEB
I LOVE IT
THIS COULD NOT HAVE GONE BETTER
I HOPE IT'S PAINFUL
This will go one of two ways. Either weeb griffin has a weird sex fetish, or it's going to be completely tame and normal.
How lucky the weeb is, that the pretty maid he picked up already contains a controlling gel tentacle monster girl.
Nav could use some Mountain Dew Red. It's the only way to shut up the obnoxious computers in your brain. If only he had a time machine to the 1990s.
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To be fair he has a laptop with apparently a lot of useless information like movies on it. It's perfectly possible he learnt some new memes from that.
Aqua may be a controlling, holier-than thou bitch who's made evil decisions, but against all odds she's really growing on me.
Calling it now, Weeb Gryphon is a virgin. Nav came to find lewdness but instead found innocence.
I will be honest I have to skim these chapters till she gets out of his head cause it’s seriously making me mad/upset. Hope she gets out soon so I can go back to enjoying my favorite internet author.
Blindsided by the manga. Absolutely did not see that coming.
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If i remember correctly, whatmustido specifically wrote it so that the year Nav was transported to Equestria is ambiguous. So it makes sense that we see him writing in new memes for Nav to reference.
To be honest, Aqua's presence has really made the last few chapters feel boring to me. What, otherwise, would have been at least of typical interestingness is, instead, something I'm just looking forward to being done with so we can be rid of her.
That said, that last scene managed to make me forget about Aqua for a moment.
8874642
It’s top 5 easy. Number one for weirdness is either ghost bunker, or haunted house back in pre-crazy Luna days. (I miss not crazy Luna)
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Defcon at 4 is actually good. It means relative peace. As it goes higher, it is more dangerous with Defcon 1 meaning nukes have been launched, Defcon 2 meaning the military can scramble interceptors in 10 minutes and so forth with Defcon 5 being basically world peace.
8875491
Or it gets skipped until he gets with gilda or something.
8875042
The guard could be pointy hat or whatevee the guard nav made gay in his dreams
8874578
It could happen but from what i see alot off people just want the element possesions to be over with and get the story moving.
8876513
That might be the beauty of it, if Aqua would make a full turn to good after seeing what she has become and what she is doing. If she would truly start to make attempts to become a better person would Navi, and the audience have enough kindness to allow her to try to do so?
Or does Discord win?
PS:
That or i am reading WAY too deep into this.
8876526
Bit if she turned. The ponies would find out and become realy guarded against the elemtals. The fires would become enraged. Flo would loose her shit. The other water elements would be divided with the its the best thing or that the possesiob would be againt what they stand for. Airie would probly loose her shit the most since aqua forced it. Celestia would probly go on the war path. Or that is wha i think would happen if aqua became evil and tha she forced herself on nav and celestia
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You probly got it from that the story started in 2012.
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Just go back to New Year's Eve 1999 and let the y2k bug sort her out
of course nav is paired with a weeb.
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going to side with this lovely gent and their peers who agree with them. aqua is like a cheap knock-off flo without that 'spark' her interactions had (might make this seem biased, but back during one of my rereads, i was actually skimming chapters just to read the conversations with flo). the majority of the talks with aqua however (this chapter especially) have just been a repeat of:
interaction > nav thought > snide/threat from aqua > nav calling aqua evil > aqua ignoring/saying it's for the greater good > nav ignoring/more interaction > repeat.
it's really getting old and although this chapters content around the chase was very entertaining, the continued break ins of repetitive comments from aqua made it rather dull. at this point i'm just waiting for the talk with the royalty and someone finding out alpha's gone rogue.
anyway i'm tired and i'll check back on this comment in the morning. this is just my opinion so feel free to differ and/or respond as you wish.
thanks.
This chapter was not what I was expecting. And I'm really glad it wasn't. I really liked the minor world building, expanding the world a bit to show off Griffin culture and history. Kind of surprised that that's what happened give celestia, as for aqua she certainly has redeemed herself as a character in my eyes. Before it felt that she was delusionally evil in a way that didn't make sense. And her actions in this chapter are a great step forward in actually making sense of that. Before it felt that she wasn't genuine. Now it does. Probably the best I could hope for, for this chapter. Masterfully done wmid, thank you
8876697
Uh. Good to know. Di you mention something simular in the story other than aj not liking him and the fact she treated hin the best but was the pony he was aroubd the least
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About the weeb thing at first i tought he was sorta a neckbeard gryphon thing until the manga showed up. But then again the yandere yabb should have been an warning
The dynamics between Nav and Aqua are getting a little samey and stale, caught myself automatically skipping their conversations couple times and having to reread. But maybe it's just me.
Awesome as always!
I'm kinda concerned for Twilight.
Heat or no...
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You would be correct. The year was never stated. Neither was the year in the past that Nav travelled to that was his future.
Talking about time travelling breaks my grammar, but I'm sure you'll get me.
I'm just going to add my voice to the crowd; I also don't really enjoy Aqua's presence, or at least the fact that she never goes away.
I don't hate her being there, the arc itself is interesting, and I don't necessarily dislike their interactions, but it's definitely not adding anything to the chapter aside from a repeated pattern of their bickering every few paragraphs. It's just getting old to see so constantly.
you know.. im starting to think that nav is going to go this whole trip without being fucked once due to fucked up and or silly circumstances.
So at this point im starting to wonder. Did Sombra turn Aqua insane, or did Aqua turn Sombra insane. I guess we will never know. (yes i know it was the crystals, this is more fun)
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Because I'm a very weird person who should never, ever write while high or tripping. I'm so sorry.
8874777
I like being a tease.
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Gotta love that spite, fam
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It's more that Flo let Nav make several wrong choices. Aqua isn't going to repeat that mistake, or so she thinks.
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Come on, this is Nav we're talking about. How could it possibly be tame or normal?
8875853
I made Aqua to be as unlikeable as possible, but you have to admit that she does have a point. Nav's behavior is atrocious and she's proud of said atrocious behavior. That doesn't make getting implanted with a mind control elemental right, but to Aqua, it's still the best option.
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I thought about that, but I wanted to teach Nav a lesson.
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No, Nav would try killing her with absolutely no hesitation.
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She's always been genuine. It's just kinda hard to see that when what she's doing is blatantly evil. We all feel sympathetic toward Nav because she's the main character, but her behavior has been super fucked up. Again, that doesn't make it right, but Aqua's just doing what she thinks is best for the world by keeping Nav and Celestia on a short leash
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It's been mentioned several times, but it's most blatant in chapter one hundred and twenty, when Nav straight up says it. Applejack never admits to it, but she does go out of her way to avoid Nav and she doesn't really treat him very well when he is around. That's changing pretty quickly, though.
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I thought about this, too, but it's already too late. She actually got fucked in this chapter in an alley, I just didn't go into detail. Again, she needed to learn her lesson.
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Those crystals didn't just affect ponies.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iURWatl14-EPrbaXtlgarwa5xXLtdVtUkRqbNqaz0eE/edit
Someone requested this: https://discord.gg/ZxvNcXn (I don't know why they requested it, but whatever)