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This is gonna be the last chapter for a while. Sorry guys.
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Welp, it's all good.
Navi got laid a lot that week. Luna is probably so mad.
Navi is not even a soldier and he still kicked tail at the tournament. I imagine a group of military trained humans would slaughter all of them.
1425469 what why they are one reason i stay up at night to see your daily updates.
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But why!? also great chapter...
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He was the only one with any ranged weapon, aside from the unicorn. Given a long hall with enemies that had no choice but to confront him dead on, of course he did well. And I will probably write more clop for this section eventually. I don't usually write it all at once. Expect to see some of that get put in later.
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I finally caught up on FIM to where I am on the story. I'll have write another chapter before I can put it up here. Most of this was prewritten.
1425469 last chapter for awhile? WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO LOOK FORWARD TO NOW? good luck with whatever you're doing during your brake from this story.
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I'm not taking a break. I didn't put out one chapter per day. I'm still writing, it's just that most of what I already posted was prewritten. I finally caught up. Now posting will slow down as I write.
A group of well trained and properly armed human soldiers could take over that whole world, i mean soldiers with m16's and the like lol. It sucks you won't be updating for a while, hope it isn't too long. I can't even tell you how often good stories go on hiatus.
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I'm not saying wmid should throw this into the story some time in the future... but he should totally put this in. But me knowing wmid I know he won't.
Seriously, why are they such CUNTS!?!?
Well good things come to those that wait.
Well that was nice and all, but why did you cut out the sex scenes? Lesbian sex would have been fun to read and Celesia's session could have been fun. I know you have them, but why are you withholding them? Sadly enough, this story is my only form of entertainment every night, and its what I look forward to every day. It's depressing to see it cut down like this.
1426311 i'll look forward all the same to seeing the next chapter. Hopefully the wait isn't too bad.
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I didn't withhold them, I just haven't written them yet. I'm planning on adding it all later, I just haven't done it yet. I don't usually write clop at the same time I'm writing everything else. The clop usually comes later. Sometimes this leads to some odd things, and I'm surprised no one has pointed anything out yet.
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It's not going on hiatus. Now it's being written. What has been posted so far was prewritten. Now that I've caught up to what I have, my updates will slow down.
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Yeah, humans could easily take this place over. Sure, Celestia and Luna are powerful, but they can't stop a sniper bullet that hits them before they realize someone has pulled a trigger. They sure couldn't stop a well trained SEAL or Delta assassination team that wants to plant a bomb in the palace. As Navarone has commented in the past, killing the princesses would not be hard. It would be frighteningly easy, especially if Chrysalis wanted to do it. She knows enough about Nav now to pretend to be him long enough to get either of the princesses in a relaxed state.
Noooo, Now what will i have to look forward to .
Heh, time to reread all the chapters then!
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Hehe, well, the internet is an awesome and creepy place. One never knows what one finds there.
This was good chapter to make the short pause as you continue to write. Nav is going to train to fight, cant wait to see that. Cant wait for your next post, good luck writing, have fun and happy upcoming Halloween.
Damn and I gotten used to a chapter coming out every day always looked forward to reading them at the end of the day and now I have to wait for the next chapters to come out.
Now where am I going to get my blood, sex and shamelessly funny stories now?
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I'm sure there's at least one other story worth reading on this site. Somewhere.
Fans of this story hear me!!!!!
How many of you thought that this day would never never come?
whatmustido is taking more than one up day to update his story? E-gad!!
ah-well Lets just spam this page with our assumption on whats going to happen to in this story while we wait.
Nav leaves equeastria earlier than the six months he planed on before hand, because every one found out he plans on leaving in but Celestia "leaks" that his plans, so he might have to fight his way out.
Maybe he might take his Daughter but knowing him and her she probably find some way to follow him...and knowing Twilight and Celestia and every other pony wolud try/actually stop her so she could grow up "normal" and if Nav leaves her then Discord will show up and gain so influence points for just being there.
Any one eles have any ideas?
Question: What the fuck is Nav? A construct made by Discord? A actually human?
Is he a sock puppet or a string puppet.
Edit: what I meant by the last sentence is Discord inside him controlling his actions or is he a outside influence controlling the scenarios that Nav finds himself in?
Ether way is Nav real or just a puppet...........Dude....I am so tripping
1430492 Uhuh...another awesome story...right
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Wanna know why he's taking so long? It caught up to where he was working on. He also hasn't touched it in a few days.
He's going to kill me.1434714
Because I haven't already said that multiple times.
Why does It say that this has been updated? I don't see a new chapter, or is that just me? My mind isn't ready for a false update on this so please say I'm trippin and I just don't see that the chapter is really there.
1438129 Same here, damn near gave me an aneurism.
I am still tripping people.
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I seriously fucked up and hit the wrong button while trying to fix a mistake in a previous chapter. I was trying to click edit but I'm still getting used to a slower mouse, so it hit unpublish instead. I'm going to try very hard to not do that again. I'm pretty sure that it's against the rules.
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Could you answer my question that I posted before about what is Nav in relation to Discord?
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Check your PMs. It's kind of a spoiler.
Which chapter were you trying to edit? I want to know just so i can get rid of the update number.
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Chapter Thirty-Four.
1441926 Thank you very much. Btw your story is great.
I have a notification saying this story has a new chapter but the story itself tells me I've read everything.
What am I missing?!
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see
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no more daily updates. oh well, time to start re reading this shit
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Oh just that..Saved me the constant reminder of my inability to notice, and a ceaseless wonderment of the possibilities.
I read this is 4 days. I need more Diaries of a madman... Bloody good story though!
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Hm, I see. And yeah, I know I'm reading through it fast. It's just a very good story, and I like reading...alot!
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Alot isn't a word. It's good to hear you enjoy it, though. As I've said, one of the reasons I added a chapter a day instead of all at once is because I honestly had some prereaders who downloaded the whole thing do nothing but read until they hit the end. That isn't healthy. That isn't the main reason, but it is a reason.
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Hm, alot isn't a word? Huh, guess I picked it up after seeing so many other's typing it. *Shrug*
And yeah, I understand your reasoning. Sitting still for so long isn't really healthy. But then, time sure flies when you loose yourself in a story.
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You're doing this on purpose. You mean lose, not loose. And it's others, not other's.
God, I should have something better to do than correct grammar on comments...
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Whuat doo youu mian?
Hehe, I will stop. God, I seemed to have gone into troll mode there, sorry about that.
I really can't understand why there isn't more views in this story, I mean COME ON, up until now I haven't read a story more logical, interesting, varied, with original creative ideas, understandable actions, AWESOME INFORMATIVE PROLOGUE, understandable actions, continuously evolving relationships, understandable fucking actions, and a real human protagonist.
And if you're confused with that last one, let me point some 'things' out in the open. I have read many other HIE stories in which the human is accidentally summoned by Twilight, MANY. Those human seem to act by some force that makes them trust the ponies immediately -specially Sparkle- with no problem about their society at all and after a couple of weeks or so, they're ready to basically 'fuck a pony'.
This is the first one in which the human actually DIDN'T become immediately friends and/or ally to their kidnapper. He used logic and didn't trust anypony, hay he even LIED ABOUT HIS NAME AND HASN'T TOLD THEM YET. EVERY HUMAN ON THIS PLANET HAS TO GET TO KNOW YOU OR HAVE A REASON TO TRUST YOU BEFORE ANYTHING, DAMMIT!!!
Sorry about that last part... I got a little excited and if you read the story I don't have to say more.
So yeah whatmustido this is the best Generalized HIE story I have ever read. It has a little bit of everything, even Clop which usually stops me in some stories, but here its not a necessity to read it for the story's understanding because they mention it after when it matters. Thank you for writing it and uploading it on this site, so I could find it and read it...
That is all...
Have a mustache.
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Most of what you said is precisely why it doesn't get many readers. It isn't immediate satisfaction. The chapter I have with the second most views is chapter eight, which is the chapter he gets raped in. I imagine most of the people who came here for clop left, figurative tail between their legs. Another reason I don't get many readers is because I have not advertised this story anywhere except in one very small area on 4chan. Lyrken posted it on reddit and that got me a small number of hits and someone named phantoma posted it on funnyjunk which got me an even smaller number. I'm happy that both of them decided to advertise it. But the simple fact is that this story appeals to a very small number of a relatively specific fanbase. Those people that like HiE stories and those people that like intellectual stories, wherein you usually have to wait to see reasons for things, if they're ever explained at all. Sometimes you just have to use reason to figure out why someone did what they did or if all else fails ask me or someone else.
One thing I've noticed is that most writers that write HiE stories project their own knowledge of ponies onto the humans they are writing, either intentionally or unintentionally. Thus, the humans grow to trust the ponies quickly and they grow ready to bone them at a rate that almost no real human would. Yes, they are relatively human in mind. But no matter how close to perfect of a person you are, it would take a long damn time to get over the fact that they're animals. The only way I saw to get Navarone to ever willingly have sex with any of the species there was to force him the first few times so that he found that it did feel good. Of course, he still vastly preferred the times his partners took on a human body, since he could at least easily get a boner from them. Let's face it, animals are fucking ugly. Sure, they have some aesthetic appeal, but can you ever imagine yourself getting a boner from just looking at a horse?
I have several problems with a good number of HiE stories, but I'm not going to bitch about them here. Let's just say that there's a reason that I've read almost no fanfics at all. Either way, I'm happy to know that you like it, and you should be happy to hear that the next chapter will probably be up within the next few days, unless something big happens that stops me from writing.
I made this account just now to +1 and support this awesome story.
Seriously, most decent fics I found were plagued by either horrible grammar or some plot elements that made no sense at all.
Now, while I can't say this story is 100% perfect, it's still damn close and I've found myself glued to the screen every time a new chapter was released. I mean, the way you incorporated Discord into the story and portrayed him essentially as an truly omnipotent puppeteer was just brilliant! Most stories kind of underestimate him IMO.
This is also the first time I've even mildly enjoyed clop in stories, probably because you can't help but feel attached to Nav... It truly will be a shame when his inevitable, predetermined death arrives. Though I feel there are still plenty of adventures waiting for him 'till then...
By the way, one thing I'm having some trouble understanding... The reason we are reading Nav's thoughts as if he is just a normal human and not Discord in disguise is because what we are reading is essentially the journals Nav writes to keep Celestia informed of his actions like Discord promised her at the beginning? (Besides the "message from Discord" parts obviously) If so that clears up quite a few things up and reminds us to take what he's writing with a grain of salt
Anyways, essentially what I want to say is bravo, and keep the chapters coming! I truly don't know what I'd do if this gem were to be put in hiatus. No rush though
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The journals are part of the deal Discord made with Celestia, yes. However, it is still unclear as to whether or not Navarone is a real human. I could answer that, if you really wanted me to; it seems a pretty common question and I have answered it in PMs for some people. I will say that the question will probably be answered in a few more chapters. I don't know how many more chapters, though.
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trollmode activated
You mean up, right?
hehe, I'll stop.
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Btw, it's only small things that I find, which are easily overlooked. *Shrug* It happens.