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Aburi


I do a bit of writing when I can, which is not often. I'm also willing to proofread and edit, so don't be afraid to contact me!

Mar
9th
2015

A technical review of "The Chaotic Touch of Harmony" · 11:35pm Mar 9th, 2015

I was waiting a long time for the latest chapters of "The Chaotic Touch of Harmony" by Law Abiding Pony to come out. And when I saw that "Complete" marker on the second arc, I couldn't resist reading the whole thing from the beginning.

Aside from reinforcing that I really love this story, a couple of things really stood out to me. Mostly pertaining to writing style, but before I get to that, let me give my impressions of the story.

tl;dr version: I strongly recommend this work!

First off, the tags include sex, gore, AU, human, and mature. This is a scary combination. Most authors would use this kind of tag combination to thoroughly rape the MLP concept. But this one actually uses these tags well.

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Love seeing that bell lit up. Thanks for the fave man.

Glad you enjoy my stories. Tis an honor to find a story being shelved under that title.

Thanks for adding The Ultimatest Evil to your Favorites!

I'm glad you enjoyed my story. Thanks for adding it to your bookshelves!

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Thank you for favoring from biochemistry with love, may I ask what did you like most about it?

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