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Hoopy McGee

Hoopy's just this guy, you know?


Okay, I don't know if anyone can hear this, or read this, or whatever, but I'm trying my best to use Pinkie Pie's legendary fourth-wall-breaking powers to try and get a message out.

If you can hear this, I need help. I'm in Equestria, and man, this is strange. But I'm also stuck in Pinkie Pie's body, for some reason.

Yes, it's just as weird as it sounds. And now, I need your help... because all the ponies in this town think I'm crazy!

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This is just a little something I whipped up to get past a bout of writer's block. Just a silly, nonsensical thing to get the creative juices flowing and get the words coming out again.

I'll be updating this as I either get inspiration, or as I get further incidents of writer's block :twilightsheepish:

For the record, I have no clue where this story idea came from.

I loved the joke about Twilight with the Spongebob Squarepants theme. :rainbowlaugh:

"Are ya ready kids?"

"Ai, ai captain."

"I can't here you!"

"Ai, ai captain."


You know the rest. :twistnerd:

Heh heh, I love this idea! You are really catching Pinkie's personality just right, lets just hope you don't meet her alternate personality. That would be interesting... and rather creepy. :pinkiecrazy: Anyway, looking forward to more. :twilightsmile:

Not a bad premise, not terribly written, and I'm certainly curious to see how things go from here.

So, guessing Element of Laughter is being replaced so ponies at least can easier tell what is wrong and what isn't. Ponies know Pinkie to some extent. Which is supposed to direct the situation to go in direction that's not so bad. That if she doesn't want to prove to them that the fourth wall exists, which can lead to... something.

Maybe she should be glad that at least she wasn't Minty. That is what would be real scary.

Yes. Minty can make sock puppets work with hooves.:rainbowderp:

Great galloping galas of Gallifrey! THIS IS SHEER GENIUS. :pinkiegasp:

I'm now going to go scrape the mind off my wall.

I like it. Keep writing!

This is relevant to my interest :rainbowderp:

Genius...Sweet, sweet genius...

Well. There goes the neighborhood. This is going to be interesting

As for the bronie in pinkie's body, i can hear you. Don't think I can do anything, but I'll keep an eye out on the news if your body is on the floor of a target somewhere foming at the mouth gargling my little pony theme song.


You. sir, just won everything!:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

Carry On

Form defines function. Inhabit Pinkie's body, think with Pinkie's brain.

Here's hoping our protagonist can stay sane long enough to go see his favorite pony.

Hey! *taps screen* Can you hear me in there? It's working!

This shall be featured by the end of the week. I can feel it.


NICE JOKE!!!!!!!!!!!
Love the story, by the way, how you described it like you really were in pinkie's body, that is some nice imagination you got there!

Write on!:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

I can't wait to read more!

you had me at the logical assumption that you were in the paint and hardware supplies isle having a stroke gurgling the my little pony theme

I give you the 21 mustache salute!
( patent pending )

I can't wait to see if Twilight believes him. :raritywink:
*Grabs Popcorn*
Proceed. :twilightsmile:

pinkie must be all like:pinkiegasp: she is most likely in his body wondering what happened

I had almost the same story idea a couple days ago.

I look forward to seeing how this goes.

This... could be good... I'll be reserving my judgement, waiting for more.

So far, this seems like genius. I eagerly await the next chapterr :pinkiehappy:

This story is ripe with madness and comedic potential! I am now staying tuned to see what comes next~

i really like this this could turn into a very good story:pinkiehappy:

This is either going to end up being a serious comedy where he doesn't give up convincing everypony that he's really not pinkie pie until they actually start to believe him, or he's going to give up after a certain point and just pretend to be Pinkie Pie - to the point of him getting so good at the cherade nopony questions if he's alright anymore - until he can find a way to get back in touch with our favorite pink party pony.

Seeing as this is labeled random and not sad or drama, I'm going to have to assume it's the latter... then again, you can SO totally pull off a random/comedy story with either one of those premises.

Well, whether it's option A, B, or secret option C I'm really looking forward to this! Please, go on. :trollestia:

You should have a chapter of pinkie pie walking around in his body! That would be great. Btw, you punched me right in the funny:rainbowlaugh:

Bwahahaha, oh that poor Human. Of all the ponies to turn into Pinkie might be the best.

Poor fellow. Of course, if he gets shipped somewhere down the way, he'll likely discover that he hasn't technically lost genitalia at all.

And if you're going to be one of the Mane Six, let's face it: being Pinkie, by a considerable margin, has the greatest comic potential. I look forward to the next round.

inb4 Lyra madness.

Obviously, Hoopy McGee, you need to suffer from writers block more often.

To be Pinkie... Best Day Ever!!!!!!!:yay: :pinkiehappy::raritystarry::twilightsmile:

Hey, brony? Don't worry. I found your body. It's safe but (no, you can't talk to your own body; it doesn't work like that) but you see (I don't know how it works, but it doesn't, so be quiet) a certain party pony has covered my room in confetti (no, that's not a good thing, Pinkie! Just sit still!) so please figure it out, before she finds the *cake flys across room* Nevermind. :pinkiehappy::heart:

:rainbowhuh::flutterrage: STORY! Y U NO FEATURED YET?!

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The best part is that anything abnormal he does is just Pinkie being Pinkie.

Wow, I was not expecting this good of a reaction! :pinkiegasp:

I guess people kind of like this? I should really do random stuff like this more often :pinkiehappy:
I'll definitely keep this one going, then. I spent most of tonight plugging away at Sunflower, but this will make a good distraction for whenever I get stuck. Which happens distressingly often :pinkiecrazy:

Thanks for the comments, everyone!

Dude, if you want Ponyville to belive you, just do something that Pinkie would never do! I'll make a list:

1) Break a Pinkie Promise.
2) Forgive Applejack for breaking a Pinkie Promise.
3) Forget somepony in Ponyville's name.
4) Not throw a party for a whole week.
5) Make out with Gilda. (If you got the stomach for it.):pinkiesick:
6) Not laugh at a joke.
7) Reject the opportunity to babysit the Cakes. (That reminds me, Cadence was Twi's "foalsitter" but in "Baby Cakes" they use the term "babysitter." What's up with that?):rainbowhuh:
8) Describe "Cupcakes." In public.:pinkiecrazy:

This is so fun to write...

Anyway, have more. I feel oddly compelled to keep this going :pinkiehappy:

Also, did I just cliff-hanger end a chapter in a comedy story? What is wrong with me?

Already in the top box....

This idea.......

Why couldn't I think of this epicness?:raritycry:

Uh oh VISTORS, what do they want?! :pinkiegasp:

This is so awesome xD

awkward moment when writers block fic is well on it's way to catching the main one in popularity, i approve of continuing it! :pinkiehappy:

825011 Oh, yes, please do keep this going! It's also very fun to read :pinkiehappy:
You get a fav from me!

824620 Okay, you sorta did #3, but you really got to but some effort into it! Forget harder! Forget like a MAN!

Also, watch out for unexpected music numbers. Apparently, everpony is watching your every move in case you start singing. Talk about Fridge Horror!

Impromptu singing lol XD Wonder what would happen if you sand the opening theme...


Well, color me entertained. I'll be watching.

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