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Foals Errand


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Twilight Sparkle had been preparing for her entrance exam for so long, just to blow it at the end! If only she could get away to a place no one would know her.

Sometimes wishes come true.

A Collab with The Abyss

Edited by RK

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 314 )

...I did not know I needed more of this.

Please Author, may I have some more? :applecry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::twilightoops:

More. Twilight must learn to rule with an iron hoof in an iron shoe.

More please! That ending... so ambiguous and mysterious... I need to know what happened to create this universe!

Yes please give us MOREEE:flutterrage:

More or is this good? Let me know!

Yes, more, yes. More, yes.

More.

I never know what to say when people start with a picture and turn it into a story. But I like it. Carry on!

More please

More more more

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One or two minor mechanical errors, but a cute adorable fic either way, Foalsy. :twilightsmile:

Have a thumbs up!

this be good idea, I can see back in twilight normal universe they have to deal with Midnight sparkle,
make you wonder how twilight would fare as a student under Daybreake teaching

More pwease.(^.^)

he finally got out, causing Daybreaker’s fiery eye to turn its attention to _her_.

_him_, I suppose.

Also, any story with a decent Daybreaker is always appreciated.

Nice bit of cute, although there are quite a few threads left over that a continuation may do good picking up.

Tiny Twilight is adorable. Her interactions with Daybreaker are friggin' cute. :D

wow I would have never thought of somthing like this good job! Really good intresting idea.

This is good, Foals. Keep more up.

Oh no! Not Nightmare!

... *nibbles nightmare*

This caught me by surprise but now has my attention.

Yes! More adorkable Twilight shenanigans in daybreaker's universe! :yay:

Continuation has my vote.

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i agree it's so adorable plz make a sequel i love all of this cuteness

More please, I mean if that's ok with you... :yay:

Adorkable filly Twilight and Daybreaker? YES PLEASE! May I have some more?

I loved that comic as soon as I saw it on Derpibooru. Too much cute.

More or is this good? Let me know!

I find yes to both questions a suitable answer.

More, nah

MOAR, yes!

More.

Also:

Daybreaker continued to smile as her new student celebrated. Yes, a new faithful student is exactly what I need… Do not worry, Nightmare. With this one, I’ll free you of your madness. All I need is time to prepare her…

This has... interesting implications.

I'm interested in seeing where this goes

Well, this is interesting. I wonder how this will turn out for Twilight and Daybreaker.

We need to see what kind of shenanigans thses two get into.
We need MOAR!!!

Yes, more please.

I concur with my fellows good sir or madame more please.

Sent you a PM. Welcome back, Foals.

More please

:trollestia: uses the Royal Canterlot Voice........... "AS EVERYPONY ELSE HAS SAID BEFORE, MORE PLEASE!"

More, I can see this being very interesting.

I demand a sequel/continuation now!

Oh HOLY HOOF!!!

YES, YES, YEEEEEEESSSS

More TwiBreaker, PLEEEEAAAASEEEEEEEEEEEE

When you take cute characters, and have them interact them with evil characters, it makes them so much cuter.
:rainbowkiss:

By the way, is Daybreaker evil, or just a little ruthless?

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The cover image. I guess calling it a comic is rather generous.

Yes please more.

I think it would be a horrid shame if you left it here. Please continue. :pinkiesad2:

It would be a shame to let a story with this much potential cut to just one chapter

Just as the public request I say more

I want to see where this goes. So... care to continue, Author?

Yay, you remembered that Filly Twilight was very playful.

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