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Foals Errand


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Things are changing in Equestria, the ponies have decided they no longer need Princess Celestia to guide them. Celestia willingly stood down however and vanished. Unknown to Equestria she remains in disguise watching and wondering if her ponies are really ready... Oh, she's also experiencing what its like to care for a foal for the first time as well. Which will fail first Celestia's sanity or Equestrian Democracy?
*Part of Mother's Universe*

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You decided to put this separately? I can see why.


I'm still bothered by the technology...

Interesting that you decided to post the story in separate sections. It will definitely make things more easy to understand.

Prediction: This story will be featured as well

I really like how you are now going to have this this part of the story of Mother as a sprite one hope to read more form this story and more of the story Mother soon:twilightsmile:

Aww yes... it's just as good as on the first read-through.
Probably a good decision to put it separately.

i see your finely doing this X3

does this mean your going to go back to Mother?

5705972 Please go back and finish Mother.:applecry:

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i hope so, that's one of my fav stories, it's also the reason in my mlp universe luna is Twi's adopted mother

5705972 Yay! The first fimfiction story that got me into the Fandom more is finally being updated

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I might be working on a short Mother update at this very moment ^^

i hope to read more son. this was sweet.

well i see that we haver a case of not finishing a story first sickness

it will be interesting to see this era in detail.

Hmm, a great way to expand the universe you are creating, though I do feel the technology jump is a tad harder to swallow. However, if I remember this is an alternate universe, it is not quite so jarring. Though I would suggest only mentioning it if it has some significance in the storyline as a whole.

Keep it up, I'm watching this one. :twilightsmile:

Wait, this is a prequel to mother?:rainbowhuh:

5714115 more of a side to Mother. this chapter used to be in it but didn't really fit, but it was an interesting look. I'm going to assume this will cover the fall of the tribes and the return of Celestia's rule, all while Celestia takes care of Twilight.

So, the technology in this story is far ahead of the technology in the "present".
There will be something stupid happening that will cause the tech to revert. And it will be interesting to read about it, that's for certain. :pinkiehappy:
Well of course, this story will be interesting to read altogether, considering the quality of the original is still keeping :twilightsmile:

I'm guessing that whoever wins the elections, the other two races won't be satisfied and Equestria will break into civil war, sending them back to the dark ages. Then the Equestria in FIM time is just barely beginning to return to their previous level of technology, because the stuff in the show seems about late 1800's to about 1920's earth time. Other than that, how the heck do they use remotes and laptops with hooves? They'd have to be huge to have anything more than one button.

Didin't realize this chapter from Mother had been made it's own story.

I look forward to reading more of this as it goes along

Well this is nice, I think I'll keep an eye on it.

I'll see you at the next chapter.

Please update I find this story very interesting

So they don't need experinced leader to lead them but they need unexperinced corupted leaders that will die in few decades. Yay logic.

Luna is only biological mother but it's evident the real mother is Celestia.

Very touching story, very loving story amidst the darkness, I look forward to reading more.

so sad but I like it please update this, I give you a cookie

Nice intro, hope you update it soon. :twilightsmile:

I can't help but wonder... is this story finished? for you have a continuation already up.

Finally noticed this one after catching that "Mother" is updating again. I approve of breaking out this history interlude into its own story. Like some others, I found the tech 'jump' a bit jarring... but as a stand-alone story (that can be taken separately from the "source" story) it works very well on its own. This was a good decision, I think! I will follow this one to see how the politics unfold. :)

5706006 Is this a One Chapter story if you already have a sequel out, I'd suggest you make this complete.

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This was originally part of Mother, however many people insisted I make it it's own story so I did. It is not complete and not really a prequel. Consider it an optional side story.

Aw, come on! You totally missed the opportunity to have one of them be named Pony-Wan!

Interesting concept. A shame it was never followed up on.

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"That is not dead which can eternal lie..." :pinkiehappy:

It's aliiiiivveee!!!

Well, I didn't expect this story to update! Still interested though. I do want to see this expanded upon good author.

Hmmm... I don't normally read slice of life stories, but this seems interesting. What did Luna think about this decision?

It's alive and a good and funny update thanks

Hey unicorns. I think you gave a bigger problem then a flaring filly.

And oh GOD ITS ALIVE!

that last bit gave me harry potter vibes with the magic reversal squad xD

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I may have taken that bit straight from the third book...I couldn't think of a better name >.<

I'm still interested!

Yay not a dead story i still like the story's concept of Celestia raising an infant Twilight

Neat. Good to see more.

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