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Phoenix Nebula


Chaos is not the opposite of Harmony but apart of it. Both chaos and order together create a balance known as Harmony. Without one you cannot have have the other and without either there is nothing.

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Nightmare Moon is alone and wishes to have a daughter to share her kingdom on the moon with. Twilight is alone and wishes to have a mother that will love her. What happens when their wishes are granted? Read and find out.


So let's just turn this into a meme why don't we? Filly Twilight adopted by Villian X! I don't know I saw the ones with Daybreaker and Chrysalis and thought, "Oh what the hell I'll do it too because it's fun!" So here I am bringing you a story in a similar vein. Please enjoy the story and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is welcome. If you are going to downvote tell me why you did so I can improve. (Unless you're being an a**hole than I don't want you here.)


Featured on 7/10/18
Day one featured! That's awesome thank you all!


HOLLY S**T DAY ONE AND MY STORY IS CONSIDERED HOT! THIS IS AMAZING THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH!!!

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Comments ( 122 )

This is a great story can't wait for the squeal

Filly Twilight adopted by Villian X! I don't know I saw the ones with Daybreaker and Chrysalis and thought, "Oh what the hell I'll do it too because it's fun!"

Can I please get a link to those stories?

A wonderful story that truly deserves to be continued!

Yessss sequelll

Great story. Cant wait for the sequel

Oh god damn it! dies of heart attack

Holy shit...I started an adorable trend! *Squees!*

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Yes, and I can't wait to see if anyone continues it!

Sometimes, we just need kindness to help us great through the day.

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HOLLY HELL THIS STORY MAD IT ON TO FEATURED ON DAY ONE! This is my third story in a row to do this! YOU ARE ALL AMAZING!!

A lovely story that manages to be quite sweet without dipping into the saccharine. I quite enjoyed this, and I look forward to your sequel.

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Well the only other villians left are Discord, Sombra, and Tirek, and Tirek already has his own story. The other two would be interesting though.

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There are plans, but I have other stories in the works at the moment so it could be a while before I get around to it.

>I upvote at 22 upvotes.
>It updates.
>Now there's 44 upvotes!
WTF?

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A friend of mine suggested that I do Sombra, but I already had planned to do NMM. I do hope to see what one with Discord would be like. Twilight has always been those untapped potential characters I think due to the fact that magic is her key defining trait and that really opens up the door to many options for a story to take. I look forward to people continuing this trend.

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Still not sure if that's good or bad. I'll take it as good for now.

I saw only one error. You used her self instead of herself, it's one word. Now I need to find a way to absorb all of the cuteness I just got exposed to. :heart:

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Thanks for pointing it out Grammarly is only so good. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Stories like one are why I have a Seriously Cuddly bookshelf. And you're quite welcome. Feedback like that only makes us better writers. :eeyup:

I give you a clap and a half, good story

Love it! You did a good job with introducing their problems, and this was pure cuteness.

Oh my God, my heart can't handle this much adorableness! I demand a sequel now!

More please!

Glad there is a sequel already in the works. I’m curious if Celestia would sense another being now existing on the moon.

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I think I saw a story where Sombra went back in time, kidnapped Twilight and made her his daughter. But it's rated M.

You know what? I think I want in on this whole Twilight adopted by villain thing... :trixieshiftright:

Sequel please!

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Better hurry, we're running out of villians. I think we're down to Sombra and Discord. Tirek already has his own. Born In Light, Forged In Darkness. It's pretty good, I think you'll like it.

This is adorable. I kinda wanna see what happens when they get released from the moon.

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I'm already reading that, and villain era Starlight is out too with Children of Glimmer... hmm...

This is impressive. And yea, I also would love to see it continued...

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Now remember, the Multiverse is infinite, (to a degree) there's always room for another story. Huh, there's always Grogar, we could say that Twilight's test actually killed her, straight up. But Grogar, Wraith-Lord of Tambelon, noticed the explosion in the world of the living, and snagged Twilight's spirit as a curiosity before she could properly pass on.

There's a setup, Grogar's got Twilight, Celestia just saw her hope to free her sister reduced to lavender dust, and Nightmare Moon is only 15-20 years away. The only real Question is what business Grogar would send his adopted Daughter back to the land of the living for.

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WELL WHATA YA SITTING AROUND STARING AT ME FER? GET ON WIF IT THEN!

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Very interesting. That would work perfectly for the7saviors being he's a grimdark writer. It also ties into the idea that Twilight's immense magical talent I mentioned before getting Groggor's attention. I would definitely love to see that.

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I got so excited about the idea that I actually started writing it after I saw Venerable Ro's post. I'm writing it as we speak, though I don't know when I'll be done with it...

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Take your time. This actually took me four days to write because I couldn't get all my ideas to flow out onto the keyboard. I can't wait to see what a fellow Twilight fan does with this concept.

Looking forward to the sequel!:twilightsmile:

cute start so need more,
the summer sun happen luna come back with twilight next to her, and don't cause ever lasting night, but get long with family...

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I went looking for "Children of Glimmer" and "Child of Glimmer" and had no luck. I don't suppose you can point me in the direction of this "Starlight Glimmer raises...." I am not sure if she is raising just Twilight or the whole Mane6 given the name.

If the latter, I must congratulate Starlight on doing revenge right in this Universe. Why destroy them when you can raise them as your own equality minions.

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