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Apr
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2015

My mood right now · 4:06am Apr 8th, 2015

My grandma just died. I sat in my car in the parking lot at my job, and listened to her heartbeat monitor fail over the phone. I don't know what to do right now, except cry.

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What are these, you ask? Why, groups to help you out, of course! This story has multiple errors in it that can ruin the reading experience for the typical fimfic-goer. This can be, but is not limited to, bad grammar, bad characterization, overly clich├ęd story idea, too slow or fast pacing, walls of text, bad punctuation, comma misuse, and so on and so on. You can get into more specifics by asking an editor to look over your story and provide feedback so you can improve.

Also, if you don't know how to write a story, but want to give it a go anyways, stop, listen, and go to the School for New Writers group first before you write something that I can almost guarantee half the site hates and will down vote into oblivion.

Have a nice day! :pinkiehappy:

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2273956 Still writing my (hopefully) soon-to-be novel 'Lux Locus' with a space magitech setting over on Inkitt, I've been studying to get into the third portion of my network specialist certificate (because I failed the second one in May), and have been getting back to my old habit of one chapter a day.

2273071 Just about to play video games. I'm going to a Vocational Rehab thing tomorrow due to my ADHD and Autism, and I need a haircut badly. How about yourself? :twilightsmile:

And NOW how are you?

2078674 Sorry! Haven't been on my laptop all weekend; Xenoblade Chronicles X and Smash Bros ate my time... I guess it depends on what story you mean.

I haven't read SMG, so I wouldn't know where to point you to on that one, and your xenophilia fic is well written, though I don't remember if you had a proofreader or not... I don't know what you need, actually, sorry... :twilightblush:

As for the post above itself, it's there mainly so any fics I stumble across that have potential but are sorely lacking in constructive criticism (or those fics whose authors are spiteful towards people helping them overtly), but if you feel you need one of those groups' services, feel free to like around and check them out. :twilightsmile:

So I have a little bit of time. In your quote up top with all of those editing groups, which one would you recommend for my story? Thanks!

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