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tom117z


A Twilight Sparkle fanboy who also likes to write. The author of the Change series.

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A tragic event forces Twilight to take over raising the sun every day, and lowering it every night.

And nothing has been the same since.

As the years go by, things only seem to fall apart even more, and perhaps only one can give Twilight something to hold on to, to drive her forward into the future.

Can she hold on to Luna? Or will everything left she holds dear, simply slip away?


(Featured 24/05/2016)

Chapters (25)
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sounds interesting but im going to wait a wile before i try to read it

Reminds me of the setting of Cry for Eternity. But it's different enough to have its very own intrigue. Looking forward to where you're going with this. Also nice chapters and THE FEELS ARE REAL!s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/originals/1f/c8/9d/1fc89d5be234e5a48cf8a8b0106527db.gif

Beautifully written.

Nice start. Let's see where it goes. I know a lot of Sombra fans who would like the Grogar cameo.

This chapter made me cry...especially when it said

The sun had finally set for Princess Celestia.

Thats when i lost it and broke down. I cant....just...everytime i read that sentence, i shed a few tears...well done good sir, well done

Just how unhappy will the ending be?

Why am I reading something that has the Tragedy tag? I keep doing this to myself. :facehoof: :rainbowlaugh:

Sometimes I hate myself for reading sad stories. :applecry: :facehoof: :raritycry: :fluttershbad:

Another great tearjerker in the making. Right well done, that it is.

how sad, me think twilight going to go nightmare at one point.....

Wow that was ... ominous

7027608 Hmm very interesting I think the upcoming war has to do with Twilight becoming a nightmare or not. Also somewhere in the road ahead of her she will problably have to deal with a) Cadence dying willingly or b) have to fight a nightmare Cadence, at least that's my theory I could be wrong.
-Techy

Nice set up for whatever you have to come (or we'll know that for sure when we get there, right :rainbowlaugh: Always good to see Discord. He's such a smart ass and knows too much about the future. Keep up the good work!

What happened to her?

7091700 Grogar killed her in the prologue...

Discord! Leave the bottled evil alone. :rainbowlaugh:

Hmmmm me thinks the Umbrum King will make its appearance

6986741 Why would that be, and where exactly would this Grogar cameo be?

yea for update good chapter, i half expects something to go wrong,

A nice and sweet, but too short chapter.


Huh. Came back to bite me in the ***. :twilightsheepish:

7114243 First chapter....hes the one who killed Starlight and Celestia

good update, and dam you flurry heart, you should wait 5 more mins and then you would have saw them kissing

Give in to the Smoochy Side, Luna. It is your destiny... :rainbowlaugh:

i love how this is progressing, even though the chapters are on the shorter side they are still brimming with content. I love Flurry making her own mark on the world and Twilight slowly turning into Celestias demeanor. With the serene mask and cunning behind the facade. Celestia would be proud yet sad to see Twilight walking down the simmilar road that she did when she banished Luna. Luna's comment that they are very alike may hit closer to home than she wants to admit. But i like it a lot. And Luna's inner conflict with herself is really good too. But destiny is calling Twilight, sometime soon. You have to step out of your mentors shadow. Also when Twilight gets upset, does the area she's in get smoldering hot cause she channels the sun in her emotions? Anyways good chapter!

I think the voice is either nightmare moon or the celestia and luna's mother

ok... creepy proffesor... DAAAAMN

7158967 It seems like the voice is (or was) acquainted with Sunset. I wonder if it's part of Sunbutt.

7159963 it good idea i though about at the start, but i think it one of her other persoanlity like molitia or trollteistia

"The sun scorches both of our souls, but only one is deserving"

That was litterary what i thought when Twi went ballistic on Blueblood. A cookie to the one who catches the reference. Eagerly await more and i am glad that the sun indeed reacts to Twilights mood. It's a touch i've always loved. Wonder if Luna heard her Outburst. The signs of Twilight not being well are there, now it is only left to see what will happen to her. Also the professor seems like quite a creep might just be me overthinking it. But he kinda worded the exchange between him and Heart so it seemed a little bit off. But we will see :rainbowhuh:

7160140 yeah my creep scene is a tingling

7198508 Gah, the bane of every avid reader :flutterrage:

Nooooo, why do you have to leave us with such a cliff hanger?!!! :fluttercry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

why most there be freak cliff hanger, please post next chapter asap

Why such a cliff hanger:applecry::fluttercry::raritycry::fluttercry:

It's always Sombras in the Crystal Empire. I thought they'd sprayed for those already! :twilightangry2: :rainbowlaugh:

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Will you three shut up, and wait patiently for the next chapter?!

7220328 yeap i tend to do so i just get super excited

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Sure, I tend to get excited about those things.

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