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Huk


Just your average, useless person who thinks that this whole 'life' thing is overrated.

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Trying to figure out what went wrong with this story... · 11:50am September 29th

This is pretty much a re-post of this request: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/924/i-just-want-a-comment/thread/449503/trying-to-figure-out-what-went-wrong-with-this-thing

I'm looking for some feedback on a story:

TA Fading Mirage of Friendship
Twilight has everything going for her. She is an Element of Magic, has loyal friends, and now she's become the princess of the whole Equestria. It's like a dream come true. Too bad, all dreams must come to an end...
Huk · 2.2k words  ·  20  4 · 510 views

This thing got almost no traction, and I'm trying to figure out why. I tried reading and re-reading, listening, and re-listening, but... it seems fine to me. I'm at a loss...

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Thanks for the follow! :pinkiehappy:
I bet I know why ;)

Huk

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Here you go:

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Now THAT'S what I call a TREAT :trollestia:

TRICK OR TREAT :rainbowkiss:

Thanks for the watch. :)

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haha! Guess I have some sort of pinkie sence! :rainbowlaugh:

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