EThe Price of Guilt
MLP: FiM
Drama
Slice of Life
Celestia is enjoying the end of a peaceful day in Canterlot, when Luna asks her a simple question: 'Who had foretold the return of Nightmare Moon?' She may not like the answer...
Celestia
Luna
Huk · 2.5k words · 236 3 · 1.9k views
TThe Lying Six
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
Twilight is showing Celestia her new invention – an advanced lie detector. Without her knowledge, Luna and James asked her friends to join the presentation. But that shouldn't be a problem. After all, the mane six has nothing to hide! … right?
Sex
Human
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
OC
Main 6
Huk · 2.4k words · 624 20 · 5.4k views
TA Fading Mirage of Friendship
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
Tragedy
Twilight has everything going for her. She is an Element of Magic, has loyal friends, and now she's become the princess of the whole Equestria. It's like a dream come true. Too bad, all dreams must come to an end...
Death
Twilight
Main 6
Huk · 2.2k words · 20 4 · 510 views
TThe Great And Powerful Job Interview
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
The adolescent princess Flurry Heart is looking for a job. The good news is that the School of Friendship is looking for an assistant to help Trixie. The bad news is, all candidates need to take a lie detector test, with Trixie as the recruiter...
Sex
Trixie
Flurry Heart
Huk · 1.3k words · 193 6 · 1.8k views
TWhy Celestia Never Helps…
MLP: FiM
Dark
Sad
During the celebration of another victory for Equestria, Rainbow Dash asks Celestia why she never helps them fight the bad guys. She never thought the answer involves ancient history and Daybreaker...
Death
Rainbow Dash
Celestia
Huk · 3.3k words · 316 23 · 3.2k views
EThe Final Sundown
MLP: FiM
Drama
Sad
Twilight feared she would outlive her family and friends, but she never thought she would outlive Celestia and Luna first.
Death
Twilight
Celestia
Huk · 3.7k words · 50 4 · 828 views

My Stories That Got Featured

Dashing to Dirty Conclusions Rainbow Dash is fast in everything - including jumping to conclusions and gossiping. One day, she eavesdrops on a rather lewd conversation between Rarity and local human and it goes downhill from there. Then Celestia gets involved... by Huk 8,468 words · 383 · 37
Why Celestia Never Helps… During the celebration of another victory for Equestria, Rainbow Dash asks Celestia why she never helps them fight the bad guys. She never thought the answer involves ancient history and Daybreaker... by Huk 3,286 words · 316 · 23
The Final Sundown Twilight feared she would outlive her family and friends, but she never thought she would outlive Celestia and Luna first. by Huk 3,740 words · 50 · 4

Stories that made it inside the feature box.

It Seemed Like a Good Idea at the Time

Rarity and the Cough of Booty While in the shopping mall, Rarity finds herself fighting off the call of wild burritos she ate hours earlier. And she's losing. by Huk 2,037 words · 21 · 23
Luna Claus - a Christmas Story Hearth's Warming Eve is coming, everypony is happy... except Luna. Certain human have a little idea, to cheer her up... by Huk 2,933 words · 11 · 9

Stories I am not exactly proud of...

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Trying to figure out what went wrong with this story... · 11:50am September 29th

This is pretty much a re-post of this request: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/924/i-just-want-a-comment/thread/449503/trying-to-figure-out-what-went-wrong-with-this-thing

I'm looking for some feedback on a story:

TA Fading Mirage of Friendship

Twilight has everything going for her. She is an Element of Magic, has loyal friends, and now she's become the princess of the whole Equestria. It's like a dream come true. Too bad, all dreams must come to an end...

Huk · 2.2k words · 20 4 · 510 views

This thing got almost no traction, and I'm trying to figure out why. I tried reading and re-reading, listening, and re-listening, but... it seems fine to me. I'm at a loss...

Report Huk · 115 views · Story: A Fading Mirage of Friendship · #feedback request

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