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bob1234567


peace and war, both are his tools.

May
19th
2020

2020 · 4:57am May 19th

starting 2nd year of college and have improved my writing skill a tad. still suck, but getting better.

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i like good writing and i like surprises.

Thanks for the favourite on A Pilot's Search!

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Thank you for the favorite

2852269i finish all storys I start want to see if the writer improves. So far you have a good world but the character is a little ruff and just needs some polish. Pick some traits for him and stick with them. People don't change easily so it is good to show him having stuck traits then slowly losing them or growing with him. If you want to do a herm do it because he got to know the other characters really well over years not days. Good luck

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