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Oct
30th
2019

One Straw · 4:13am October 30th

What does it take to save a man?
What does it take to kill a man?
A lot.
What does it take to make a man take his own life?


I’m two weeks away from getting my car repossessed for nonpayment.
I don’t have any money to pay the bill.
All my credit cards are maxed out and overdue.
My insurance payment has been... postponed.  I’m two and a half weeks away from that getting cancelled for nonpayment.
I have a loan that’s overdue as well.

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Sure, thank you for your opinion. I'll try to write another chapter when I can do so.

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You're welcome!

It's a very nice story. Aside from that the-window-is-moving thing I mentioned in story, I didn't notice any problems- though I did notice and comment on the boyfriend's reaction... before I finished reading the scene. I must say, I really like how you've pulled it off- he has the feel of a protective, worried, and smart boyfriend, responding to her vehement refusal not with a demand or affront, or with dishonesty, but with logical persuasion... in the end, she really had no choice but to let him, from the moment she refused so hard. I really enjoyed reading that scene, and look forward to reading about what happens when he sees her.

Thank you so much for adding my story to your favourites! :heart:

Thank you for the watch! I hope that you continue to enjoy my various stories and timelines. :twilightsmile:

Hey, thanks for the interest! Don't forget to rate and tell me what you thought.

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