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Fifteen years after Ash Ketchum accomplished his goal of becoming a Pokemon Master the spotlight shifts towards a new generation and leading the way is ten-year-old Turquoise Dusk whose goal is to be both the top coordinator and champion. Join her as she travels the Kanto Region and begins her journey. Pokemon from all known regions will be seen throughout the story but the whole story will be taking place in Kanto.

Chapters (42)
Comments ( 108 )

10174263 It takes time to write chapters, and asking the author when the next chapter will come out is generally considered rude.

As for this fanfic:

  • Why is there a space after every opening quotation mark?
  • There’s a Pokémon tag on this site.
  • There are multiple lines of dialogue that you forgot to put quotation marks around, such as here:

“ You must be Turquoise, we've been expecting you,” The Assistant said. After showing Turquoise to the Professor who was a man with brown hair who looked to be no older than his mid-twenties the assistant got his attention. Professor the new trainer is here.

“ Ah you must be Turquoise we've been expecting you,” Professor Oak said before pulling out three pokeballs. First, let me introduce you to the three starters you have to pick from first-up the Fire-type Charmander. An orange bipedal salamander with a flame on the tip of its tail suddenly came out of one of the pokeballs and smiled. Next is the Water-type Squirtle. A blue turtle-like creature came out of another Pokeball and began to look timid. And finally the Grass-type Bulbasaur. A green plant-like creature with a bulb on its back came out of the final Pokeball and looked determined and ready for action. After thinking it over for a minute Turquoise made her decision.

  • Two different characters also say the same line in a row, which looks redundant.
  • If Turquoise already has Eevee, why is Oak giving her a starter?

10174314
Eevee was more like a house pet so Turquoise was originally planning on leaving her at home with her mom. The same reason why hop has both a starter and his wooloo.

10174314
I wonder if Ash will appear in the story.

10174368
you will have to wait and see

10174385
Can't wait! But how does Twi, Fluttershy, and Applejack get into the picture?

10174395
if you mean Twi Rarity and Applejack think of them as the new version of Ash and his friends. Twilight is the one aiming for the Indigo League. Rarity is aiming for the grand festival. And Applejack is the brock of the group since she is the one doing the cooking.

That doesn’t make any sense!! 1st gym leaders usually have Pokémon levels at 12 or 14!

10178191
I'm not sure those rules apply to the anime.

10178193
Well in the Pokémon anime, certain Pokémon's evolutions don't appear later. Much later that involve their 3rd forms with high levels and a evolution item

10179002
No, just the Pokemon. I mean maybe Rhyhorn and Geodude instead of their 3rd forms.

I wonder if Turquoise will meet Ash in person. I bet he's the Kanto Champion now and is keep getting stronger. Ash's generation better watch out because the new generation is showing promise.

I hope the girls cross paths with Ash and Pikachu.

10193648
lets just say when Turquoise returns to Viridian City you will get your wish

10193683
Wait? Is Ash now a… GYM LEADER!!!!

10194000
maybe :) you're just gonna have to wait and find out

10194008
Ok or something bigger than that.

I wonder if Turquoise has Ash as her idol along with Dawn since they are amazing Pokémon trainers. I have a feeling that a Neo Team Rocket will appear sometime soon. Then the desendents of Jessie and James along with Meowth will try to capture everyone's Pokémon.

Great start. I always did like Pokémon. Now that Twilight Sparkle and Rarity made an appearance, I can't wait to see how the rest of the Equestria Girls cast fits in.

Silicobra’s ability Sand Spit. When you hit Sandicobra with an attack he unleashes a sandstorm. Now it's our turn to attack. Sandicobra use Brutal Swing. Sandicobra bit his tail and spun around like a ring with Espeon being unable to sense where he was thanks to the Sandstorm and was nailed for a supereffective hit.

Sandicobra or Silicobra? (Also its Sandaconda, not Sandicobra)

10211191
thanks for pointing out my mistake I meant for it to be Silicobra since we are not close to the level Silicobra Evolves at yet.

What happened to Brock? In the video games, HE'S the leader of the Pewter Gym.

10217174
brock is a pokemon doctor now in the anime he left his younger brother Forrest in charge of the Gym

I wonder where is Ash and Pikachu anyway? Besides Kanto is his home region. Also what happened to Team Rocket did Ash manage to beat Giovanni and shut him down.

Man Team Rocket always get in the short end of the stick.

Can't wait to see the next chapter! Next up Lt Surge and Richu

Yamper? I never heard of that Pokémon. Is that from Shield and Sword or Sun and Moon?

10231901
I'm working on it right now

10231907
Sweet! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Supernova is asking for trouble when Ash hears what's going on and takes them down. Can't wait to see Jessie, James, and Meowth get shocked by Pikachu's Thunderbolt like old times.

Twilight caught a Rowlett? That's cool. And, I assume that Rookidee is from Shield and Sword.

I think I know who is Misty going to see.

Cerulean, not Cerluleon

I love it so far keep up the good work bro

10219274
Maybe. But, at least in this chapter, Jessie does have her own set of Princess dolls. I'm very surprised when the original members of Team Rocket, Jessie, James, and Meowth, are picking up where Giovanni left off. But, when did Team Rocket change to Team Supernova?

10279696
Yeah I wonder that too. Probably when Ash finally defeats the leader of Team Rocket.

10219187
In the previous chapter, Team Rocket alumni, Jessie, James, and Meowth, are now in charge of Team Supernova. Apparently, those three changed the name of the organization.

10289002
Oh ok. I got a feeling their plans are about to go up in smoke as usual.

Can't wait for Zorua to become Zorark! Dazey Night with Jessie, James, and Meowth's name on it too.

When will Turquoise get to her 4th gym battle? Who will she battle?

10301258
In two more Chapters, the girls will be in Celadon City so they will be seeing Erika soon.

10301684
Ok. So Turquoise is gonna need a Fire type Pokemon like her Ninetails to battle Grass type Pokemon.

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