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Soul King Vulcar


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I guess I should explain. I became the most powerful psychic type Pokémon in the world after buying something for my costume. But when I arrived in my Equestria, ponies were technologically advanced with the earth ponies getting steam powered, pegasi getting wind powered and unicorns getting magic gems powered. But noble ponies have electric powered tech, apparently not even the princesses know about this but then the nobles tried to catch me like they captured pokémon here, with cages, not pokéballs and that frustrated me! Now, here I stand, with my artificial nation, waiting to strike back against Equestria! Come Princesses and Elements! TEST MY STRENGTH!!!!

(Pokémon and My Little Pony isn't mine but if it was, I would be hiring people to help me with story ideas)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 35 )

I hope you're not gonna end up like this other displaced author who makes too many displaced stories and never finishes or updates them..

Comment posted by Zepher deleted Mar 17th, 2020

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Well, I do have two days where I have time to myself and I use those days to sorta relax

Great story I love it I hope it comes back soon 😁:twilightsheepish:

I am loving this so far I can't wait to see where this goes.

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1 month? Many fics here have several months, if not multiple years between chapters.

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Reason for my chapter for taking a while is cause I am thinking what could come next

Please update soon. It's already July.

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You could do a time jump to when mewtwo sends out invitations.

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Alright. But Psy isn’t like the Mewtwo of the movies. Let me do the story on how I do it.

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Just a suggestion is all. I've just seen the movie and that is how it happened.

Need some major help with the editing, the story has way too much rush on it,meaning that you're trying to get two things way too quickly, try to build up upon that so people are anticipating what is going to happen next, if you need to I can help you with any edits. Cuz you need some big help with this story it seems

Misunderstood monster, trying to conquer Equestria instead of convincing them he means them no harm.

Quite the riddle

Can I recommend a great proofreader? As a means to help out.

This story was all over the place.

I wonder if there'll be a nee chapter

But noble ponies have electric powered tech, apparently not even the princesses know about this but then the nobles tried to catch me like they captured pokémon here, with cages, not pokéballs and that frustrated me! Now, here I stand, with my artificial nation, waiting to strike back against Equestria! Come Princesses and Elements! TEST MY STRENGTH!!!!

Um!!! Shouldn't he just tell the truth that he and the other captured Pokemon are the victims here. And give the Mane Six and the Princesses some solid evidence that those Noble A-Holes are the real bad guys?!

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Well, he is going to tell Luna in a conversation in a dream where memories are more easily shared. That is going to be for next chapter.

Chapter wasn't bad. Just a suggestion make ch 1 longer it now feels like you are rushing through it.

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Like I said in my author notes, didn’t know what to go from what I done so far

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But, chapter one is a prologue, and I want to do my stories right

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I understand that but now it just felt that you didn't take any time for the prologe and just rushed through it. Events happening to fast after each other and the like without any time to digest what happened before it.

Take some time to describe what happens and the surroundings. Give the reader some time for the change that happened. It now feels like you tried to cram a 3-5k word chapter into a 1-2k word chapter.

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