• Member Since 18th Mar, 2016
  • offline last seen 14 minutes ago

GamePlayer64


Classified

T

Inspired by a webcomic/Manga called The Gamer. This story will involve original characters that will involve the EG movies and there's a possible that they will travel to Equestria and might not appear as Ponies. Don't own it nor MLP FIM but OCs' names belong to me and I will use a ton of references from games, cartoons, anime and other things I know and don’t remember until I remember it from the real world. Here's a link if you want to read 'The Gamer' https://www.webtoons.com/en/fantasy/the-gamer/list?title_no=88

Chapters (57)
Comments ( 311 )

The gamer manga is awesome.
Here's to hoping you crafted a great story.

They really want that switch.

Ha sun set needs a higher level xD

This was great, hope to see more! :twilightsmile:

More please. (but take you're time)

I think I'm in love.

I have never seen any reference to The Gamer anywhere online, and now not only do I find a crossover fic for it, it's got solid OCs, decent character development, and minimal spelling problems, most of which are common mistakes. I can't wait to see what happens next.

This. This has my attention.

Whats their lv

8751758
His new pets/buds?

8752093
It’s below the Heartless book in the author’s note.

i wonder if it possible for the rest of the gamers to get his abilities in the future or will game life?

Approved! keep it up!

Looks like cooking turned into a restaurant game

The all rounder continues.
Love me some Disgaea . beat baal in ever one except last 2

Ah those stats and descriptions are getting large.
The ones we already saw can be cut.

O3o

She was a ghost and smacked it as it vanished

Ghost taking damage to physical damage?!

People can be sexy with a sex tag. That's for the act of sex and getting into descriptions about it.

Question: can a story book become a skill book?

8811996
Unless it has magical properties; Here’s a size on the Webcomic that inspired me, The Gamer. http://m.webtoons.com/en/

yep just a gamers luck

8812031
I mean if he go to a library and take a book, can it be a skill book

References. References everywhere.

8812046
Nope. I read the webcomics; Normal books cannot be turned to skills.

8812065
But the book he was giving (not looting) was not magic, it was a book you read to learn heel. You get it?

8812073
Still no way. If he did it by action than that would be turned into a skill.

8812095
But you understand what i mean, the book is not magical but he teach magic. 'The gamer' just sacrifice the book to directly learn it
If he have a medical book he can learn biology or something like that

Trouble comes knocking.

8812099
How about you see the actual webcomic and see it through that link in that comment.

8812135
I have already read it
My point is Han Jihan never have tested if he can learn no-magical thing from book, when he command a book from abyss auction is a normal book you need to reed to learn it, the gamer make it more easy

8812137
That makes scense. Sorry for the mix up. To be honest; the only time Han Jihan read normal books is when he’s doing homework.

8812154
Dont worry it no big deal everyone can make mistakes and it was not a big one anyway
And if he learn biology he can make more damage on human body or something like that
And it the first normal skill that can be useful in combat i can think about
It will be funny if he read peter pan and get a skill to fly ( or at least slow the speed he fall)

Question: can he have skill that come from other game like i dont know.... kingdom hearts (only example, to many bullshit you need to deel with when you have a keyblade) or unlock a new id creation without the risk of destroying the world with heartless (would be funny to see him taming a heartless)

so where is there question here, its B for sure hahahaha

I am very pleased with this one.

Okay... Not sure how he has friends if he lost the ability to care.

You've given me Game Life's stats and backstory before I can actually know him and have a reason to care about him.

Also, please make more use of paragraphs.

Comment posted by GamePlayer64 deleted Apr 14th, 2018

Nice work, keep it up.

You forgot to tell us in the synopsis what happens in the story. What happens in the story?

Ok, love the new chapter, don’t like the massive stat text walls. They are kind of interesting and all, but they interfere with the story. They also overinflate the word count. If you could reduce the frequency of their use, and shorten them down or something, that would be good.

some guys have all the luck( wither its good or bad hahah0

Nice new chapter! I like the additional character development for Dark Speed. The sudden appearance of the Amazons would probably seem a little forced if this weren’t a gamer fanfic, but overall you pulled it off rather well!

I bet you Death Alchemist and his girlfriend end up in bed together.

I'm First!!!!!!!!!!!!

Also, Large Harvest & Tough Exo is my choice.

Login or register to comment