A man is transported to Equestria as a "Gamer."
Fighting monsters, leveling up, and learning the Magic of Friendship.
The main characters magic system will be based heavily on Skyrim, Kingdoms Of Amalur: Reckoning, and DnD.
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The idea sounds good. The banter with Faust and Jackson decent, but I think a little too relaxed with Celestia.
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Does it seem like that? I tried to make her seem passive, like it doesn't really faze her. Though I might just, tinker with it a bit to fix that.
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Ok. This definitely feels better. From what we've seen of her in the show and comics she'll be a lot more relaxed out of view of the guards. Looking forward to seeing how things go.
So question about the Skyrim magic. Will that be base game or will mods like Phenderix and Apocalypse be included?
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Base game, I might even add a few of the dlc spells.
gg I like it
This has potential.
Have high hopes for later konosuba references...
Just a weee bit fast perhaps make it longer with more details or the conversations slower and more natural otherwise this has alot of potential
Isekai means 'another world', thus this translates into "My little another world."
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Even if it is a joke you're not wrong.
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Eyyyy~
I'm liking it well enough so far, you seem to have forgotten to bold the Gamer text though, might want to fix that.
Also, shouldn't he be effected by Gamer's Mind, if that's a thing, to mitigate his unholy fear of Princess Celestia?
Do you have a pic of the short fat princess ?
Oops.
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Saddly no
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I've always thought that aspect of Gamers Mind seemed a little dumb, unless the character is a fiend or undead.
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Yeah, but in the context of how the Gamer works, it's supposed to be how a person playing a video game would react. Sure, you might get scared, or panic a little bit, but not true terror or panic attacks like you would in the actual situation.
"There's more than one God?"
"Well yes, but actually no,"
Mother fucker just meemed in the first chapter
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guard training hall would be good for the 2 days before he departs...
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What about cheats?
And peculiar Skyrim things
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Also will he grow a backbone?
Stories where main character does what is said and doesn't question anything becomes boring
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1: Absolutely not.
2: yes, he will, once he understands his surroundings
And 3: I could never manage to pull off the bucket glitch, everytime i'd move, they'd run after me.
Nice, keep it coming. I was thinking about doing a isekai story with the same name, but ya beat me to it lol. Now I need to think of a new name.
Nice
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
I like this so far. If Twilight finds out about the magic Jace can do, he’s doomed.
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Are you talking about the main character or the MTG planes walker?
I still don't know why so many of these stories have the MC immediately be scared shitless of Princess Celestia. It's not very interesting, and, in particularly bad cases, comes across as fan-wanking. I liked that snark at the beginning toward Faust, but Jack's backbone seemed to evaporate the moment he arrived in pony-land. Can't we have a little more snark? Snark is fun.
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He will, again once he fully understands his situation, and now that he has the ability to block his emotions, he'll definitely be less scared of Celestia, not quite "snarky" yet, but not afraid.
The difference between Faust and Celestia is, Faust is formless, he could sense her presence, but not feel it. Celestia leaks magic, a lot of it, due to her being physical. She's also 68 levels above him and taking a very aggressive approach. Many could say they'd be brave in the face of this, but let's face the facts, they wouldn't, they'd be scared shittless.
Now that he's more comfortable around Celestia, his snarky personality will present itself, just not prevalently at first.
I apologise if that's the feeling you got, I'm still trying to improve, I just wanted the first encounter to be a bit, realistic. Might have missed the mark, but C'est La Vie.
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About 2 hours ago.
10084047 The MC, of course. I wasn’t exactly specific.
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Lol.
I just hope
- he won't be some kind of Celestia lackey, doormat, soldier
- won't do everything others say because "he has to", "its good thing to do "," if you don't you are bad/evil"
-he isn't goody-two-shoes
Characters, without ambition determination, that are goody-two-shoes are booooring
Does he have something like a world pause and exit feature?
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no.... that'd be broken
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Phew thk god cause then u can ad some bs thing like a training ground where he can learn things like jutsus ki abilities etc. I saw some gamer fics do that and im like seriously. I mean i dont mind him learning those things but its op if u can just summon a master of the art and tell how to do it insteqd of figuring it out urself
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dungeon time however does run at half speed.
meaning 4 hours in the dungeon is actually just 2 in reality.
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Oh thats useful if hes trying to kill time or something
This is pretty good so far. Keep up the good work!
Read up to the current chapter, Ch.3, and the number one thing I recommend is going with an alternative deity or deities to the use of Christian or other church diety. The reason why is it can come across as hypocritical at the least to use magic with any form of material or reference to the churches as they outright deny magic and the concept of other gods, let alone other forms of intelligent life. The witch trials and invasion of other cultures are prime examples of the persecution any church organization has committed in history.
Perhaps have a council of gods and spirits as the ones who sent Jackson to Faust as they have so much paperwork on their hands already or something such as that?
As for any other things, perhaps use other expressions in place of the "Oh god" type exclamations. Using expressions that relate to his family's heritage and ancestry would add to his character and give a uniqueness.
Other than what I've said, I see no real issue with what's been written. It has a nice manga feel to each chapter that doesn't drag on and none of the chapters have ended, as of yet, on an annoying cliffhanger. I eagerly await to see what you write next.
So far this is quite the enjoyable read. *Sips Tea* I do hope to see more updates in the future
will you update this?