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Thank you for that! I do admit to worrying over my vocabulary during stories. Next time I'll aim to be a little more verbose. Thanks so much for the reply!

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To put it simply, your story was Greta however it lacked a thorough punch that I usually attribute to the 1 point before 10.

Overall you did a good job of portraying character emotions through actions and additionally the interactions between said characters were mostly smooth. Grammar and diction chekc sout, use of vocabulary is average, storyline, mostly solid, end, complete.

All I'd really ecommend you seek a wider range of vocabulary, the same of which, also applies to me.

Thank you for placing The Return of Sunset in your 8/10 folder! Please let me know what I could have done to get a higher score in your books!

Thank you for putting The Voice of Reason in your 8/10 library! May I ask what you liked about my story?

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Your welcome, it was a pleasure.