• Member Since 13th Feb, 2020
  • offline last seen June 9th

Subsistence


Nightmares never end.


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  • 229 weeks
    Cancelling

    Hi everyone, I’m back just to say that I’m cancelling my story, because really, no one seems to like it and instead, they seem to like stories that are more badly written? I had better reception before editing my stories, and I’ve seen how worse off stories have thousands of likes while good ones have almost no views or likes. I find that weird and unfair and I’m not sure I know why but I feel this has to be raised to attention and for us to ask ourselves why. Is it just because the authors of

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    0 comments · 300 views
  • 242 weeks
    What for

    Come, someone please tell me if there is any reason to go on. I see none. What is the point of being here?

    3 comments · 330 views
  • 242 weeks
    Question about my Plot

    I would like to ask frankly, this question that has been in my mind since my latest chapter. People keep saying that my story has no plot and therefore, it is bad and it's one of the worst stories on here, while I see worse stories being called, 'the best story ever'. How is that possible.

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    1 comments · 282 views
  • 243 weeks
    Cover Picture 2

    I think a good cover picture can attract readers. Mine... needs work. So I will try again with asking. Is there anyone out there that could make me a better cover picture than the abomination I've drawn? If anyone could help me out, I would be so grateful.

    12 comments · 266 views
  • 243 weeks
    Editing

    Hi everyone. I have gotten some feedback that my grammar for the first few chapters is atrocious, and yes, I know it is. I'm in the process of editing it and if the grammar was the only reason to stop you from reading my story, then I implore you to give it another try. Thank you and good day.

    0 comments · 227 views
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2020

Cancelling · 8:20am Jul 15th, 2020

Hi everyone, I’m back just to say that I’m cancelling my story, because really, no one seems to like it and instead, they seem to like stories that are more badly written? I had better reception before editing my stories, and I’ve seen how worse off stories have thousands of likes while good ones have almost no views or likes. I find that weird and unfair and I’m not sure I know why but I feel this has to be raised to attention and for us to ask ourselves why. Is it just because the authors of

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Report Subsistence · 300 views · #Game over

Me

Hi I am Subsistence and I am not sure why I'm here anymore. I was inspired to write by Jakub the Reshiram, who has tried to leave many times, but he is staying again as someone else. He says his story is not the best, but I think the story line is quite good, even if it is not the best and if I cannot see what the plot is. I hope to one day write my story as good as he writes at least.
If you have any questions you can ask me and I will answer.

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Hey! I would appreciate it if I could get some professional feedback on my masterpiece!

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Penanka72 · 208k words  ·  142  23 · 1.9k views

Just randomly self-promoting my work to get the story out there. Feel free to look at my other stories such as You’ll Never Walk Alone and A Sweet Tooth if you prefer something darker.

Thank you for reading friend!:rainbowwild:

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What is the nature of your request.

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