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Subsistence


Nightmares never end.

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  • 197 weeks
    Cancelling

    Hi everyone, I’m back just to say that I’m cancelling my story, because really, no one seems to like it and instead, they seem to like stories that are more badly written? I had better reception before editing my stories, and I’ve seen how worse off stories have thousands of likes while good ones have almost no views or likes. I find that weird and unfair and I’m not sure I know why but I feel

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  • 209 weeks
    What for

    Come, someone please tell me if there is any reason to go on. I see none. What is the point of being here?

    3 comments · 296 views
  • 209 weeks
    Question about my Plot

    I would like to ask frankly, this question that has been in my mind since my latest chapter. People keep saying that my story has no plot and therefore, it is bad and it's one of the worst stories on here, while I see worse stories being called, 'the best story ever'. How is that possible.

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    1 comments · 243 views
  • 211 weeks
    Cover Picture 2

    I think a good cover picture can attract readers. Mine... needs work. So I will try again with asking. Is there anyone out there that could make me a better cover picture than the abomination I've drawn? If anyone could help me out, I would be so grateful.

    12 comments · 224 views
  • 211 weeks
    Editing

    Hi everyone. I have gotten some feedback that my grammar for the first few chapters is atrocious, and yes, I know it is. I'm in the process of editing it and if the grammar was the only reason to stop you from reading my story, then I implore you to give it another try. Thank you and good day.

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Question about my Plot · 2:18pm Apr 18th, 2020

I would like to ask frankly, this question that has been in my mind since my latest chapter. People keep saying that my story has no plot and therefore, it is bad and it's one of the worst stories on here, while I see worse stories being called, 'the best story ever'. How is that possible.
So why does my story not have a plot. I thought it does. The plot starts with yaks coming to try to conquer the human world, which is then revealed that there are more enemies behind the yak invasion, and that was just a front for a greater invasion to come, and John has to stop this threat, so he goes to deal with it. Why is this not a story? I don't get it. I really don't. What does Jakub have in a story that I don't, besides having fewer crossovers? Because that's really it, I was inspired by his story, so I do have a lot of similarities to his, but yet, his story is very well received and mine isn't. Is it just because he has more followers and people sympathize with him more? I don't know. I don't know what I'm doing wrong. Should I even continue typing? It's just upsetting when people don't like your stuff, I know how Jakub feels and why he wanted to leave so many times. It really doesn't make sense. Someone logical please come and make sense of it all for me.

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Comments ( 1 )

That is a really interesting plot for your story. I don't why they say that there isn't one.

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