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rikithemonk


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Comment posted by rikithemonk deleted Oct 11th, 2019
EInto the Forest
A young pony child gets lost in a forest. Frightened and alone, she begins crying, only for a strange being to find her.
-TheStoryteller- · 2.4k words · 168 views

Thank you for Favoriting my Sad Romance.

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Well, your story is worth it. The english isn't perfect, but its well thought out, the pacing is good and there is a good balance of seriousness and humor.

Plus those two chapters I commented on were hysterical. I haven't laughed like that in a very long time.

"Were you going to throw that brick at the window!?" She asked, sounding annoyed.

"I couldn't find a small enough rock to throw." I said.

Now thats comedy. 😎

The Monk
“Puberty was a curse for those inflicted with it, and boundless amusement for others who survived the process.” -Scarheart

Thanks for the fave, I really appreciate it.

And thanks for commenting as well, its not very often someone does so as often like you did, it pretty much what keeps me going man.

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