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Keeping writing vague to improve the details. · 1:45am January 19th

Every now and then I like to share some of my conversations with writers because I think it can help beginning writers see things from a different point of view. While nothing stupendous, I thought I would share this comment I made. As I do think it helps.

His clipboard and pens are following him, because they’re locked in his telekinetic grip. I’ll make it more clear right now.

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Oh another thing is that they ALWAYS end up in everfree forest and save the CMCs & yet get attacked by the Main 6 just being different or where they end up being stoned by the tyrants & still sane after 1000 years yet they still forgive them like it was nothing. Like WTF?! I get it if they actively seeking to harm the ponies but just for not looking like a pony makes no sense what so ever. Then they have big ol chase which causes the MC to end up saving the people hunting him which leads to "I aM SorRy fOr iMpRiSoNIng yOu cAn we bE frIeNdS?" They send the MC to Ponyville for the same generic shit ever on almost all the HiE fics. Q & A's, suspicion, proving his worth, becoming a pawn in the fatass cake gobblers plan, getting an harem, & fine with the lunar tyrant going inside their head like a damn library. Then their are the 'bad guys' of the show, the natives of other countries despite the state their country is in compared to Equestria to still labeled the bad guy.

hey I like your profile picture ^^

- the random dude who stumbled onto your profile- fennekin

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