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HAZESHIFT


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Dan wakes up to something he thought couldn't possibly happen. He's in Equestria. He doesn't know how long he is going to be here for or if there may be some greater purpose for him. All he does know is that he woke up in a tree and fell out of said tree and that even in Equestria it still hurts...oh and the ponies are still adorable.
Who knows? maybe this will turn into a bigger adventure with romance and comedy and stuff...as long as he doesn't do anything too stupid first.
With references, comedy, romance, heartbreak, anger, sadness, giant monsters, and kickass music i give you Dan's story of ADVENTURE!!!

FINALLY GOT FEATURED!!!!
HAZESHIFT 5/24/2014
AND AGAIN!!!! 1/9/2015

Chapters (44)
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I FORGOT TO MENTION nygiants93 caue i loved his story wilmont....GO READ THAT TOO:twilightoops::twilightoops:

Ahem. first thing I noticed, when did he realize he was on a tree. Second, why is it a good thing spike is with celestia? Third, this is moving rather fast. Plot development without enough detail makes it less interesting.I shall continue watching this develop.

Well, let me be the first to say CONGRATULATIONS, I liked it. Although there are some errors (mostly punctuation and capitalization, which is easily fixable) and a random 4 in the middle of the story, why is that even there? :rainbowderp:
But anyway I like where this story is going, a like and watch for you good sire :twilightsmile:
Edit: apparently I'm not the first (stupid refresh)

you think its moving fast? hell there was a lot more i wanted to put into this chapter but i didnt want a 8000 word thing so i tried to keep it low a bit and for the other two points...just realized I pushed the tree thing to fast damn....

2012381 thanks as for the 4.....i type fast and tend to not realize what keys im hitting sometimes....and i am horrible with grammar and punctualization

2012390 I can easily overlook the grammar and punctuation, but if you want it to be crystal clear I suggest getting an editor, I'm willing to volunteer since I want to start editing, but that's up to you I liked and followed you btw hoping to see more :derpytongue2:

2012406 im thinking about it i just got to make sure i keep writing. its not that i want a perfect novel i want people to read a nice story more or less

2012413 I understand, I'm starting on a story too and I haven't touched that in months, but this is a nice story. Keep it up.

2015304 please, make dan do something funny and awkward, like scratch behind one of the ponies ears or something *GASP*:pinkiegasp: scratch behind one of the princessess ears :rainbowlaugh: i just love it when the main character does awkward stuff like that!

and also are you going to have that wierd thing with wings and horns being ''sensitive'' or something like that?

2015348 trust me for what i have planned it will satisfy your concerns....i'm:pinkiehappy: writing it now

OK dumbass question here but how do you put an authors comment on your chapter anyone know??:rainbowderp::rainbowderp:

2016478 that's alright :twilightsmile: also the editor proposal is still on the table, if you want just send me a PM. Can't wait for the next chapter.

GOOD NEWS EVERYONE I FINISHED THE SECOND CHAPTER IM JUST WATING FOR THE EDITOR TO HELP FIX AND MAKE BETTER!!!!....AND ALMOPST $K WORDS THIS TIME I AMAZED MYSELF!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: so stay tuned

HALALUAIH!! DRINKS ALL AROUND!!!
oh.. and you also said something about monty python, how you can't spurt out chapters cause college, YOU REALLY LIKE ME :3 and you gave thanks to the people how favorited. Now after that predicament, I'm going to go rest. :twilightsheepish:

Comment posted by HAZESHIFT deleted Jan 26th, 2013

Random violence, check. Awkward moments,check. Misunderstandings, check. Hmmm....
All seems fine here, carry on.:moustache:

2027711 oh just wait...just you wait... :wrings hands menacely:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

I love your characterization. So far you have done a wonderful job of keeping every pony in character. I truly appreciate this. Also, MOAR QUESTIONS!! The Q/A portion of the HiE fics are always my favorite. Well, that and the awkward/adorable moments.:applecry::rainbowkiss::raritydespair:

Holy guacamole! It wasn't until after I backed out of this fix that I saw that you have already written so much in such a short amount of time! I am definitely looking forward to more of this wonderful story. And it should be quite soon if your updates say anything about your writing prowess.:pinkiehappy::yay:

Dis guy, you've done me proud boy. :moustache:
Also, you're hot on the 3rd page if you didn't catch my channel comment. :pinkiehappy:
Keep at it, now if you'll excuse me, I need to go shape up on my editing before the next chapter.

2027780 i have had a lot of this story played out in my head for....since season two I've just never written this is my personal story its why i named the guy after me

50 FAVES:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss: SO AWESOME!!!!! thanks everyone I....I....I gotta finish writing the third chapter

2030915 Get to it soldier, I am ready to edit this awesome sauce. :pinkiehappy:

2031089 well this one is a doozy cause half the chapter took me over 3k words so....:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Well batman for one, I chuckled. I don't really notice any others. :rainbowhuh:
Dis good, and we make good team. :rainbowkiss:
We're well on our way to becoming featured, well you are anyway. :derpytongue2:
Keep up the work pal.

2037244 don't think i upt a pulp fiction in there....also i should say provide me examples:ajsmug:

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