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HAZESHIFT


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Dan wakes up to something he thought couldn't possibly happen. He's in Equestria. He doesn't know how long he is going to be here for or if there may be some greater purpose for him. All he does know is that he woke up in a tree and fell out of said tree and that even in Equestria it still hurts...oh and the ponies are still adorable.
Who knows? maybe this will turn into a bigger adventure with romance and comedy and stuff...as long as he doesn't do anything too stupid first.
With references, comedy, romance, heartbreak, anger, sadness, giant monsters, and kickass music i give you Dan's story of ADVENTURE!!!

FINALLY GOT FEATURED!!!!
HAZESHIFT 5/24/2014
AND AGAIN!!!! 1/9/2015

Chapters (44)
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HALALUAIH!! DRINKS ALL AROUND!!!
oh.. and you also said something about monty python, how you can't spurt out chapters cause college, YOU REALLY LIKE ME :3 and you gave thanks to the people how favorited. Now after that predicament, I'm going to go rest. :twilightsheepish:

Comment posted by HAZESHIFT deleted Jan 26th, 2013

yep:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: dam internet with its too many buttons
:fluttercry:

2027711 oh just wait...just you wait... :wrings hands menacely:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

I love your characterization. So far you have done a wonderful job of keeping every pony in character. I truly appreciate this. Also, MOAR QUESTIONS!! The Q/A portion of the HiE fics are always my favorite. Well, that and the awkward/adorable moments.:applecry::rainbowkiss::raritydespair:

Holy guacamole! It wasn't until after I backed out of this fix that I saw that you have already written so much in such a short amount of time! I am definitely looking forward to more of this wonderful story. And it should be quite soon if your updates say anything about your writing prowess.:pinkiehappy::yay:

Dis guy, you've done me proud boy. :moustache:
Also, you're hot on the 3rd page if you didn't catch my channel comment. :pinkiehappy:
Keep at it, now if you'll excuse me, I need to go shape up on my editing before the next chapter.

2027780 i have had a lot of this story played out in my head for....since season two I've just never written this is my personal story its why i named the guy after me

50 FAVES:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss: SO AWESOME!!!!! thanks everyone I....I....I gotta finish writing the third chapter

2030915 Get to it soldier, I am ready to edit this awesome sauce. :pinkiehappy:

2031089 well this one is a doozy cause half the chapter took me over 3k words so....:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Well batman for one, I chuckled. I don't really notice any others. :rainbowhuh:
Dis good, and we make good team. :rainbowkiss:
We're well on our way to becoming featured, well you are anyway. :derpytongue2:
Keep up the work pal.

2037244 don't think i upt a pulp fiction in there....also i should say provide me examples:ajsmug:

I want to play a game, somewhere in this story I have hid a secret sentence. This sentence doesn't change the plot of the story it was just put in there for fun. :rainbowwild:
I will give you one clue to where this sentence is, the sentence has a motion that you can only do with one eye, first one to find it wins.
Losers, will die.
LET THE GAMES BEGIN...
*static*
Edit: This was all just for fun, I don't hate the author or anything so I added a sentence. Please don't sue D:

2038586 cani give a hint???.......screw it i am going to any way. its when they are in Dan's mind...and even i;m lost at what below is:derpytongue2:

2038615 well no i was giving a hint at the one reference i put in...im stumped on which one i missed:derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

2038621 oh... This game was made entirely by me while I was editing it, I was just getting bored editing it so I thought I would make a game out of it, and if you find it PM me that you did because this is a game for da readers. :twilightsheepish:

btw for everyone if you foolow me you'll see when i do blog posts when the next chapter is coming:pinkiehappy:

chapter 4 sent for editing should be out tomorrow at latest hope you enjoy possible feels and definite funnies:rainbowwild::rainbowwild::scootangel:

I KNOW HE WAS GONNA HIT HIS HEAD AND I MISSED IT

you can only use one tense, and since it just happened, you have to stay in past tense, changing the know to knew. :moustache:

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