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Dan wakes up to something he thought couldn't possibly happen. He's in Equestria. He doesn't know how long he is going to be here for or if there may be some greater purpose for him. All he does know is that he woke up in a tree and fell out of said tree and that even in Equestria it still hurts...oh and the ponies are still adorable.
Who knows? maybe this will turn into a bigger adventure with romance and comedy and stuff...as long as he doesn't do anything too stupid first.
With references, comedy, romance, heartbreak, anger, sadness, giant monsters, and kickass music i give you Dan's story of ADVENTURE!!!

HAZESHIFT 5/24/2014
AND AGAIN!!!! 1/9/2015

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Comments ( 1916 )

2037244 don't think i upt a pulp fiction in there....also i should say provide me examples:ajsmug:

2038586 cani give a hint???.......screw it i am going to any way. its when they are in Dan's mind...and even i;m lost at what below is:derpytongue2:

2038615 well no i was giving a hint at the one reference i put in...im stumped on which one i missed:derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

btw for everyone if you foolow me you'll see when i do blog posts when the next chapter is coming:pinkiehappy:

chapter 4 sent for editing should be out tomorrow at latest hope you enjoy possible feels and definite funnies:rainbowwild::rainbowwild::scootangel:

Loved this chapter! Keep them coming, The story so far has started to suck me right in :D

i would prefer if you waited atleast three chapter until something 'action-y' happened, just let dan bond with the habitants of ponyville some more:pinkiehappy:

2064981 i dont think i ever had the first chapter edited but thank you...i just type fast sometimes ya know??:pinkiesmile:

2065098 do sports count as actiony.....i mean for me there is actiony thigns happen and then there is die hard actiony:applejackunsure:

2065105 nah, you can do sports (pretty sure that's a kind of bonding), just not... save a whole class from a burning house or... diamond dogs kindnap somepony, stuff like that.

maybe he could wrestle raionbow dash or something, help applejack with the orchard, just meet new ponies:pinkiehappy: PLEASE let him meet lyra:rainbowlaugh:

oh wait, they're used to being naked at the spa, what's he gonna do about... :twilightblush:

2065124 oh i think you'll like what i have in store:trixieshiftright::pinkiecrazy:
also diamond dogs...pshh GO BIG AND FICTIONAL OR GO HOME LOL!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: but i appreciate the thought

2065135 your asking the wrong questions it should be; how much clothing does he have and what is he wearing now?:moustache::trollestia:

ALSO i thought of an idea for another fic i wanna do and i t has something to do with this youtube link

Comment posted by HAZESHIFT deleted Feb 3rd, 2013

Also the title and main joke i wanted to put in this chapter came from this video at the 5:45 minute mark:twilightblush:

2065148 just yell at me if i do i listen...most of the time:rainbowderp:

wonder what reference you are gonna put in the next chapter.:rainbowwild:

Great chap. i wish u can put a tf2 reference :pinkiehappy:

2066625 honestly i have no clue at the moment...i'll think of one later though:pinkiesad2::pinkiehappy:

oh quick question i forgot to mention in author comments...i felt like the beginning of chap5 wsn't that good...someone comment on that:fluttercry:

2094377 other than some mistakes you should edit, like missing a " or adding extra letters to things, it was a very good read. :twilightsmile:

I understand if your editor is off but you really need to stop switching from first to third person, it's a bit of a pain. There's also a point during the hoof wrestle where you speak as if we are RD.

Aside from that, can't wait till the next chapter. Silly ponies shouldn't challenge a human at such a ball game, :rainbowdetermined2:

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