The changelings lead by the rogue Queen Chrysalis are back and wielding a new power that threatens Equestria. While other want to begin preparing troops, Shining Armor has a different idea. an idea he's kept secret form every-pony for a long time. His former Commanding Officer was the greatest soldier to live on the battlefield, and for years everyone thought he was dead. Now as Equestria comes closer to possibly its darkest hour Shining will do whatever it takes to save Equestria
A Metal Gear Solid 5: The Phantom Pain crossover
coverart by InkieHeart
Chapters (1)
More please!
Bring in the ecuadorian lady!
Judging from the picture. Ocelot is a mare?
6612658 i actually haven't decided if i want to follow it or not based on the pic
6612722 If not well let Ocelot be a Stallion and Big Boss an earth pony. Also just a little personal opinion but have other famous bosses be part of his milittia like Psycho mantis and Vamp the later as a bat pony
Please update.
Hmm.... you got a good story going here and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter when it comes out. So there only one constructive criticism I can give you, which is to try and make a habit of using spell check and have it proofread. other then that you're doing fine.
PS: Oh, one more thing, this is something I can't help but doing. So play the theme song!
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6613525 i'll think about it
6663058 sorry it'll be awhile
6731685 yeah i did this without the knowledge of my editors so yeah parts of it can look weird...and it's a greta song right?
I love you so much right now words can't even express these story's are sook good
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Well, it's always good to have someone help you improve in your writing skills by letting them proofread your story and using spell check programs does help with keeping the story clean and in order. other then that, like I said you got a good story going hear. Just keep it up.
PS: And yeah, I just love the Sins of the Father, it's not MGS 5: Phantom Pain without it. And come on it's a really addicting song, and hell I hope you put it somewhere in the story, if possible.
Oh, and one more thing.... Will there be a pony version of Kazuhira Miller in this story as well?
I didn't even need to read the first chapter to know that this was going to be a wonderful FF. There are certain mistakes, but overall a wonderful first chapter, too bad however that it appears to be dead.
7252361 I DID START WRITING A SECOND CHAPTER BUT LIFE GOT IN THE WAY A BIT
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Write more please. This is the first story I read after being gone for over a year.
I'd love to read more
Please continue the story i just started playing phantom pain and this is getting me exited to read more.
I like this one. I'd. Like to know what Quiet would look like as a pony
>>Seriously man, you NEED to update this. I've been waiting for the longest time for a MGSV fic and this might be it
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This is dead it’s 2018 and no new chapter
Please update i know you buat but please at least update it
you got my interest please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!