For his hard work to the Crown, the Royal Engineer of Equestria has been honored with a retinue of VIP bodyguards who protect him everywhere he goes. Their ordinary, everyday adventures together wind up being anything but ordinary.
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Hot damn! Update! Join me and dance in Harmony as well in joy with me today
An update! Most exquisite!
Huh, first time I ever heard of booze being a grammatical aid.
Whenever Carmen shows up, my mind always conjures the image of a threaded needle looking one way or other for fabrics to stitch together.
Bloody hell... This chapter was worth waiting!
Luna x Anon? Classic ♡
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It’s based on a former coworker (who had a pronounced Yugoslav accent) who claimed he lost his accent when he got drunk at night clubs. Of course, the friends who told him this were probably also drunk at the time…
Caught it back on /rgm/, always worth reading over here too. Carman is all about the wheels within wheels, wonder what the catch is here?
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Simpel ,lovestruck Luna is less viligant Luna.
I find it weird that she flat out admitted that she's up to no good. Us readers know that she's behind them being attacked a bunch, and at least one of the protagonists don't believe her apology for a second. What purpose does it serve for her? Unless that was her testing them for eugenics purposes, or something, to improve her master race.
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Aah, though the question is.. Is Purity consciously making the accent (learned from constant use in the rookery?) up to hide how swell spoken she is since her mother is and doesn't wish to be compared to her and the alcohol making her forget to keep it up?
Oh Artemis, what’s going on in your head?
A nice and a cool. 10/10.
Its like the drunk sailor who could walk a perfectly straight line. In a storm.
The question everyone has now:
Are the Lunar Stallion glazing Luna with their spunk until she is as white as Carmen with powder or are they bleaching her insides with the Stallion white all natural foal batter?
Truly a question for the history books!
New chapter <3
It lives! Oh joy to all that is good in the universe!
This was a pleasant surprise to find, this morning!
You and me both, Carmen... Several such presences preferrably! This Anon is a sweetheart and deserves to not feel alone, even if it is just for a little while
Definitely a good read.
Here's hoping for another update soon, 'cause I'm addicted.
It's one thing after another this evening for our guards and VIP, hasn't it?
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Howling with laughter here.
Yeah Anon Stick to your guns! Twilight is the only mare for you and you know it! Woo!
All jokes aside its good to see this uploading still, such a good story and i love it.
Talking with Carmen under any circumstances has got to be every bit as relaxing as taking a nice casual stroll through a minefield...
U p d a t e D e t e c t e d
YAA BABY, THATS WHAT I’VE BEEN WAITING FOR, THATS WHAT I’M TALKING ABOUT, WOOOHOOOO!
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=sAXZbfLzJUg
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Honestly the mine field is less stressful than dealing with Carmen.
So glad to see another chapter of this!
I can hardly wait to read this new chapter, but I'm going to, b/c I need to make sure I got something good to eat before I start reading it. This story is great!
Leave it to Carmen to wildly shake up the evening.
Missing the space after the period.
Based on a google search, peoples is used when referring to more than one distinct ethnic group. Since Purity is only referring to Thestrals, people's is the correct one.
Why is there an extra single quotation mark here?
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Why not both?
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Good point ~♡
An update?! LETS GO! This is not a Drill I repeat this is NOT A DRILL!!
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Some sneaksy typos getting around quality control. All fixed!
I see Carmen's game actually, she wants to put Anon and Luna together because it would further shake the faith of the stars in their great mother, which would in turn create ripples of lack of faith and incite more will to fight against those "under the sun". Which Carmen can cultivate in more fervent faith in her original claim that the moon princess has "fallen".
Politics are complicated, pursuing something that seems good on paper can result in catastrophic events, even something seemingly simple as romance.
This is my guess, anyway.
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"Just as the musicians take up their instruments once more, that's when the sound of an all-too-familiar voice spoke up from behind her."
There are some past/present tense issues in a few places. This is the only one I thought to copy, but there were more. Also looks like a double space after "when" here... Still a ton of fun! Thanks for keeping this up!
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Fixed
Holy shit an update!
Lots of talk this chapter. Carmen is still scheming, I’m sure of it.
Good chapter. And awesome to see an update!
IT LIIIIIVES!! Absolutely wonderful!
Yay! So happy to see this story update!
Also……..this whole time………she’s been FAKING THE ACCENT!!!!!! Considering how many people said that those sorts of constant errors wouldn’t happen to a bilingual person, it makes a lot of sense, but still!!!!!!
EHRMAHGERD! IT'S BACK!
I was just thinking last night about how I hope this one gets updated again soon!
AND HERE IT IS!
WOOOOOOOH!
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Carmen is amazingly written.
Whatever mood any given scene had, when Carmen walks in I am immediately on edge. I don't know what's gonna happen next or when; all I know is that something is on its way.
It's the worst! (it's the best, author, don't stop)
I know she's scheming - we all know, we've all read the same story - and she flat out admits to it! We've witnessed her monologues!
And still I am tempted by her plan. She's just so affable and agreeable.
Even daughter-dearest Ebonshield is having difficulty mustering her usual distrust of her.
She is scary good at this.
She's terrifying!
I love her.
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Just like in DBZ many love Frieza for being a really evil villain, we love Carmen here for being a clever villain.
*happy update noises*
Holy shit It's alive :D!
And now I have to read it all from the beginning because its been so long
Idk what Carmen's game with anon is aside from hooking him up with an intelligence asset. Unless she wants to hook somepony up with him so they dont have foals idk
Geez, at this rate, Anon's gonna end up with all four guardsmares and both princesses!
Look out! It's a necro-writer, reviving dead stories.
Oooooh, it's aliiive, it's alive! IT'S ALIVE, IT'S ALIIIIIIVE!
Ah it was soo good getting an update
Huh… Anon x Luna… their beloved deity choosing not even a non batpony, but a non pony! Scandalous! That would shake the ones who still believe in her over their beloved moth… oh, wait a minute… I think I see what she did there! Or at least one of the many possible things she could scheme…
Apropos of nothing: this seems to be the most informal attitude of Carmen we’ve yet seen. Lounging around at the table with the others, she’s a bit tipsy, tired, and just more casual than ever. Scheming or not, it’s interesting to see her with her “hair down,” such as it is. You could almost like the girl.
Until you remember she had her Lunar competition murdered to gain her position. She is aware of minutiae about the quaternion’s personal lives to a point that is unsettling. Don’t turn your back on this mare.