For his hard work to the Crown, the Royal Engineer of Equestria has been honored with a retinue of VIP bodyguards who protect him everywhere he goes. Their ordinary, everyday adventures together wind up being anything but ordinary.
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Updates... We cherris em like old friends, miss them the moment they leave us to see em next time
Wait a minute, Gilberto and Ebonshield got laid so many times and he never used his magic in bed!?
Magnificent chapter with a twist i would never gave guessed! Most delightful
Mane six present?
Cant wait for the Anon to go for the choice of heart...
What is choco pone doing i wonder...
Luna... Wonder if she might steal a dance from him.
He did a lot to her benefit and a dance sound most delightful ♡
Is Cadance present to help Anon along?
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!
Messa needs me fix of this story!!!
Well then. This story moves slowly. Half a million words, and we're only like a month or two from the start. It's certainly going to be interesting to see where this is going, even if I don't care for the melee in the slightest.
Ah, but them being a 'known' doesn't stop them being an actual 'threat'.
:V
I expect the Equestrian Intelligence caught wind of some manner of Revvy Mom's plan and is going to stall it here.
Even if there is no actual physical danger to anyone, her diplomancing and intrigues may face some rather unexpected problems.
Assuming the above is true, it being spit out in the open to Revvy is actually bad for Equestria since she's now aware of stuff and can try and counter the counter-
Oh god damn it.
It's Paradox-Billiards-Vostroyan-Roulette-Fourth Dimensional-Hypercube-Chess-Strip Poker all over again.
This is an amazing fic I love most of the characters . A couple colts I wanna skin but that aside it is an amazing story can't wait for the next chapter
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EPIC BATTLE! ♡
Cannot wait to see where this story goes. I hope Jet Stream and Delta Vee make an appearance regarding atmospheric flight :)
BÄM Batteringram like a... well.. Ram... sounded kinda funnier in my head tbh... hmm...
woahwoahwoah... what was in that drink? xD
oh boi, thus will be fun xD
Oh i cant wait for the next Chapter ^^
*reads note*
Damnd, i already have withdrawal symptom...
xD
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With actual stripping for once! :D
.... And floofy bat tufts.
It's gonna be a shame to see this slow down, I was really enjoying it. I don't suppose you could estimate how long between each update now? Not expecting a hard time but "once a month" "every few months" something like that.
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I wish I could give a firm schedule. The aspirational goal is an update every couple of weeks, but real life ultimately dictates schedule. I'm as eager for more as you are!
This is going to be fun. Using the Weather Factory to create the wind blasts and lightning electrical to create the finest quality blast iron and arc steel going? And given arcs, leading to plasma refining and seperation of previously unobtainable materials becuase the advanced unicorn mages held their secrets tightly?
"Yes. Yes, I am..." The Reverend Mother licked her lips.
--[] later []--
"Command, this West 7. Shadow 1 is in the corridor. Please advise, over."
"West 7, this is Command, do not engage. Over."
"Affirmative, Command. Shadow 1 is... stalking up to Stout Hoof. Please advise! Over!"
"West 7. Keep your kilts down and sabots on. Do not engage. Repeat, do. Not. Engage. Over."
"Command! West 7! Shadow 1 is too quick- too sly! She has Stout Hoof by the-! By the Princesses!"
"West 7, Command. Status? Over!"
"Command! She's moved on to Longfeather! Kilts are no defense! She's bypassing all his armor! He's no match! She's- She's staring me down now. Request assistance! She's going low! Command-!"
"West 6 and West 8, this is Command. Be advised that Shadow 1 is in the area. She has... 'incapacitated' all stallions from West 7. Clothes and armor ineffective. Mares, get the stallions out of there; they are not safe!"
>gets to the good parts
>Alright updates are a gonna slow down.
Feels bad man
Go get him Artemis!
Edit:
If this goes how I think it'll go, they have absolutely no idea what they're getting into thinking that. :P
HAH! As if. You are Lunars at the biggest high social gathering in Equestria. This is your battlefield, and as long as you still have your tongue you are armed to the teeth.
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Eb's preference is the inexperienced and showing them the ropes, so I imagine the kid has very little idea what he is doing and is learning the How Do's of bedroom time at Eb's pace for the most part.
Oof. You just don't say that aloud. Come on now. But, on a brighter side, it is nice to see the interactions between the gang and Anon.
And as for the updates, it feels a bit like a glass half full/empty. On one side; the story is still going to be updated, I'm really interested in what's going on, and it's officially all caught up.
Now on the other side; I'm really interested on what's going on and the story is all caught up. Which may mean, not as frequent updates.
I guess I'm just enjoying this story a lot. Thanks for putting the story up here and I eagerly await the next chapter.
Awww. I'm going to go through withdrawals! Even with the gradual tapering off of the number of updates to help lessen the effect, I'm afraid I'm going to be miserable without my ELWG fix; is there a support group!?
Its been awesome so far and I can't wait for more
That's the problem with high society parties; though its a social environment, you still have your guard up. Gonna be hard for our bunch to enjoy the night.
Maybe Celestia has something fun planned to break the mood after all...
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We should make one. These withdrawals are gonna be bad
I assume you're the guy who wrote the greentext? Anyway, it's unfortunate that chapters'll be less common, but I'll still read 'em.
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TheManFromAnotherTime is the guy who wrote the greentext; I'm just rewriting/adapting it to prose (with TheManFromAnotherTime's help) for fimfiction.
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Neato
Based on the oldest comment, this appears to have gone up within five minutes of me deciding that there was nothing to do and turning in for bed early.
Sad to be all caught up. Oh well. At least now my theorizing can't be shot down prematurely. Like my theory Anon's going to end up in a broom closet with Eb's mother by the end of the night.
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Go for it Sparks, go get him!
Man, this story and KKSlider's story Changing Expectations are what excites me everyday. Oh well, I suppose all things must slow down at some point. Lookinh forward to what TMFAT has in store.
Thought for a moment that Eb had found her catch for the night...
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Or the dark side of the mare.
Well, time to reread everything! I don't think I've left a comment on every chapter!
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No, no. Let's not be hasty to abandon a good idea.
I'm really hoping at some point Anon will just be like "In regards to physical attractions, my guards are all pretty appealing." Just like a casual, possibly once he's had some more drinks, offhanded comment. That's right I'm still fighting for the Herd ship!
are you continuing it on your own or waiting for more story from the greentext?
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We'll be waiting for more Greentext. This is TheManFromAnotherTime's story; I'm just editing it and porting it over.
I like this story and hope to see more
Well, I may not be Commander Shephard and this not the Citadel (unless there’s something reeeally screwy going on in the background, anyway), but this is still one of my favorite stories on this site and here’s looking forward to the future updates at whichever pace they may come. I for one am not currently planning to go anywhere in a hurry.
I still vying for Honour to be da lucky mare though
And heck, gonna have to wait longer for updates... could u give an estimate? A week, a month more or less?
You did such an amazing job keeping this spaced out as well as you did! Still going to miss the regular updates though. I got spoiled 😂
Also I was really loving that "what floats your boat" conversation, and look forward to more human-pony relations going forward! Even if it didn't "go anywhere", the conversations they have around the topic are still entertaining as all get out!
Immediately clenched up at the "unspecified threat" blurting, though boy did it go way smoother than I thought it would...too smooth -suspicious squints-
Oh god, the anime has caught up to the manga, now it's time for filler arcs.
Hmmmm.
I'm really rooting for Artemis to get together with Anon.
derpibooru has massiv fan art fitting or specifically made for this story... Its mindblowing. But for some reason i cant link a great picture here...
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Hey now, to be fair, there's been at least dozens of "good parts" we've gotten to before we caught up.
Youd think that with this weeks of living with equestrians Ebonshild would have dropped the mechanical word order switching. Then again it might just be me but hell if I wont admit that every time I read what she says it kind of patronizing to bilingual speakers, the word order switching anyone does when in the process of learning english from spanish is temporary, lasts about a week or so while you get used to speaking like the people that surround you 24/7 you quickly realize even by subconciousness that it feels wrong after a while when you keep listening how others speak. The accent however is the most subtil thing and its very hard to get rid of, thick accents are even attractive or entretaining to hear about, but gramatical word switching is quick to get on people's nerves XD maybe thats the goal of the author as an inside joke idk hehe, but hell if it isnt playing havoc in my mind when I read enough to distract me making me read the sentence 2 times or stop to comprenhend what im reading.
Despues de todo, cuando aprendes una lengua nueva tu mente se adapta a pensar en esa lengua cuando lo practicas o lo usas lo suficiente ;3
There are other things like "giving genders to things" and people who are not born in a laguage that has this type of things... well they wont inmediatly understand that it isnt the fact that we like to give genders to stuff lol, thats a bit absurd, we seem to give genders to things because in any form of spanish you will quickly realize that there is no other way to form a sentence correctly if you dont use certain vowels to smooth out the words in a sentence like "la" "el" "esa or "eso". English however is so diferently structured in its vowels that it doesnt have that problem/quirk: you can use "it" "the" etc for almost any thing and so structuring a sentence its already infinitely easier. Its why english is the language of business: its practical, easiest of them all to learn. I personaly love english because of that fact. But yes calling things she or he is a mistake a language learner makes during the span of a few days while learning it from scratch. Its why its mind boggling to me that Ebonshild keeps this noob quirks, I like to think she is fucking with everyone around her to see their reactions to try and decipher what she means and have an internal chuckle or two. But other than that there is literaly no other purpose for this. (Breaths) sorry if I got "ranty" but I just had to put this out there at least for my own sake lol.
I think you meant Well of Life.
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I do believe you're right. Fixed!
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mucho texto