For his hard work to the Crown, the Royal Engineer of Equestria has been honored with a retinue of VIP bodyguards who protect him everywhere he goes. Their ordinary, everyday adventures together wind up being anything but ordinary.
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ut oh
The time has come....AND SO HAVE I.
Legit my favorite part of the greentext.
10/10 would sell my soul to read again
Keep up the good work
I really hope the next words out of Lily’s mouth are “absolutely f*cking not, we’re not doing that to Artemis”!
The demon knows her true name...
Excellent execution. I was bummed when I saw the word count, but this was completely worth it.
the layout of the text is a bit off
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The layout is intentional.
Ah that music was a great choice to add to the chapter!
OoOoooOoooOOOo
Bad idea to use Artemis as the fount for the abomination. There is too much baggage there. There is the former lover. There is one who feels too deeply and has twisted dreams. I don't think they will manage to fully remove it should they allow it purchase.
Its a pity about the Ego, otherwise an Abomination Pegasus verses Dash?
Taste The Rainbow.
Can't imagine what it'll be like next time Lily sees Princess Luna, like, oh, hi Princess, you'll, uh, never guess where I was last week....
Well this was different, I was so confused for the longest time lol
Hmm. Spooky.
One always fears what they do not understand,
but sometimes,
one becomes more afraid the more they learn,
and they were better off not knowing.
I hold fear for the shadows because of what I don't know about their power, and it does not make it better that they are fast learners.
Before I possibly put my hoof in my mouth, how much of the story did you plan out ahead of time?
What the Davy?
megaspook
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This chapter? Meh...
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do it, do it, DO IT!!!
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The viewpoint is a bit off, so that fits!
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i just noticed the downvotes, holy shit
i was just curious about it
The
DarksideShadow. It calls at her, pulls to her. Eventually, she will be consumed by it.Wait wait wait wait, there are other binders in Equestria?? Before Nightmare Moon??
I'm starting to suspect that one of the Equestrian binders is the one responsible for Bitsmounts' immunity to the Princesses' Presence.
I like this. A 'force' that grows in sentience.
......BUCK, Artemis is NOT WEAK!, that can go TERRIBLY WRONG!
ALSO
Unfortunately, i was unable to write chapters before, due to during my work, one of the machines CHEWED one of my hands(I didn't lost anything, but is badly broken) and I was literally 'OUT' for a few days, and i was too HIGH to write anything, but maybe i should, it would be...unique to say the least
and on last note, while i was High, an image popped in my head, switching Duck Dogers with ANON in a UNIQUE episode, singing with our cast around, and my mind refuse to forget, so I will leave the video here, you're all welcome!
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Nothing wrong with that, they have cake
I think this chapter needed and an explanation at the beginning, I had trouble figuring out what the heck was going on!
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To clarify - I did not downvote. By 'viewpoint', I meant the viewpoint character's, not yours
...and that was when Artemis and her friends discovered that a sufficiently motivated pegasus can, in fact, fly from the moon and back to Equestria in less time than it takes to walk the tunnel gateways.
this chapter explained so much about the plot (sub plot?) but reads like a fever writings i didn't really care for it. I almost skipped considering how much of felt like non sense up front.
Alternately: ...and that was when, in clear defiance of the Poni Exclusion Theory, and much to Lily's surprise, Artemis demonstated that two ponies can occupy the same space at the same time.
Okay. First off, excellent choice in music as it fits perfectly. The song rose up as I continued to read. And the more I read, the more I realized what was going on. Second, sitting in the perspective of a Accursed Shadow and seeing it's thought process is amazing. It's like a fast-learning, corrupting force that's able to use critical thinking and pick up on repetitive actions. Oh, and it's able to sense emotions with fear and anger being it's favorites. So yeah. Sounds like something extremely dangerous.
Love this chapter. It goes a long way to show just how horribly dangerous the forces the Eclipse deal with are.
Though it strikes me as the type of power that one learns about in order to deal with the fallout of it going bad instead of trying to use it.
If unicorns were blacksmiths, magic would be a propane fired forge. The magic is contained and easily directed to do exactly what you want. It can be dangerous but only if you're really stupid about it.
For the Eclipse it's a completely different story. They don't have a propane fired forge. What they have is a high pressure firehose whipping around spraying living napalm everywhere. They have to constantly fight it to try to do anything useful with it and it WANTS to get out and burn everything to the ground. If they don't have complete control, they and the ponies around them die. The smart thing to do would be to close the valve and never touch it again. But this was the only magic the bat ponies had, so they were willing to take horrendous risks to try to make use of it.
I think on some level Ignacio understands this. He mentioned that all the Eclipse are happy that no more Eclipse will be born. He may have said that they are happy that no more bat ponies will suffer with their deformities, that no more mothers will cry out in anguish to discover their child was born an Eclipse, but I think on some level he understands how terrible the forces he deals with are and is glad that no more bat ponies will be born who can use them.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQRW0RM4V0k&ab_channel=Warpreacher
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Ah, but if he wanted his art to die with the eclipse phase, why would he teach Glamerspear how to bind?
This would make an interesting surprise for her opponents at MXP games, Nightmare Lily...
C'mon Anon, you're falling behind on the awesome scale, hurry up and invent the steam powered power loader from aliens. It's not a weapon, its material handling equipment, so no hassle from Sunbutt
Abstract chapters like this are always really interesting. Really well-done, it isn't easy to write such a truly alien thought-pattern.
The horror vibes / atmosphere were incredibly well done too. You really know how to pick out music for this.
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It's not that he wants his art to die. It's that the Eclipse phase is dying/ending as a whole.
Ignacio wants safeguards/replacements to be in place when the rest of his Phase finally die, so that someone will be there to protect Ponies from the unbound darkness.
While wondering why nopony would tap a Twilight Sparkle to oversee this process for maximum safety - friendship laser, ho! - I came to question just how much the Eclipses actually let Luna know about themselves. This entire proposed process of Ignacio's seems tailor-made to seriously piss off both goddess-empresses. The only way I can imagine either allowing this kind of near-sacrificial offering is via complete ignorance. And that I could only imagine coming from duplicity on the Eclipse's parts.
Accursed Shadow:
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Edit: am I weird for finding the Shadow's learning/emulations oddly endearing?
Awwww it wants to be just like them.
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I understand the importance of this chapter, but i'm not sure I can read it. I read the end bit though, So I won't be lost come next chapter. I'd like to point out the chapter is NOT bad, nor is it poorly written.
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I don't think I would want to see what Twilight's shadow was like.
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I think I would
Rejected pony become Shadow OwO
Reminded me of the scene starting here in the "Daughter of the Lilies" webcomic.
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https://www.daughterofthelilies.com/dotl/320
ah yes, the time honored tradition of xenos cavorting with daemons
nothing can go wrong, surely?