For his hard work to the Crown, the Royal Engineer of Equestria has been honored with a retinue of VIP bodyguards who protect him everywhere he goes. Their ordinary, everyday adventures together wind up being anything but ordinary.
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Always good
So there seems to be whispers of an attack occurring during the gala; well isn't it mighty convenient someone has been learning how to fight. At least this gala won't be boring.
The only question is, who is crazy enough or smart enough to attack Canterlot during the gala?
PHEW! It wasn't an ACTUAL LETTER!
" supposed threat"...hmm, i feel CHAOS in the air!...NO PUN INTENDED, I SWEAR
That's twice now that she's been mistaken for a Valkerie. That Dragon visualization must be really paying off.
This chapter was quite a fun riot to read.
I'm feeling real lucky on that guess!
Another great chapter!
This is what I adore most about Sparkshower. She has a fighting spirit but is just too sweet and naive to fully realize it. It’s like she’s a peregrine falcon trapped in the body of a little songbird.
To be honest, based on what i have read about Valkyries here she would fit right in.
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I'm not sure anything about Artemis qualifies as "little"
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This is true
Ha! Being mistaken for a Valkyrie again, in their own house! 🤣😂
sparki mistaken for a valkyrie is now a running gag xD
Well. I foresee the flak car getting an early proving.
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Based on past experience? Fluttershy.
"Valkyrie! Who in your apple-buckin' mind do you think you are, mouthing off like that to a superior giving you direct orders!"
"Not a Valkyrie, sir! Mouthing off orders from Major Growler via Major General Hoofstrong, sir!"
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Well, there was a lot of foreshadowing a few chapters back...
Im commenting to keep the algorithm going so that this author can continue to receive recognition. Good stuffs
Damn fine chapter. As chaotic as this chapter was its brilliant how mutch order was highlighted.
I wonder if Changelings could exploid that crowded building personal.
Celestia would provoke the stupidest of her enemies to attack the Gala just to relive the boredom.
Holy George C. Scott, batmare!
What's next, a Hippogriff captain quoting Dave Farragut?
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Sparkshower has big wing energy, clearly.
That's a gold star from two commanders well above her rank now. Keep this up with the VIP and she might end up mustanged herself.
Ayy~ another goodie, keep it up please and I wonder what threat was being mentioned here. Changelings are done... Tirek perhaps? Ahahahahaha
Well, that Growler is sure to pop back up later.
See, that's your problem right there. Young Huck has no intention of going anywhere, he means to live his full life in his little town and be buried in the same ground a his parents and grand parents. Like a younger Igneous Pie.
But does she have information animal, vegetable, and mineral? Does she know the princesses of Equestria and can quote the fights historical?
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They could have just replaced their signs with a large difficult-to-steal boulder like Shitterton did.
https://www.bbc.com/news/uk-england-dorset-10733442
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She’s a big mare
Methinks if Hoofstrong is anything like Patton she's gonna LOVE the idea of mechanized warfare.
"You mean to tell me my earth pony infantry and unicorn anti-air can keep up with my pegasi troopers?"
"Yes ma'am."
"Sold. I want one hundred, yesterday."
lol Sparks
I dont know how you keep being mistaken, but its funny every time
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I like this thought. I like it a lot.
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For you
I recognized General Patton's speech anywhere, again ponoes mistaking her for a Valkyr, either way she got some clasified foreboding intel: eminent attack it seemed? Who knows.
Also I loved the letter in the past chapter, as soon as I knew Ebonshield was involved we all knew what we where in for
The atmosphere and the feeling of "o shit im not supposed to be here" was executed perfectly. Cheers and looking forward to the next chapter ;3
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She’s a big girl, with big wings, in loud shiny armor. She’s also a great flier (she has to be with the armor). And when most ponies see that big mare with the big wings and the loud shiny armor, they go “Yes. That is a Valkyrie” they don’t go “Yes. That is a 19D Armored Scout of the Third Pegasus Regiment.”
Lets see We have a an armored scout with an A-10 combat certification,
an Artillery specialist specialized for Anti Air, and can do a decent imitation of a CWIS Defense gun,
a Ninja/Assassin That can be the BatMare if she chooses.
And finaly A D*** good Soldier that is so far out of her pay-grade She's getting Ulcers, and needs a series of Promotions if she doesn't snap snap from the stress.
We got a Spec-ops Fire team On VIP duty?
And a Coup Point in that they get in to the Gala themselves, that non of the High military Brass know about.
I don't know who's got what planned for the Gala, but I do hope Anon brings his Hip Waders.
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More like https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RagtagBunchOfMisfits
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I didn't think about that. That's a good point. Just wait till Anon builds a plane, giving unicorns and, more importantly, earth pokes the ability to fly with the Pegasus.
Accidental heads up for upcoming operational requirements?
Anon might have chance to have a special up his sleeve in a week.
Maybe sprung loaded and spiky or shardy. Derringer Flechette spray maybe?
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Yep. I mean, I probably pay less attention to the little art tags accompanying most stories’ descriptions than a fair few other readers, but just this once I did go back to the image and click on it to get it at proper size. Artemis has got to be that decorative suit of armor to the right whose eyes you can just barely make out through the visor...and now feel free to compare her height to that of her companions and consider that she’s even a pretty good flier in that sort of outfit. From a regular pony perspective, that’s actually one pretty impressive filly!
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Could also be basic military paranoia based on misinterpreted behavior. A batpony could sneeze and the entire decoding department could think that they are going to blow up Joe's Donut Shop the following Tuesday...
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Dude, I was convinced that a fuckin’ Major General was about to get the steamiest correspondence since they were last deployed out of country and sent care packages containing ‘moral boosting material’ (you know what I’m talking about).
Kinda disappointed that it didn’t happen.
I thought that speech sounded familiar. Good taste.
Poor Sparkshower, she just keeps getting mistaken for other people. Despite her embarrassment, Artemis handled each encounter very well, however. And with her unpolished skills, I believe if she was given the chance she would become an excellent Valkyrie; she just needs to get some experience to rub off the green a bit.
You don’t salute officers while inside. You only do that outside
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Depends on the military. Also, in US military(correct me if I'm wrong) it is courtesy to salute an officer when reporting in, unless in a no hat no salute zone
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That is generally correct. In the US Navy for instance you salute indoors on the bridge, on the brow, while outdoors in uniform (except pt uniforms) or in specific functions indoors.
Otherwise in general you do not salute indoors (under cover (a roof or structure over your head)nor while wearing a cover ( a hat)).
This callingcard WILL BE DELIVERT... even when tartarus open up in her Path...
Eeeejup, sparks is a scout. Always where she is NOT suposed to be xD
Oô Yikes! But i like her.
Oh boy, seems we have some more surprises in the near future! Now let's hope nobody suspects Artemis of being more than she really is, since she did kind of... Intrude on private matters.
You innocent, innocent thing.
Uh oh, spaghetti-o
Well, this is awkward.
HOI 4 when playing on officer difficulty.
Opening from Patton is probably one of the best monologues in cinema.
Being mistaked for a Valkyre is a running gag i like in this story.
Must be because she's such an Angel
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The Gala has important and powerful leadership collected in one place. A bomb or strike force would be a logical step for the Storm King for instance...
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On what you swear
I often wondered why the never scan for magical explosives...
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Haha! Nice one! Plus having a body of a amazon queen might help her with that...
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Indeed, i'm surprised tje Changelings failed to take it...
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Her life experiences at best...
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Indeed, it shall only end when she finaly become one...
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Sounds like fun ♤
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Give her a Horn and Cadance get a big sister...
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Better buy them in bigger bulk for more % reduced price for good customers.
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B-17 construction would be awesome...
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Man, everyone calling details on the colt-friend and we haven’t even met him yet. Sparks could be an unreliable narrator about him, as people often are, about their loved ones.