For his hard work to the Crown, the Royal Engineer of Equestria has been honored with a retinue of VIP bodyguards who protect him everywhere he goes. Their ordinary, everyday adventures together wind up being anything but ordinary.
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You would make my day if Anon has this small mantra he tells himself when under stress "I'm not Bartleby"It will be just perfect if he indeed is sightly workaholic, and it could be a nice little story to tell his new friends, when asking who is that guy
He seems a sensible sort, let's see if he's been assigned sensible ponies.
I see your commenting on my fic and raise you some support of my own ;). I do get the feeling there may be some E4 mafia shenanigans lol, good on ya for the MOS inclusion, nice touch.
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Perhaps not. Seeing as how these three mares are the high-speeds of their units, I don't think much E4 Mafia shenanigans will take place.
I wonder if herding isnt a reason why one male get several mares to guard him...
Why is the NCO a corporal and not a sergeant?
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In the marines it's often to see a cpl being a fireteam leader over a sgt, or she could be nearing her promotion point and thus is given her spot
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That usually happens when the Corporal has spent his enlistment as an Infantryman, and the Sergeant reenlisted into the MOS. The Corporal, in that case, would have seen more combat than the Sergeant had, since he came from a non-combat MOS. In that case, for the good of the platoon (not just the fireteam), the Sergeant would shut his damn mouth, and listen to what the Corporal had to say since he knows more about the tactical and technical elements of infantry warfighting.
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Probably not. Most Anons are whacky and sarcastic, crude, funny or a massive jerk, some are major horndogs and others aren't, or some combination of the above. This Anon seems about as straight-laced as a person can get, which probably means that to balance him out he's got a pack of crazies following him around. If at least one of them doesn't have a sweet tooth to rival Pinkie Pie, I'm an extra in the swarm of chickens that attacks Link in Legend Of Zelda.
I swear I half expected her to turn around and raise her tail.
There is no 2400 hours. It's 0000, said Oh-Zero-Hundred.
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You are correct. Fixed.
This is one of the stories that I keep seeing in the featured tab nearly everyday, so I decided to check it out. As far as first chapters go, I think you did a great job.
The characters felt real. Celestia acted like I had imagined someone in her position to act and the guards displaying what I could see as believable militant behavior. The writing also feels smooth. It's to the point, while also being wordy enough to carry the experience forward. All of this combines to be an interesting read and, as I had said, I am only on chapter one.
I will look forward to the rest.
Great start! Private military ponies, or private guard ponies. Either way i love it.
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Oh cool, I never knew how it was pronounced. I work in a hospital and occasionally got a chuckle out of seeing someone write 2400 as the time of collection on a sample. Since I never knew how to say it I always just called it midnight.
Thanks for teaching me something new today.
Wth man, you gave him 19d's and 11b's but no 12b's? We do the same shit they do and more!
Бронетанковые войска? Откуда во имя Эквестрии танки у пони?
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I hear you man
“Her Royal Highness Princess Celestia, Princess of the Sun...”
Technically should be “Royal Majesty”, an honorific reserved specifically for the current highest reigning monarch regnant (i.e. the four Alicorn Princess Regnants who reigns in their own right as a Tetrarch over the Principality of Equestria). “Highness” is refers to regents and non-ruling members of the royal family of the reigning monarch regnants (i.e. Prince Blueblood, Prince Shining Armor, Princess Flurry Heart etc.). “[Serenity”, “Grace” and “Excellency” refers to certain high-level non-royalty officers of a sovereign state, officials, ministers, nobility, or members of an aristocracy. (i.e. Lord Anonymous, Blue Chamber dudes, etc.)
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Alright alright, since this'll obviously be harped on until the end of time, fixed!
Not that it's relevant to the story,but many moons ago I used to be an 11-Bravo Infantryman myself,my user icon is the crest of the 130th Infantry also known as "The Blackhawks" regiment.
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you an army boy?
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I respect you a lot sir, and all other military personnel.
My dad was part of the Parachute Regiment in the UK. 3rd Battalion.
I respect all different military branches like the Parachute Regiment. Royal Air Force, Navy, etc.
I look up to and respect you guys a lot.
Okay, universe! I've caved. I'm reading it. I'm sure I'll enjoy it. Yes, you can stop screaming now, thankyou. To kekistan we ride, yadda yadde.
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Take your time, and enjoy the ride
oh my god....this smell like harem
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You'd be surprised
Okay, bring it on.
Re-reading is quite the treat
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Any Distinguished features so we can spare you when we slaughter them for Chicken Nuggets?
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Good point...
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Give it time
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PRICELESS 👍
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Indeed i have Storys 20k+ and i can't reach that quality. Sucks to have english as second of three languages
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Dedicated fans are the best help a Author can have
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And it's GOOOOOD!!!
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Is that a yes!, no ? Maybe
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Party hard
This looks interesting. I’ll keep on reading. I have a feeling this story will make for a good page on TV Tropes and is chock full of tropes.
Ok, finally started reading, and can tell this is gonna be good
Always worth reading/ re-reading
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Especially after a long interim between posted chapters.
celestia humans aren't like that, we don't really connect with others outside a small circle of friends and family, everyone else is just a nobody to us.
i'm sure
anybodyanypony could appreciate the uhhhhhh gifts[?], but humans are used to working mostly alone or with a few other people.but i'm sure that's not what the author has in mind [especially with a "M" rating] lmao.
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oh and sometimes we can connect with people who help us its rare but it does happen.
so stop worrying while he might look like he's burning himself out, in truth most humans are like that they don't call it a 9 to 5 for nothing.
From the description, I had the impression that Anon, was going to be dealing with a much larger group of ponies. There was a story several years ago about a human, attached to a barracks of thestral mares, as a sexual toy for their relief from time to time.
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Sauce ?