This story is a sequel to Twilight gets a Puppy
Meet Rahs Sparkle, Moon Dog, Thespian, unexpected brother of Twilight and Spike Sparkle, even more unexpected grand pup of Princess Luna, and current target of the pink boat horse's nautical nonsense.
Join the Sparkle siblings as they deal with Chaos, live through Nightmare Night , survive the CMC, deal with charlatans, giants, dating, and the wedding of the century.
All somehow without strangling each other, or their friends.
Cover art by marking
[ Despite having to tag the story with Gore it is light on that. It is however somewhat heavy on innuendo and lewdness, but there's still no tag for that.]
[ It would also be good if you read the first book as it ties directly into this one.]
Chapters (83)
YES!
Holy sweet babies YES
All my laughs, hahahahaha!!
Curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal!
For added halarity, pretend the red text is in Comic Sans. TDR would've done that himself, but was unfortunately unable to, due to the limitations of FimFiction markup.
Now this is how you start a story
Re-wrote somepony else's diary? While that joke is still a classic, it is quite an old one, Discord. If you are that bored, then you could just send Twilight some of Celestia's embarassing photos (I'm sure you've stocked many) or made the three little filles of Ponyville your avatars. That would count as chaos job well done for this generation.
i loved discord directly influencing the story, thats something you find rarely in good stories.
This is going to be amazing!!!
This is where the fun begins.
Ayyyyy, Dissonance, how ya doing, buddy ol' pal?
To quote the man with the mustache - 'Mother of God!'
the new season of fun start,,
So it does
If the cat has wings, I'm gonna call shenanigans. I already have a discord-created winged cat.
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Rahs had wings briefly.... in the last book
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But it wasn't a cat
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Nah not a Tressym.
WOOOOOOOO! This story's not dead!
Also Destiny 2: Forsaken's coming out next week! WOO! #letmeknowifyouplayDestiny
*ambulance sirens in the background*
We need to get that 4th wall to the hospital! He's been brutally murdered and maimed by Discord! "
is that rahs on the cover?
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It's too late. There will be no fixing it. We'll have to install a new one after Discord's been dealt with.
That looks more like a saber tooth cat
But the frst did say he looked more feline is some aspects
"somewhat heavy on innuendo and lewdness, but there's still no tag for that."
The fact that you wrote that instead of abusing the sex tag like certain authors do imidiately puts this into my waiting list of things to read. Nothing more disappointing trying to find an adult story with adult scenes only to find out it's due to "coarse language" xD
Gonna go read the first story now ^^ Hope this will be a good ride
that image what Rahs more or less looks like? because if so, he kinda looks like Inigo. (follower mod for skyrim)
Sex Tag: What am I, chopped liver?
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As close an aproximation as i could find. least the amber eyes and ears are right , though Rahs doesn't have saber cat fangs.... i really need fan art.
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9138580 Yeah well sex tag pretty much means sex. Since i don't write clop it's not something i'll use. Hinted banging , dirty talk and Cadence aside, i don't get into detail more than the suggestion. Plus i don't want to draw in people looking for porn and then pissing them off for no reason.
DAMN IT DISCORD!!
Why do I have the strange feeling that instead of Dissy getting encased in stone again, he and the Sparkle siblings will reach some sort of deal/understanding where he doesn't go too far with the chaos, and they don't stonify him. Besides, Discord messing with Celestia is always fun!
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Well something happens
Very cute. Reminds me of some art a friend made:
img00.deviantart.net/5e4a/i/2016/194/8/b/anatomy_of_a_draconequus_by_ghostlymuse-da9xh0x.jpg
*gets Voltron and a giant newspaper* Bad Discord!
Took longer for the armor to give than I thought it would
Congrats, man! Second chapter and it's already 1st place in the Featured box!
Now I'm wondering: Spike, Rahs, and Twilight just felt a shiver on their spines - Does that mean that something bad happened to Shiny? He's the fourth Sparkle sibling after all...
Wow, this Equestria is really advance. Wonder who Luna ususally play it with?
Why I have a feeling Discord will hit it well with the Sparkle siblings?
Thank the gods that the diploma survived!
and we learn that discord and the princess is twilight and shiny armor great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great great grand parents on they mother side,
which would explain a lot I think on how crazy and smart they are,
I can see them in Canterlot now…
Something like that would be absolutely delicious.
Which would then be promptly followed by…
I agree with Luna. There are lines not meant to be crossed and messing with a gamer's save files is not chaotic, it's just evil. I know if someone messed with mine I'm getting my bat so I support Luna's choice in her actions should he do so.
Lol
I'm interested to see how chaos magic does, or doesn't, work on Rahs.
Why sent the world on its head when you could just be an enourmous pain in Celestia's enormous arse?
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They’re about the same sizeZ
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I was glad he did it. My score on Super Mare-rio was so embarrassing since I never been able to get pass the first level.
I have to agree with Luna on Discord's threat level
Well no, but if Twilight ever hears why Discord is causing trouble in Equestria she will most likely never help Celestia with anything again
I get the distinct impression that there was not a lot of information on that scroll
Oh right i have been mening to ask:
Since Celestia is Into the "bad colts", did she date Tirek ?
You know this sort of nonchalance to coming chaos very tangentially made me think of Ian Malcolm...
Wonder how Discord and Dr. Malcolm would react to each other.
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The hype is real.
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cant, ran out of fourth walls last week, new batch doesnt come in until net quarter...
After reading the whole thing i can say one thing for sure.
It would be an amazing story if it didn't rehash the episodes so much. I LOVED the original parts of it, but the chapters with slightly changed mlp script were meh at best, with a few good twists here and there.
As such, i found myself skipping large portions of it, just to get to the original pieces.