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lightningman


DA FUCK YOU DOING ON MY LAWN YOU LITTLE BASTARDS! WHY.... fans? well anything is possible

Mar
5th
2019

Timeline. · 8:17pm Mar 5th, 2019

I have finally decided on a timeline for the Voidic side of things.
Original EQG movies - Done
Harry Potter - In progress - planned
Paw Patrol - Done
Sherlock (Show.) - In progress - hiatus
The Disastrous Life of Saiki K. - Not started
Persona 5
Limitless
Lucifer
Sword Art Online.
Suicide Squad.
Sword Art Online 2.

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Request for help

If anybody is a good writer of any of the Mane 6. Then if they would message me and volunteer their writing skills for my story, that would be frickin amazing. Anybody is welcome to be any of the Mane 6. But I would advise being the one you have the most experience writing as.

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Mar
5th
2019

Timeline. · 8:17pm Mar 5th, 2019

I have finally decided on a timeline for the Voidic side of things.
Original EQG movies - Done
Harry Potter - In progress - planned
Paw Patrol - Done
Sherlock (Show.) - In progress - hiatus
The Disastrous Life of Saiki K. - Not started
Persona 5
Limitless
Lucifer
Sword Art Online.
Suicide Squad.
Sword Art Online 2.

Read More

Report lightningman · 84 views ·
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I suppose there was no problem with "time for a conversation"

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Also. chacking is checking. That's something else i noticed, you interchange these two vowels a lot.

2793684
Done. There were a few minor spelling mistakes here and there, and a lot of punctuation errors, all minor, like where your putting your commas. For example, you keep putting them like this ,and then reverting back to normal sometimes. like this, So that's something to work on. There's also the deal with the spaces. You keep putting in two words like it's one word. likethis. and it makes people have to take a little longer to decipher what your saying, thus, your story quality lowers.

Will you mind chacking my other storys, if there is a problem with them? Your opinion made me to not repeat it again.

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