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Anubis Grimgost


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Damian is a 24 year old man still living at home with two loving parents and three younger siblings, good friends and a week old brand new motorbike.

Life is good and summer had just started.

But fate can be unpredictable and Damian’s destiny lies elsewhere.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 12 )

Excited to see where this goes:twilightsmile:

You've got me hooked as I can't wait to see how things will go for the former human, by the way was he transformed into a kirin as the description of his new body in chapter 2 has me thinking he was turned into a kirin.

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Maybe, maybe something similar in appearance?

But I’m ever so glad that this story is being so positively received, it means a lot.

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Gotcha.

I'm very happy for you, you're very welcome! :twilightsmile:

Is this a crossover? Also, have you found a way to me to pay you yet?

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No crossover and regrettable I have not found a way to continue with the story you wanted.

Damian woke up in complete darkness, he was confused and lost. He couldn’t remember his father or mother, not even his siblings or friends were in his memories.

Oh no, not this displaced cliche where you're forced to mostly forget your past life. :ajbemused:

Omg, just saw your cover art and I bloody love it

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He remembers most things just not his family or friends.

I could even write a book on it, gasp* please?”

*gasp*? I like * *for actions :)

“Thy current from isn’t unpleasant to our eyes….”

form? Also, so flirty! :p

“Well Damian I have to agree with my sister here but if you’re clams are true about not being in this form since birth, then I’ll have to get you trained in reading body language and cultural norms here.”

Though I do like clams, generally only in chowder and you can't claim otherwise. :p

Celestia’s playfully smiles died upon hearing that. “you mean our subjects.”

playful smile?

Sigh* they aren’t ours, they’re thou’s. The day ponies fear or hate us.”

*sigh* Thy and Thine give me a headache, but I'm pretty sure either fits better.

I'm also curious about the wings vs the image as well as Luna's description during his dream.

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Thank you for the comment and constructive feedback, I’ve fixed some of those things and thanks for bringing the “lack wings” it’s been changed to what I thought I put which is “lack flight worthy wings”

And I’m currently working on aligning the cover image and description at the moment.

Just changed the cover, would like opinions on it?

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