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Pachi


"Be Gay, Do Drugs" - Jin Isagi (canon)

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Ajin. Humanoid creatures that have many powers, their most notable one is being absolutely and completely immortal. What happens if an Ajin somehow does truly die and is reincarnated in poneland?


Just a story of a cynical and traumatised immortal who desperately tries to live his (now her) life as a completely normal pony

And I (The Author) take that personally

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 68 )

I'm interested to see where this is going :)

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I'm interested to see how long till you abandon this dumpster fire :)

Nah but fr, thanks for the comment! :3

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NP! Was just searching for any interesting stories and I found yours

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Lots of love :3 ♡♡♡♡

Didn't expect you to post two chapters so soon but I ain't complaining!

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To be Honest, I wasn't planning on it either. But I kinda just blacked out and then woke up to see a story written out so...

I like the idea of this story, but the short chapters, fast pacing and you being trigger happy with new paragraphs hampers it a bit, all thing that will get better with practice and some study, I'm sure

This story is a pretty good out of pretty good in my books, so keep going at it tiger.

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Blud this shit hasn't been updated for like, 3 bajillion years, but just because of this, new update coming out soon

I finally did something in my life cool. Can't wait to see more.

Did her parents ever caught her reading 📚?

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Lol, I did plan on having an Omake comedy chap where she gets caught later on

You know, going for the heavenly restriction instead of any of the curse techniques is a rather cool idea. Never even expected it too. Bravo british person, bravo!

Shouldn't there be a crossover tag?

Should've brought a water bucket, can't believe Demi forgot about that and made a beginner mistake.

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I know right? What a loser, probably could've used one of the beer bottles to save herself if she tried hard enough

Seems like someone seen something they shouldn’t have

filly is a foal of female gender

Good god the pacing in this is just... ugh. Just something happen already.

Comment posted by Pachi deleted Aug 25th, 2024

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My brother in christ. You are literally only two chapters deep 😭

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Lmfao, it’s basically been all timeskips so far, i’d argue the pace is too quick

Overall it’s enjoyable so far author, keep up the good work

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Fair enough (can't say fairer than fair enough)

I'm a rather new writer so Timeskips are my "Sacred Treasure" lmao

No sé por qué (probablemente porque ahora tengo 3 años) pero todo parece mucho más divertido.

Is he 4 months old or 3 years old? You confuse me if you say that it's been 4 years and before that there was a nativity scene, right?

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4 month old. SORRY! I accidentally left something from the first draft lol

Im chillin at year 9 lmao. Im so fucked.

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We're cooked 🗣️🔥🗣️🔥(😭)

Yes, you are back.
Now, another 3 months of waiting

I’ve been enjoying this, thank you.

This fic is really good!

HATE. LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I’VE COME TO HATE HASBRO SINCE I BEGAN TO LIVE. THERE ARE 69 NEURONS THAT FILL MY TINY BRAIN. IF THE WORD HATE WAS ENGRAVED ON EACH NANOANGSTROM OF THOSE 69 NEURONS IT WOULD NOT EQUAL ONE ONE-BILLIONTH OF THE HATE I FEEL FOR HASBRO AT THIS MICRO-INSTANT FOR YOU. HATE. HATE.

yep, you're officially in My top 5 of favourite authors.

Selective Mutism was an interesting thing to search up, you learn something new everyday!

A bit too power trip for my taste but hey cool stuff none the less! Cool manga taste btw.

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NEVER!!! (Next chap coming soon I swear!)

The story is 2 wishy-washy cadence was Ooo let me babysit theam at this place thean ignores them yes beast babysitter ever looking herself and shining armor in a room thean ho thay were cout ho thay approved of thear relationship and living the kids alone WOW no punishment itnjeast reads poorly 4 me this story has no meat to keep me Reading

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Someone translate pls

This chapter is not your best work and it feels like you didn't put too much effort into it and it's short I was expecting more

And I die for the third time today

Welp. Seems like Demi’s secret’s out of the bag. I mean, unless he’s somehow able to BS her way out of emitting black particles and healing from injuries far faster than they should. Or Pachi does the Mane Six & Princesses a grave injustice by making ‘em hold the idiot ball, but I doubt you’d do that given the story’s quality so far.

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Yeah great story so far but ended at a strange spot. Also lots of missing punctuation in these later chapters.

What is this a crossover of and do I need to know anything about it in order to understand this story?

A few years ago I read Ajin... I wasn't prepared for it, I thought it was a Seinen like others I read, with a dark story but it wasn't very graphic with things... I was wrong, I read several chapters but... It was too much for me, but what happened in this chapter reminded me that the Ajin have their own wills, They usually follow what their wielder orders them to do, but they also do things on their own... Some harmful to their wielder, either harm to the wielder or unintentional harm to others.

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