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Freglz


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After a troublesome Wonderbolts reunion, Fleetfoot returns home to demand some stress relief.

But sometimes what we want isn't always what we need.


Inspired by Sunset by P-Berry.
Edited by PeerImagination.
Original artwork by RenoKim.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 35 )

But, wasn't this story incomplete just a few hours ago?

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Made a mistake. It's a quick and simple one-shot.

Enjoy!

Holy fuck. This is so good! Absolutely amazing characterization and full of fluff. Into the best stories folder it goes!

Amy favorite Wonderbolt!

Cool fic,

Probably should have left this a long time ago, but I loved this story.

This is great. I loved it. :heart:

Excellent story, only slightly ruined by the stale ass Flash Sentry joke. Let's leave that in 2015 eh?
Keep on keeping on friend

That was real sweet, I'd love to read more stories like this! Well done! :pinkiesmile:

What a beautiful romance story told in a fantastic way. I was grinning ear to ear by the end of it. Well done Freglz, well done.

Now this, this is how you do romance right here, this is how you do it in one of those ways that keeps your attention until the very end.
Oof! Fucking glorious work well done, man, well done! You earned a follow.

โ€œFlash Sentry,โ€ I murmur with a sigh, then look off to the corner of the ceiling.

:rainbowlaugh: Hahahaha, oh lawdy, I wasn't expecting that.

Nicely done.

This is just so bloody cute, I need an extra dose of Insulin, stat!

Sequel?

You don't see many stories from the ponies perspective I like it

How old is she, other than "at least 20"?

This is legitimately one of the best stories I've ever read. Bravo, good sir.

I loved this! Very cute, very sweet, and I didn't see Flash Sentry coming at all. :yay:

Comment posted by rikithemonk deleted February 15th

Seriously why does this have less than two hundred likes?

Why is this not marked comedy?
Her inner monologue at the beginning had me in stitches...

I've never seen a story on this site get "emotion" better. The pacing was perfect. You can almost feel the emotion radiating of the screen while reading.
I mean, wow. I still feel giddy just thinking about this story. It's that good.

Bravo. ๐Ÿ‘

Thank you for posting.

It was nice to read from the pony's point of view for once. I was not expecting Flash Sentry to be the douche. I'm pretty much indifferent about him; I never really got whole meme of everybody hating on him. Thought the revelation was amusing, though.

You are a wonderfully talented writer. This was a pleasure to read. Thank you!

I think my favorite aspect of this story, is how you managed to get us to care about the characters. Most stories that follow the cuddle-fic formula just feature a couple cardboard-cutout characters with no real thought put into them. Here, though, the characters have volume to them.

For a ten-thousand word story, it's extremely well-paced, and you did a great job stretching scenes out to just the right length.

Hope to read more from you in the future, man!

I like this. This is a good story. :twilightsmile:

-Ru

This hit me in the feelers, gods. Amazing story.

Damn. That... was really good.

I'm glad I found this hidden little gem.

That was beautiful!:raritydespair:

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