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Cackling Moron


"Fluff" in the same way what collects under the sofa is fluff.

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Anon, presently living with Twilight, is looking a little bit the worse for wear. He seems to be having some difficulty sleeping. More unusually, he seems oddly keen to keep it that way…

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 91 )

Man, I clean forgot about Twilight's balloon.

Interesting start, I'm curious to see where it goes.

I am now curious. :unsuresweetie:

I wish to be un-curious. :trixieshiftright:

Please, continue. :twilightsmile:

-Ru

Hm...
Why not use the train?
Ballons are slow in comparison.
But interesting concept perhaps it was some eldritch being that dragged him through in the first place.
Sincerly
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Yay, another chapter. Good as always.

Long time no read! Thanks!

Uh... That's not quite how I expected this chapter to end. Hope to see more soon.

Keep on keeping on man, stuffs getting interesting.

Hope this story keeps going

PLEASE KEEP THIS STORY GOING I LOVE IT!!!:pinkiehappy:

Woohoo! New chapter! :rainbowwild:

Oh! Good chapter. :raritystarry:

-Ru

Oh, I didn't even realize you wrote this story too. Cool, keep it up man.

SRY

So let's see: eldritch beings possibly and a somewhere else, fear of the floating hair, this seems somewhat familiar all of a sudden...

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Is it bad that I immediately heard Mandark? :facehoof:
I recently found that I've read a random story or two f yours previously, and liked them, so am now going through them all! :twilightsmile:
But, there were a few after this one. You do plan on continuing it? Right? :pinkiehappy:

SRY

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Xenophilia had similar elements as those I mentioned with Eldritch beings having been the ones to transport the Human to Equestria. I'm probably reading too much into it of course, but it reminded me of that story. Wasn't sure if it was an allusion or not.

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Xenophilia was really good but I don't think this story is too similar. The way Bellerophone got there wasn't the main part of the story. More it was about the cultural differences.

This story is more existential dread and a bit of cosmic horror. Something beyond knowing is happening and the Human is suffering for it.

This story is really good though so far.

I wasn't tracking this! Such egregious oversight! And such good fortune that I happened by and saw the update in the feed.

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Not to worry, this error has been corrected with all due alacrity, everything is right with the world once more.

That was clearly a description of Void magic, or something of the void. You can't perceive what does not exist, even when it's standing right in front of you.

standing there like a sinking pudding

It's the second time I see this analogy in your fanfiction. For some reason it gets funnier every time

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Totally not a line from Dirk Gentley's Hollistic Detective agency.

He said, tugging nervously on his collar and glancing to the door...

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Fate brought that line to your keyboard.

Looks like they're about to be consumed by The Nothing. At least it seems to be polite about the whole thing.

O noes! Evul chill n-dimensional flooper demon is killing a stereotypical cackling moron who probs deserves if for having no character depth or development! Who'dve thunk'th ftagn!

The Limit doesn't seem evil more like it doesn't realise what it's doing is bad

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it seems to have some general impression that the situation is, less than ideal, it just doesn't have any options for fixing it.

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Would a chapter exploring his childhood improve things for you?

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ah, uh, uhm, oh or any other variation

Who does this thing think it is? Count Fenring?

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To be fair, I honestly don't think this would be nescessary.
The way I'm reading it, this story seems to be primarily about how horses deal with a mysterious (yet incredibly polite) problem.
It's almost got to point it's Xenofiction, and that's p. nice. If you like that sort of thing. I do.
Anon is just the unlucky middleman here. He doesn't really need to be complicated, or particularly well defined at all.

What do I know though? I'm just some text.

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I mean really in this he has mainly been alternating between being exhausted and being asleep so there really hasn't been a lot of time for him to have a character in the first place.

But that wasn't really the point of the story.

As much as anything I do can be said to have a point...

I call bullshit. Its an evil parasite consuming him and trying to make excuses. If it doesn't cooperate totally and pull back from the damage it is causing they should just kill it.

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You and I think in very different directions.

But then I know what's happening so I suppose thats to be expected.

Sweet Celestia, this is getting nerve wracking. I’m on the edge of my proverbial seat in anticipation for the next chapter. Awesome work, CM.

My guess is this is a yellow Shepard situation where the encountered entity is so eldritch and foreign its mere existence breaks reality in wich the broken reality is absorbed, it probably emphasizes limit as a personal limit to stop its growth and consuming by staying in its own reality, the reason it’s so cordial is because it’s probably one of the extremely rare few eldritch horrors that recognizes it has this effect on existence and knows it can be rather bad to those inhabiting the lower planes of space times, that or the reference to the other time this happened it learned about the plights of tiny mortals and learned the concept of sympathy

Either way we should try and befriend Mr Void

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Fun fact: I just decided to call separate dimensions 'Limits' because I was playing The Void at the time and thought it'd be a laugh. Same reason why I obliquely called a soul 'Colour'.

I'm not a complex individual.

Uh oh, he attracted the attention of an Eldritch horror didn’t he. That’s...not good.
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*finishes chapter*

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