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Colbbie


I didn't screw it up, did I?

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I was one step away from accomplishing my lifelong dream. But an accident appears to have changed my life for the worst. My life-long goal now seemed unachievable in a new world with things I previously thought impossible. But when a new goal is discovered, what will it take to accomplish? But as they say, dream on.


Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated and helps me make the story better.
Huge thanks to Arch Medley for making the cover art!
I would also like to thank my new editor for helping me with *cough* a few *cough* corrections. I would give credit, but they wished to remain anonymous.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 24 )

10660598
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback.

𝕎hen something bad happens you have 3 choices.
You can either let it define you,
let it destroy you,
or you can let it strengthen you.
-Dr. Seuss

I’m not much into gender-bent stories, at all, but yours has me intrigued for some reason. I’ll see where it goes

Oof
Why is Blueblood mean to his Aunt?
O-well it’s a fanfiction after all.

Well Shoot!
If he wants his gender back he’s going to need to ask a Unicorn to help her to be a Male.

This is way better than I expected
:heart:
Good job :yay:

Oooo I wonder what type of song it would be next I’m curious too see if any other pony notice that she/he has no Cutie Mark

10770492
Thanks, I appreciate it!:twilightsmile:

Ah yes, the beginning of the complete mutilation of the main’s mental state is starting to materialize. :pinkiecrazy: Wonder how long he’ll be able to hold out...

Also, I’d somehow slipped Owl City from my brain for a long time, so needless to say it was a bit of a surprise. That haircut hit me like a fucking truck, among other things I’d like to forget about late 00’s/early 10’s. Not the music, of course. That can stay.

10773944
The music was definitely one of the good things of that era.

10770479
Lots of fanfics have Blueblood be a dick or downright nasty, which is weird since all we've seen of him is just refuse Rarity at the gala, and from his POV she's just another gold digger.

Comment posted by Arche Medley deleted May 11th

Well this is nicely written, love how she plays pianos inspired by popular music-pop in our generation

10810889
Thanks, it's some of my favorite songs from the mid to early 2000s

I’m really enjoying the story so far and await the next installment.

If only getting a job was that easy! And impressing a Wonderbolt? He's rolling in luck, heh!

10824150
Yeah, I wish I got my job that easily!

Maybe you could do Hall of Fame for the next time she plays the piano.
https://youtu.be/v8WxSQW45xg
Here's the link.
and also this would fit perfectly for the story, because her goal was to be in the team and she is singing her heart out for what could've been her future but was stripped away from her. And she's singing this to let out some grief.

10827205
Yeah, I love that song! Maybe it will be played soon...

Well done. I think this is a good start.

Monk
"Mavis, for crimes against royalty, I hereby sentence you to the sushi bar!" the judge said, as chains wrapped around her, and dragged her away." -darkmage1997

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