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Kind of Brony


Well, I'm not much of a brony as I don't like the show, but I greatly respect the fans and their work. I often wish the fanbase of some other franchises were as talented and ambitious as the bronies.

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A young girl, having been robbed of her childhood and very life by illness finds herself given a second chance in a strange world and with an even stranger body. With a new life, family, and even a brother, she tries to cope with the bizarre world she's found herself in while also trying to embrace her role and become worthy of the gift she has been given.
Being a princess can be hard however, even if it's only an honorary title, especially when you're the twin sister of Prince Blueblood.


Warning, very slow burn.

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Hmm..... I'll be tracking this

Interesting, continue

A lot of potential here

I like it so far! :pinkiehappy: I'll be tracking this story!

Also,

She had grabbed the TV remote and tunred on the old tube television

Tunred should be turned, I think. :twilightsheepish:

In the description, "your" should be "you're" in the last sentence.

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Yay for corrections! Boo for me making those mistakes!

7419192 :raritywink: Everyone makes them at some point.

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Yeah, but I make a lot. I just found three more while I was making your corrections. I spelled world as word and wrote once twice where I meant ones.
My eyes just seem to skip over them for some reason.

7419220 Trust me, I know how you feel. :rainbowlaugh:

That last part was random, but I'll be tracking it anyway.

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She was getting CPR because she was dying. Admittedly, I think it was pretty obvious that that was what was happening and I'm not sure if a doctor would do that instead of using a defibrillator, but I put it there for one reason: Things were really depressing throughout and I felt I needed at least pinch of comedy, so that was meant to get readers to smirk a little.

How is she a honorary princess if she's Blueblood's sister? I always thought blueblood was the Prince of unicorns.

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If I had to guess, because she's Blueblood's twin sister, meaning they were born at the same time, in a society with female leaders. It's entirely possible it'll be shared until one can prove more deserving, or share it.

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Well, honestly, as far as I know, there is no actual canon reason given of why Blueblood is known as a Prince other than that he is Celestia and Luna's, according to Lauren, "great great great great great great great great great great great (and probably even more greats) nephew on Celestia's and Luna's mother's side, about 52 times removed, roughly speaking."
In this case, if he gets his title due to heritage, than it stands to reason that his sister would be Celestia and Luna's great great great great great great great great great great great (and probably even more greats) niece and she would also get a royal title because of it. Now personally, I'm probably going to have it so that Blueblood's line specifically did something great that earned them the titles, but they are actually just a noble family that participates more in Equestrian politics than other noble houses... or something like that anyway.
P.S.
The way I'm writing it, it really is just a title. Like it has very little weight behind it compared to the alicorn's princesshood.

Can you make it to 2k a chapter? It's really great so far.

This has my attention.

7419416 celestia and luna were adopted into the royal families of the unicorns pegasi and earth ponies during the three tribes Era.

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Is that from the comics or something? I don't remember it ever being mentioned in the show. If it is from either the show or comic, citation will help, though admittedly, the latter isn't actually considered canon to the show by the creators. Are you sure that's not just a personal head-canon? Not saying it's a bad idea or anything though.
Would this information make the protag not a princess though if she's Blueblood's sister?

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Well, the next chapter is 1600 which I'll be uploading tomorrow morning, so it's in the range I'm aiming for. I'm going to try for between 1000-2000 word chapters, though we'll see how well I manage that. I get carried away sometimes and write more than I mean to.

7419517 it's a head-Canon I've come to accept.

Blueblood being a loving brother to a human-turned-pony, who looks Mane 6 aged?
I'm in

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You know, I should mention that this isn't your average human-turned-pony. It's not even like those stories where a human turns into a CMC aged pony. Nope, this is straight up rebirth, diapers and all.
There will be time-skips through the years until the time the show takes place, but there's going to be a lot of adorableness with big brother Bluey until then.
I'm a bit worried people think the protag is going to body-snatch somepony.

7419517 Actually the show creators did say that Celestia & Luna were adopted.

Story is that after beating Discord. Star swirl beg them to be their rulers and Princess Platinum offer them to be adopted to the crown... Even though they were young mares.

There's a book that Luran and a girls name I can't remember... Anyways that's cannon they said.

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Whether it be canon or not... in fiction there is only one rule; anything goes

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I legitimately wonder if Maud is even capable of of showing Pinkie's level of excitement for anything and, if so, what insane thing would it have to me?
Perhaps being sent on a mission to fly a spaceship onto a giant, world-destroying asteroid and destroy it before it destroys Equestria. She'd probably find that fun, though she might end up just studying the asteroid and forgetting her mission until it's too late and the world ends.
Or if you want to get sappy, maybe when she holds her first-born child for the first time... These are two very different story ideas.

He reached forward and pats my head.

You have a tense mismatch here. Should be "patted".

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Contrary to popular belief, a defibrillator does not restart a stopped heart; it just resets its rhythm so it beats normally. The correct procedure is chemical (e.g. adrenaline)-assisted CPR to resuscitate the patient, and then defibrillation to prevent arrhythmia. So, you were actually completely correct!

Unrelatedly, splitting this into two chapters was the right decision, I think. It has better flow this way.

Did an editing sweep for ya. I sent you the link through PM, but I thought it'd be a good idea to leave something here, too.

It also gives me a space to specify that I'm pretty interested in where you're going with this, and am excited for more. :pinkiesmile:

EDIT: Should I mention that you're featured? At least, in the non-mature box? Because right now, you're featured.

A bit too short for a first chapter (I prefer 2000-4000 words) but not ba start I suppose

Ok that was good.

That was REALLY good.

op sheep
i see a lot of potential in this fanfic.
i look forward to this.

Wow. that was... really sad. :fluttershysad:
I've stayed in a hospital a fair few times myself, mostly for operations in those cases. Would you believe it, on my first operation, (brain tumour removal) the gave me (get this:) a 50% chance of living through it.
So my point is, i kind of empathize with her, to some extent.
But it also goes to show that you count your blessings when you can :twilightsmile:. As bad as things have been at times, it could be much, MUCH worse! :twilightoops:

This has potential to be a great story. Don't let us down, now.

Well holy shit, what a start

So when does the HiE get tons of powers and become the Chosen One? And befriend to whole Mane 6 and fall in love with Luna, Twilight, Rainbow Dash, and Queen Chrysalis simultaneously? And then turn emo and get dark powers and kill Celestia (while the mindless SJW audience cheers because White Privilege Princess dies) and Luna becomes NMM and rules in darkness forever but everything's ok because Luna? :trollestia:

Hey! I'm just making predictions based on the typical HiE pattern! :rainbowlaugh:

(Which I know you won't fall into, but I can't resist poking such a typically terrible trope.)

I think I should call this subgenre the Rebirth or Restart genre because this is the latest one I've read. I was also surprised that there are nine generations of Blueblood as I thought that there would be more than that. I'm seriously hoping that Blueblood IX doesn't grow up to be a bratty philanderer later in life.

Great start!
It seems she's gonna have to learn the language, which is fortunate as if I was birthed speaking their language, it would go something like:
"AAAAAGGGGHHHH Christ! That was unpleasant as hell. Sup, mom."

Well I am liking this.

wow that was sweet and new.:twilightsmile:
good job and...

MAKE MORE!! :flutterrage:please:scootangel:

Flipping through the channels, she stopped on some cartoon about three heavily deformed girls fighting a monkey.

plus one interest for Power Puffs reference *ting* :derpytongue2:

Flipping through the channels, she stopped on some cartoon about three heavily deformed girls fighting a monkey.

You know, I've always wondered why crossovers between that and MLP are so rare. Seriously guys, I'm really kind of disappointed by how rare those are in this fandom.

Anyway, consider me intriqued.

Garden almost could let them go.

almost couldn't

7420514 Based on the cover picture, he might becomes a decent stallion and a big brother with a different public face entirely.

7420649 There's the possibility of Blueblood becoming more tolerable later on. I'm also hoping that he's not too much of a germaphobe for social reasons. Also, a little dirt never hurt anyone.

7420659 I'd like to think what we see in the show either come from how he was raised around all the gold diggers of nobility, or that is his public face/persona and he is well-verse in the political game and dislike how Rarity acted around him.

I'm eagerly waiting for more.

Good start.
I feel really bad for the kid. Especially how the parents started fighting right in front of her and it made her feel like it was her fault.
The way you wrote this made it easy to emphasize (feel like this is the wrong word...) with her.
ONWARDS TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

I hope to see more. Good luck, in the future.

Sooo... What do you guys think for a premise? Is it good? Should I continue?

I just started tracking this story.
Let that be your answer.

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