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Inspired by Night Mist's "My life as a prince" Story
A young man with surprising leadership skills meets the most important day of his life, his death. Many would expect that to be that however fate has other plans. He is given a new life in a land he has never heard of, with the memories of his previous life, but now all he has are questions. What is his destiny? When will it come? What was the deity that decided that this would be his new fate? All he knows for sure is his new name, Mythic Light and he is the son of Princess Celestia, ruler of Equestria

Set after the events of Twilights Kingdom, Princess Celestia found a special stallion to be with however they were taken by forces beyond either of their control, but after his death Celestia realised that she is now carrying his foal. Months later she gives birth to a Alicorn prince that she swears she will protect with every fibre of her being.

Featured page: 05/09/2014, 23/10/2014, 19/03/2016!

Mythic Light's new life has begun and destiny is waiting. What awaits him? Only one way to know for sure
The characters in this story are protected by OCRA
Told generally from Mythic's perspective however other character will get POV's in chapters

This particular story focuses on Mythic Lights Foal years and includes a lot of cute moments. If you have a heart condition please make sure all relevant medication is on hand while reading
YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!!!

Please rate and review!!!

Cover art drawn by the amazingly talented Balthasar999

[img]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2015/028/a/f/storyapprovalsoq_png_by_florescentglow-d8fskw7.png[/img]

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 803 )

6104481 Earlier today I tried to re-write the original chapter, however the consensus was the original was better so I put all the old chapters back. Sorry about that

Im going to take a guess and say you're rewriting the story...
i dont mind reading all the chapters again though, especialy if the are improved versions. :pinkiehappy:

Good. Trust this Old Wolf. *WolfGrin* when I say something is good. I mean it.

6104508 I do trust my audience old wolf. I just hope I can continue to earn it back with my next chapter on Friday.... now all i need is a new proof-reader, I'm asking around but hopefully Friday's chapter will not be so full of mistakes

I look forward to the next chapter. Rewritten or not.:pinkiehappy:

6104518

I would proof read for you, but Im working 40+ hours a week on the fone as a CSR so Im bushed by the time I get home.

and YEs I have proof read before, and Ive helped one author with his writin as a consulate

6104518 I think you forgot to include that chapter where he met Fancy Pants and Fleur.

I'd offer to proofread (I used to be a proofreader for a real-life friend) but I'm going to be WAAAAAY too busy this summer.... and fall..... and probably next winter...... I don't even have enough time to write for myself.

6104629 Indeed you are correct. Fixed now

6104627 Thanks for the thought Old Wolf, it does mean a lot to me.

6104645 That's understandable, thank you for your continued support though

6104464 I can be a proof-reader for ya if you want. I'm already editing for a couple of folks, but I can squeeze you in. Though I believe that having another one on standby would be nice. Can bounce ideas off each other.

Quick question do you have these in a google doc? because it would be easier for me to point out some edits i have seen. mostly some minor slip ups with grammer.

6104518
As I said earlier i would be interested in being a prereader for you. if you have google docs i could use that and edit before you post

The jewel has been enchant

enchanted

“Come on, sweetie. Let’s get you feed,”
Feed should be fed

So, all chapters have been rewritten?

(Any new chapters?)

here, much better!

PS : Still think you need to change the coverart.

:rainbowlaugh: I love this story

Dear All,
Please notice the new cover art I'm trying, draw by a fan of deviantart. What do you think?

6106400 sorry but the old one was better

Sleeping like an angel

Knowledge of the existence of angels, and their heirarchy, is forbidden by the Night Vale city council. Expect a visit from the sheriff's secret police a few minutes before you read this comment.

Peytral not gorget.

6106400 to be brutally honest the old cover art was of much higher quality

6106400 i like it and keep up the good work i feel bad because i read all the chapters and need more

The mare however was shockingly beautiful. In her graceful state, she seemed to practically glide across the carpeted floor. Her two toned pink mane and tail seemed to flow from her head rather than grow from it. The eyeshadow she wore made her pale purple eyes stand out all the more. Her cutie mark consisted of three stylized lilies, two purple and one gold.

Her cutie mark is not lilies but rather is composed of Fleur De Lis's. They are the national symbol of France (prance), and is the name of the mare herself.

6109849 I know that and I do know about the symbols history. The reason I said it as such is because it is described even by my french friends and various internet sites as Stylized Lillies

“That’s enough,” said Mother, in a loud and clear voice. “Blueblood, you are already on thin ice with us and what you have done here is pushing it. Consider this your final warning. If you so much as think that Mythic is unworthy or do not properly address my child as Prince Mythic Light, His Majesty, or His Highness; I will see to it personally that you will be thrown into the dungeon and have your title as prince revoked. Do you understand?"
Blueblood was stunned. “I am your nephew!” he roared “You can’t do that to me!”
“Both Luna and I can easily tear those bonds apart, Blueblood,” Mother said, her voice deliberately calm. “You are hanging by a thread. One wrong move on your part and I will end it. And if you ever insult Golden Sword or my foal ever again, I will see to it that it you are banished from Equestria. Now leave.”
With that, Blueblood stormed out of the throne room. I clapped my hooves together and giggled, soon after everyone was doing that for Mother.

Dang! Mess not with Celestia!

Why were all these chapters posted on the same day? Are there going to be more soon?

I just love the part where everypony collectively groans at Blueblood's approach!:rainbowlaugh:
All their head dropping, groaning, rolling their eyes! Beautiful picture!:rainbowlaugh:

Glancing about the room, I noticed that the eye of every mare was me.

You missed an 'on' there.:scootangel:

Can't wait for the continuation of Mythic Light's life!:moustache:

What happened to the old picture of Mythic Light and Celestia? :applecry:

Nice chapter, but there's some things you may want to edit.

As they approached, i managed to get a better look at them.

That should be capitalized.

After the initial wave of panic hit me, the crowd entire crowd rallied into a cheer that assaulted my ears again.

And I suggest deleting this.

Hello all,
After some time looking into a new editor, I have one. AlicornPriest is now the new editor of Prince of the Sun and I am very happy to have him on board. Thank you very much to all who showed interest in the role, you really the most amazing people. Myself and Alicorn have been just running some grammar edits of the old work and new work is starting up. Including some new stuff, but nothing too serious has changed. Hope you enjoy what we done with the chapters.

Kindest regards
Tornado Blitz

If I may ask, How many re edits are you going to do?

So is Faust still the one who sent him, or is it someone else? From this re-edit it seems that instead of a Goddess giving him a second chance he signed his soul away to the devil... Also, how does a bell have wings and a horn?

6147776 To answer the questions:
1) Someone else, you will see who it is soon
2) I never mentioned wings or horn on the bell, All I wrote was "A large golden bell" nothing with wings or horn.
I hoped you enjoyed the chapter again, though

Son of a princess type stories are unoriginal bores huh? F**k everyone who said that to me cause this does in fact work.

6147792 Following your description of Luna you state,

One was dark blue with a horn and a pair of wings, much like that deity figure from earlier, with a mane that shimmered like a blanket of starlight.

6147803 Noted and corrected, thank you

“Hello there, my foal,” she said softly. “I am so happy that you.”

Minor error here

Nice chapter! A few minor errors here and there but otherwise it was good. To be honest, I liked the old version when Faust brings him to Equestria. Your story inspired me to write a story called the life of princess crystal shield. Here's the link to the story if you want to read it, or what I have so far. Thanks for the insperation and keep up the good work!:twilightsmile:

6120707
and the picture looked a little something like this for me :)
https://youtu.be/mfnJ2aYsphY?t=1m31s

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