For as unbelievable as my life has become, it’s strange that this is what I’m most nervous about. As I sit motionlessly to let the maid comb and style my mane, I can’t help but worry I’ll mess something up.
“Oh, I’m jealous of you darling, your mane is so smooth and manageable,” the maid gushes as she runs a hoof through the golden locks. “Here you are, practically fresh out of bed, and there’s barely a knot. I’m at war with my bedhead every morning.”
Though I’ve gotten much better at speaking, I only hum in response as I smooth out my dress. The pink thing would have felt odd even back when I was still human, more accustomed to white gowns as I was, but wearing something so expensive when I’m a miniature horse is just plain strange. It doesn’t help that, having aced potty training, I’ve grown used to going without any garments at all, save a diaper Mom still insisted I wear to bed.
“How’s my little girl doing?” asks my mother as she enters the room. “All ready for her big day, I hope.”
I squirm around in the maid’s lap to see the mare and hold my hooves out. “Mommy!” The mare beams as she steps forward, her elegant, light-yellow sundress trailing behind her and her pink diamond earrings glittering in the room’s ambient light. As desperate as I am for some comfort right about now, I try not to ruin her ensemble when she picks me up.
“Oh, you look absolutely adorable!” she exclaims as she smooths my mane and kisses me on the nose, making me giggle. It might sound odd, but I’ve come to embrace my status as super-cute pony baby and find the attention quite enjoyable. Maybe it’s the incentive of extra delicious dessert that has me accepting the role and giving puppy dog eyes on a regular basis. After a lifetime of hospital pudding, I just can’t resist my mom’s chocolate cookies.
With another mare to help, my mane is finished in no time with a large pink bow to match my eyes and dress, and I’m whisked away to meet my brother so that we can begin the day’s event. An event in my and Blueblood’s honor. An event where many eyes, both familiar and not, will be on us.
Today is our first birthday.
Nervousness parches my tongue, and I attempt to swallow down the dryness. Besides Grandpa and Grandma, I’ve yet to meet the rest of the family, but judging by the busied servants hurrying to set up the party outside, that's going to change soon.
What if they don’t like me? Think I'm weird or can't stop looking at me with pity? When I had finally gained my bearings nearly a year ago, it was hard to come to terms with having a new family. This was especially so for my pony parents as it felt they were meant to be replacements for those I had before.
But soon, the desire to be a good daughter to them stopped feeling like an obligation; stopped feeling like it was what was expected of me by whatever force gave me this second chance, and soon became a genuine want to make them happy because I had grown to love them.
Even though it’s only been one year, I am Pureblood, daughter of Ornate Garden and Blueblood the 16th, twin sister of Blueblood the 17th, and a member of this family. That’s who I want to be, and I hope this family wants that too. I fear being the unwelcome black sheep; the one others deny relationship to.
I don’t want to be the family’s shame, and it feels like this party will be the stage I perform on to determine that.
“Mommy, I’m thirsty,” I mumble, “Can I get some water?”
“Oh? There’s punch outside if you want some?”
“Nuh-uh, I want water.” I’m telling the truth, though really I just want to delay the inevitable and a trip to the kitchen will add at least five minutes to our trip. The house is really big, after all.
“Tell you what, sweetie; I’ll bring you to your father, and go get you a sippy cup, okay?”
I nod vigorously. Dad is probably with my brother right now, and spending some time with him will calm my nerves. It takes only a minute to reach the room they are in and I can hear a commotion coming from it thirty seconds before we stop in front of the door.
“Honey, are you okay in there?” Mom calls, hoof on the handle.
“Wha-? Hey! Get back here this instant, young stallion!” Dad’s voice is cut off by the sound of something tipping over and a colt’s giggling.
Rolling her eyes, Mom pushes the door open and says, “I swear, I don’t know which Blueblood is more troublesome sometimes. Really, you can’t get a colt dressed?”
Dad, for his part, sends a weak glare at his wife while he holds his struggling colt to his chest. “I’ve got him nearly dressed, he just really doesn’t like the bow tie.”
Sure enough, little Blueblood is wearing a tuxedo similar to the one his father wears save for the tiny, light-blue bow tie in Dad’s hooves. When brother sees me, his struggling ceases and he holds out his forelegs with a call of, “Pure!”
I smile and wave back, breaking out into a grin as Dad uses the moment of distraction to get the bow tie on his son, getting the colt to harrumph and cross his hooves. “No fair,” he mumbles as he is placed down.
“Oh, it’s not that bad,” Dad says with a smirk, “You want to look snazzy for the party, don’t you?” Blueblood just grumbles in reply, only smiling again when I’m placed down, as well.
Running over, he skids to a halt and looks me up and down. I’m confused at first until he bursts into laughter and points before managing to say, “You pink marshmallow.”
I look down to see that my dress has poofed up around me, causing my cheeks to poof and redden with indignity. “I do not,” is my stellar defense.
This only gets him to laugh harder. “Face marshmallow too!”
I glower at the colt before smirking. “It’s, ‘Your face looks like a marshmallow too’.” I correct, getting the colt to stop his laughter instantly.
It’s something I’ve learned about my brother since taking on the task of tutoring him, he hates having his mistakes pointed out to him. Usually this means I have to be creative on how I correct him, but being blatant works great as a form of comeuppance for when he starts to act bratty.
Blueblood stares blankly for a few moments before abruptly shoving me over, getting me to yelp in surprise. My vision goes pink as my dress folds over my head and I hear my mom’s sharp voice. “Blueblood! You do not push ponies!”
I struggle for a bit before eventually being helped by Dad. When I can see again, my brother is holding his nose up petulantly. “Say you’re sorry this instant, young stallion,” Mom demands with a stomp of her hoof.
Blueblood lifted his head higher. “No.”
At the rebellious reply, Mom looked ready to burst, but is interrupted when I apologize instead.
“Wha-? Pureblood, you didn’t do anything wrong. Your brother knows better to push others, especially you.” It’s unspoken, but I know Mother thinks of me as fragile and helpless, and that is irksome.
“But I was teasing him,” I say to Mom before returning my eyes to Blueblood. “I’m sorry.”
For his part, the colt looks like he’s trying to stay aloof before his ears lower. “M’sorry fur pushing you… and the marshmallow stuff.”
“Apology accepted,” I say, beaming. Once I’m put down, I waddle over to Blueblood, who’s staring at the ground, and plop down. When he manages to meet my eyes, I hold my hooves out and after a moment of hesitation he leans into the hug.
Mom looks like she’s still a little angry, but Dad walks up and brushes against her. “Hey, I think they both learned their lesson. We want them to have a good birthday, right?” When Mom agrees with a sigh, Dad smiles brightly. “Hey, why don’t we leave the foals alone for a moment? I want to talk to you about something before we greet the guests.”
The two step out of the room with a call for us to be good, I wonder what they are going to talk about, but eventually shrug. I’m feeling more relaxed now with my brother, but the party is still looming uncomfortably in my mind. Blueblood’s muzzle is scrunching adorably, and I ask, “What’s the matter?”
He points at my head. “Messy.”
“What?” I reach up and notice I have hair hanging in my face. Oh no, did I mess up my mane? I can’t meet the family with a messy mane! They’ll think I’m some sort of ruffian! Blueblood jumping to his hooves and running across the room distracts me from my panic as I watch him climb a chair and scour the surface of the vanity desk in the room.
With a triumphant, “Aha!” the colt hops down and returns, allowing me to see the comb held between his teeth. Spitting it into his hooves, Blueblood makes his way behind me and pulls me into his lap. As he begins to gently run the comb through my mane, I can’t help but smile contently.
Why was I even worrying so much about meeting the rest of the family when I have my brother beside me? The sheer magnitude of our combined cuteness will knock their nonexistent socks off.
“Okay, what’s the matter?” Ornate asked with a knowing look directed at her husband. “You only twirl your mustache when you’re nervous.”
Blueblood’s hoof froze at the tip of his luscious whiskers. The silver strands may not have stood out well against his white coat had he not gave it an extra touch of wax for the occasion, making them shine in the light.
He sighs, “Well, I received some good news… You know how Aunty sent her apologies two days ago for not being able to attend the party?” When his wife nodded, he continued. “Well, negotiations have taken a sudden turn for the better and were wrapped up earlier this morning. I just got word that she will be attending, after all.”
Ornate remained quiet and Blueblood’s uneasy smile started to become more genuine at what he perceived as his wife accepting the news without a fuss. Then, she exploded. “What!? You’re telling me the ruler of the entire country is coming to my house today! I’ll need to get the extra decorations out of storage to get the gardens up to high enough standards! The food! We only have a single chocolate cake, that won’t be nearly enough to sate her hunger if the rumors are true! Do you think Perfect Pastries can manage a rush order!?”
“Ornate! Ornate, calm down!” Blueblood shouted, grabbing his wife by the shoulders to make her look at him. “Aunty just wants to meet the foals! With how busy she’s been she feels awful that she can only manage it now.”
The stallion’s attempts at soothing fell flat as Ornate gave a slight glare. “Blueblood, just because you have the audacity to call the single most powerful pony in Equestria ‘aunty’ does not mean she is not literally and politically the most powerful pony in Equestria! Everything must be perfect!”
Had she had anything more to say, the mare couldn’t remember as the strapping stallion pulled her forward and planted his lips firmly against hers. At first, she made to push him away, but as he worked his magic, her hoof instead came to caress his chest lovingly. When they finally pull apart, Ornate flutters her eyes open, not even realizing she had closed them to begin with.
“Okay,” she breathed, “I’m calm, thank you, Bluey.”
Blueblood smirks slightly. “I know how to handle my mare.”
Earning a playful swat, Ornate smiles too before sobering. “So, your ‘aunt’ is coming today. Does she… does she know about Pure’s condition?”
“First off, she insists I call her that, as I keep telling you. She has for as long I can remember,” he says, booping her nose. “And secondly, yes, she knows. She says that she will take the proper precautions so as not to hurt our daughter when they meet.”
“All right, good.” Looking down the hall, Ornate wonders aloud, “Do you think we should try and tell the children? I’m sure Pure will understand.”
“She probably would, knowing that filly, but Aunty enjoys her surprises. I say we leave it be.” He chuckles. “And get a camera ready. I remember the first time I saw her when I was a colt. Mom couldn't resist showing everypony who entered her home the photo of me with that gobsmacked look on my face.”
Giggling herself, Ornate gives her husband a peck and steps away. “Well then, I suppose we should get this party started, hmm? You get the camera and I’ll get the children and we’ll meet outside. The guests should be arriving soon and we must be there to greet them.”
Blueblood bows. “As you wish, my lady.” With one final laugh between the two, the proud parents set about giving their foals a birthday to remember. It wouldn’t be that hard.
"Oh! And I almost forgot to get Pure a cup of water. I better do that while I'm at it."
If I remember correctly, Cadance was about CMC age when she ascended. It would depend on her relative age to Blue & Pure on whether or not she'd be at the castle...
Well based on the flashback from the show Cadance might have already ascended I think. Hard to say I guess since we don't really know how old twilight was when Cadance started foalsitting her.
Don't shoehorn characters into your story just for the sake of them being there. Cadence doesn't have to appear.
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I'll go kill myself now.
Ah more cuteness. I need more cuteness. Doctors orders.
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It was a book and she was adopted around I would guess the CMC's age. It honestly matters on how old Blueblood and his sister are. If they are as old as Shining Armor, then Cadance would be about their age. However, if they are around Twilight and the gang's age, then Cadance would be about the CMC's age and probably already an alicorn and adopted.
Cute story thus far. Like the interactions between Pure and Blue.
If we assume that Pureblood is the same age as Twilight, then it would be possible for a filly Cadance to occur. I think she is about 5 to 8 years older than Twilight. But I'm not sure she would have been ascended by that point. That's why I would say that it might make more sense to concentrate on Celestia in that chapter and find room for Cadance at a later date.
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... sweet Faust! I just had a d'aww moment involving Blueblood!
Great work, can't wait for the next update.
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Also excellent story so far, I'm looking forward to future updates and love how quick this one arrived.
Dude... why u hatin' on glasses so much?
That's a hard question...
Cadance was around the CMC when she turn into a Alicorn... She is an orphan, it would be very cool for the story if the BlueBloods adopted her.
Most likely that BlueBlood might be close to Shining and Cadance age, and if so that would mean right now in the story she would be a foal and still living in the Eath Pony village as a pegsi.
You should add her in but your going have to wait for a while. Like maybe 10 years to do her!
I personally always viewed Cadence as being sligthly younger then Blueblood, but now that I am thinking there isn't any evidence for anything.
Anyway, unless you really feel like making her a few years older then Blueblood and Pureblood and thus placing her into the story early on at least for a short cameo, wait for a while before brining her in. Espcially if you don't have any real role for her.
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According to the comics, she was a teenager.
Just read this today. Really enjoyed your work so far.
Given Cadance's apparent age (young adult) and the fact that it seems similar to Blueblood's current age in canon, I'd say she hasn't ascended yet. (I would reckon them both at about 10 years older than Twi, and I'd reckon her at around equivalent human age 18-19 at the beginning of the series.)
Edit: I'd say they wouldn't even go to the same school after she ascends, as she and Shiny clearly went to a public high school, while I can't see Blueblood (and by extension, Pure) going to anything but a private school.
I'm worried about this couch. I think it needs to go into furniture protection and pose as a chaise lounge. Or maybe a sofa.
From what I remember about from the comics (by hearsay at least), I think Cadence was a Pegasus orphan in some far off village, who both got celestia's attention and gained her ascendancy, when she taught an evil witch how to love and be kind, I think Celestia herself adopted her, and according to the show she was a teen around about the time Twilight was a filly... I think whether she is there or not depends on how old you think she is to blueblood: if you think she is older by a considerable margin then yes she might be there, if she is youngert than she might not even be born, if she is around about the same age then she would still be off somewhere else, far away from Canterlot.
Of course nothing in the comics is officially cannon unless the show says so, so feel free to make some stuff up if you want her in the story, bbut remeber the part about her being a teen in Twilights flashback in the canterlot wedding.
I hope this was somewhat helpful.
As they said, if Love butt and the Bloods are Shinies age, then Cady wouldn't have ascended yet.
About Pure's magic allergy, I recall another story where the unicorn had lost half her horn in an accident and grew up with very little beyond elementary TK, instead exercising her body to the point she was almost like an Earth Pony in strength and endurance. Pure might want to focus on her body too. Of course, she's only one right now so there's quite a bit of time to mull over that problem.
When we do get the royal meeting, I have to wonder if Celestia will see something beyond the painfully adorable unicorn filly in front of her? I know Discord would but he's at Time Out in the royal garden as target practice for the pigeons. Mmm, something to think about for the future considering Celestia's penchant for destinies and so on. (I feel Celestia's more of a messenger for Fate than anything, why else would she throw six particular mares at World-wide disasters repeatedly?)
A number of years down the road may have some guest appearances by a bookish Twilight, Lyra, Minuette, and Twilight (heh). Canterlot isn't that big that they won't run into each other now and again... despite going to different schools.
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The comics are canon.
https://twitter.com/AndyPriceArt/status/461550768492150784
(Official artist for MLP IDW Comics.)
7481074 Then why do they contradict each other in several instances?
This is like if the Midwich Cuckoo's was cute, it will Interesting to see her reaction to Sunbutt.
About Cadance: That depends at which age you put the Blood Twins.
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Wow, that sounds so wrong. Anyway, if Blueblood is about Rarity's age, who is close in age to Twilight, then Cadance could already be there. She could even play foalsitter for them.
I mean, you could also have all three of them as foals, who later on form a team to find their special talens—the Cutie Mark Cavaliers!
Either way, I know it's early, but I do wonder how Pure is going to react to Rarity (and mares like her) chasing after her brother's tail. Will she be annoyed? Will she be overprotective? Will she sit down with Cadance to hatch out conspiracies in order to get her twin hitched? So many possibilities.
If Blue/Pure are supposed to be around the same age as Twilight, then she should be in the story as an alicorn soonish. Cadence started babysitting twi in her early school days if I remember correctly.
Cadance could be there as a young filly i think.
Depends since i don't know her age too well in canon.
I wouldn't mind a young Cadence, Pure could be one of her best friends in school and either princess might be able to help Pure with her magic problem.
With Cadence I'm going based on the show seeing as Celestia talked of Tirek knowing of her. I say we put her in for this basically means that she's been an alicorn for a very long time. Of course, I never read the comics either so...
7481233 "Until the show says otherwise." Anything the show does not contradict can be considered canon.
7481233 I think it was posted somewhere (would have to do some digging) that while the comics are "canon" if events in the show contradict the comic the show takes precedence.
So basically their canon unless the show contradicts them and upon such an occurrence the comic is no longer canon.
A comment about skinning your couch...?
Okay then.
But I'll have you know that I'll take away your phone charger until you post a new chapter.
Best torture, and I can watch your face slowly become more scared as you notice the battery is going lower and lower................
Until it eventually dies.
also on the comics being canon or not:
http://www.equestriadaily.com/2015/02/clarification-on-mlp-comics-vs-show.html
answer: kind of.
Good chapter is pureblood mum going to leave her there with celesta will they visit them
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I have decided after a long day at work mulling over the story that the Twins will be Mane6 age, but that Cadance will not be at the party. She's recently ascended, but her existence has not yet been publicly revealed as she is a kid coming from a commoners life and this is all too much for her. Celestia doesn't want to expose her to the dirty world of politics and nobility until she has schooled her some on how to handle it.
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The assailant is right here, 7479178 . Get him!
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You're a villain, so you probably have special, transparent aluminum glasses that can resist the strongest of hero punches. Us regular folk though have to worry about things like wiping our lenses with the wrong material causing irreversible damage. These pockmarks would be an issue if they weren't directly in the center of my left lens.
I can't stop looking at them! They're like eye floaters I can't not notice!
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I hardly ever use my phone, honestly. You'd be better off taking my laptop charger since I'm always using it. But then you'd be preventing from writing the story.
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If you're not certain about Cadance being in this story then simply don't put her in.
If you feel she belongs in the story, and it doesn't feel forced, then by all means
So, Celestia appearing. Let's see how the little ones handle that!
Who knows about Pureblood's magic condition?
your story is very fast becoming the story i look for to updating the most
...stop it
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... That would reasonably know, such as family, visitors, or really anyone the parents are allowing near their daughter. Good parenting 101.
Any drama derived from her condition being agitated will be accidental, from ponies who would not have reason to know, such as strangers on the street or public places, or, heaven forbid, with malicious intent.
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... Unless I totally drop the ball and the story nose dives into oblivion. In which case, I will apologize profusely while flogging myself.
Lasik is not really scary, just hurts like hell for several hours after painkillers wear off.
I did it a couple years ago, and couldn't be happier, after my - 13 on each eye
I am really enjoying this! It keeps getting better and better with every chapter. I am really looking forward to Pure's meeting with Celestia
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Meh, I guess you're right about that...
I imagine her looking up at Celestia so much that she falls on her back and then states that she is too tall. Then Celestia 'awww' s at the cuteness.
Then pure sneakily plays in Celestia's tail.
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You can always write with pen and paper, and once you're done we can temporarily give you the cord back so you can transcribe the chapter to the website.
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Okey. Upon rereading the tweet, I now understand.
I only twirl it when laughing manically.
Hide behind your technicalities, they will do you no good when the fandom hunts you down if she doesn't make an actual appearance next chapter.
Not sure about anyone else, but if I don't see the word "stuff" in the next chapter at least five times I won't be held responsible for what I do.
Can't wait for the next chapter of this !!!!!
I hope that just Celestia being near doesn't end with Pure in a hospital.
7544494 Ok, ok!!! Chill out, before I pull out my mini army to protect the author!! He's doing a fine enough job, no need to have him dodging axes!! XD