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Pen Mightier
I proved my namesake in a duel of honour. The crayon never stood a chance.
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damn I really nailed it when I said it was big mac taking his her for a ride...
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I clicked no. :)
Not really
Aww, the button didn't work like I was expecting.
Is there really a point to spoilering out Cheerilee, Fleetfoot and Starlight Glimmer when the tag and picture both clearly show them?
Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa... WHOA!
Pen... Are you writing clop now?
This pleases me. 
Also, cute art. 
I shall give this a go once I get more free time. 
Taco
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damn that image of marble on the character tag doesn't fit her anymore
7082009 Heheh, 'ride'. Because, y'know, they're horses. Get it? Uh....Imma shut up now.
7082256 You don't get to go to Equestria. Not really.
7082515 One second, let me fix that.
Oh, now it wooooooooooor-.... 
7082639 Made you look, right?
7082901 The secret is, clicking 'no' sends you to Azkaban. Congratulations.
7083240 Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! I guess I am. Sort of. Does writing window dressing for someone else's clop chapters count as writing clop? Eh, let's count it as a 'yes' because it makes me feel all grown-up and stuff. Uh, I didn't read the clop chapter and now I'm waiting here for comments on it or for some random passing god to smite me, whichever comes first.
7083287 7083408 This is actually the story of how an intercontinental ballistic missile met a taco.
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7083776 what is true??, she is smiling so hard that looks creepy and totally goes against her canon, well at least is not as bad as starlight new hairdo for season 6.....
What a glorious chapter! Such eloquent writing! Such twists! I was positively gripping my armrest in excitement!
I don't even have armrests!
7083812 did you grip your chair armrest before or after the cloptional?
7083818 I wrote that comment for the first chapter. The nonexistent armrests didn't survive that sudden flood of story. With heavy heart I had to bury them in my mind. There's enough space to spare in there anyways.
Moar plz
I admit I didn´t completely like the idea of an heard beforehand, because I can´t believe it in most chases that they all like each other, and I somehow don´t like it, that it is exactly Big Mac who always get all the Mares (I´m not a fan of him either), but what I really didn´t liked was, that the main Char haven´t said anything half of the story.
Before reading I was like, "Cloptional, so like with a link going to the actual clop section."
2 minutes into reading, "Welp, I walked straight into that one."
I'm calling it right now.
Starlight performed a spell and made Marble and whoever the human is switch bodies.
Did anyone else get a cynical CinemaSins vibe from some of those lines?
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Its a step in the right drection at least. 
Hahaha, I'll count it.
Is this story finished?
If the next chapter starts with the morning after, I'm going to be very sad. I love the setup.
I didn't know how much I need this, until I needed more.
Please provide more, by the way.
I mean, *Blush*, if that's okay with you.
7086346 Make that a double helping Q~Q
Well now, it seems there's gonna be lots of tacos with stuffing.
party time!
Well, things did certainly happen and I'd be grateful if I was able to read about more things.
Please
Me like
Definitely going to put on my read later list, but for my sanity I have to wait to see if it's going to continue. I love your stories, but if it's not a one shot, you always start strong, but then we don't see an update ever again. Such a tease...
I always pictured Starlight as a larger mare.
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On to my thoughts about the story: unfinished.
We, the audience, never really learns what happened to Marble, the narrator, or if Marble's body can take all of Big Mac's ICBM. We are also hinted that Marble can vocalize more than just "Mmmhmmm" by whatStarlight said on the train, but we never see that. Other than that, this was a fun story that I enjoyed reading, I just would like to see more explored and explained. I feel everything could be wrapped up in another cloptional chapter and finish with another slice of life chapter.
7083812 the sarcasm is strong with this one (and i totally thought the same thing)
Suddenly Pineapples invade.
This is kinda hot
7088758 The story is and has been marked "incomplete. "
My, my, are you just going to sit there and take this, boy? You need to get involved in your rutting, you'll have a much more wonderful time!
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Hmmm, feel like I saw it marked as complete.
I will admit, I was very upset it ended there
I'll just have to fav and see what happens next
Word?
Well.
Then they wake up tomorrow and get a show of charades trying to explain the alien intruding in their beloved mare....
Keep going! ;)
Dayum. Just...dayum.
what sorcery is this?
I actually find this story more intriguing than anything else.
There's obviously a story behind Mac and Marble's relationship and how it eventually grew to include a couple sort-of love rivals and then eventually Starlight Glimmer (the fact that such acquisitions seemed to revolve around Marble more than Big Mac in particular). I hope that element of the plot gets a lot of attention, because honestly it's way more interesting than hearing a fish-out-of-water story involving a dimension-hopping brony.
Those green texts seem to indicate something.
It seems to indicate that our protagonist and Marble are sharing a body and is having a bit of memmory leakage.
So when's the next bit hitting the theaters?
This story is getting me very interested in it a lot in hope you make a new chapter's for this story soon please update more soon.
7104707 *Twilight Zone Music/Han Zimmer Buom*
It's look like Marble still inside her own body. I think that MC and Marble start to... merge together?
Is the story kill?