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abrony-mouse


Occasional FimFic contributor. Also short reviews on request. Blog for silliness, music, writing. STATUS 2024.05.22. Snow on snow.

May
22nd
2024

REVIEWER RECOMMENDATION: Azure Drache review of abrony-mouse's Delivering Sweetness & Beyond · 8:30am Wednesday

The Review [HERE]

EDelivering on Sweetness & Beyond
When Derpy and Crafty Crate deliver a package to a parallel dimension of sweet and innocent ponies, things go awry, and Ocean Mist, protégé of Kimono, learns a lesson as she overcomes her limitations to help them out
abrony-mouse · 16k words · 168 views

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Have a look at my deep dive review series which drills into artist's work that I already have a few reviews of, and which talks in more detail about all aspects of the writing process, as well as interviews the author.

#1 Loganberry 'the Wordsmith'

Check out my light-hearted, short review/recommendation series! Positives only (negatives shared by PM). If you want a review, just ask! My reviewer details, including tag preferences and my approach to reviewing, are below.

#1 Winston; #2 Ulcuran; #3 Loganberry; #4 Loganberry; #5 Loganberry; #6 AltruistArtist; #7 Petrichord [NSFW]; #8 Semillon; #9 Recon777; #10 Quoterific #11 Sockpuppet #12 Gavier; #13 Admiral Producer #14 Semillon [NSFW]

Reviews that aren't recommendations, but were close and with editing could be recommended in future.

#1 Gavier #2 ales_ponies; #3 Alzrius; #4 Crownofdissonance

Also see my review group: 2024 reviews here.

Testimonials (for the deep-dive)

Review requests

Have a story for me? Great!

I will skim-read short fics initially and give a smol review on that. I might then return for a much more in-depth read and review later. I will read/review long fics if I trust the author, normally after reading shorter fics by them, or by reading a chapter of a longer story which can stand on its own four hooves.

Why skim read?

Skim reading is fast-reading. I won't pause to work out what's going on (much) and I won't re-read complex sentences. This lets me a) read/review extremely fast and b) give you a review based on the basic 'feel' for the story that is coming across, which most readers will have - rather than get my idiosyncratic take. It also lets you take my review in a fairly light-hearted spirit, hopefully.

Genres:

Adventure
Alternate Universe *
Anthology
Anthro
Comedy
Crossover *
Dark
Drama
Horror
Human
Mystery
Porn
Random
Romance
Sad
Science Fiction
Second Person
Slice of life
Thriller
Tragedy

*Depends on the AU/cross-over series. I have a list here.

Themes/Chars/Series I love/hate:

Other pony gens (all of them, even G2 and Ponylife)
Pinkie
Families
Introversion/angst
Irony
Angels / Devils
Good / Evil

None of these are absolute, though, so if you are thinking of recommending a fic or asking for a review in one of the categories, please still do, but with an explanation of how the genre could still work for me.

General FAQ
Can I recommend others' work for review? Yes.

May
6th
2024

Writing thoughts (to separate from the general thoughts blog) [NSFW material will be referenced occasionally, but will be blacked out] · 1:22pm May 6th

Writing mistakes

Hall of shame: dumb errors by me

These errors are late-stage errors which I left in my fic after multiple reads. It happens to us all :(


Ocean Mist trots back onto the quiet landing.

She idly looks at a wall-cupboard. Even though she knew it couldn’t be in there, she opens the door anyway. She wrinkles her nose at the musty smell from a stack of used dusters.

Under these is a stepladder which she looks at curiously.

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3409029
no problem :pinkiesmile: look forward to seeing your content!

Hey, thanks for the watch :pinkiehappy:
Glad you like my stuff

3408505
no problem :) look forward to seeing your content!

3407664
yay :) look forward to seeing your content!

3407777
yes she does, darling!

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