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Occasional FimFic contributor. Reviews on request. Blog for silliness, music, writing. STATUS 2025.04.06. W-I-L-D — Slayer of Manes

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Derpy Hooves and Crafty Crate deliver a package to a world inhabited by a gentle and innocent generation of ponies.

A mundane event, solved in a cute way by a filly which wants to help but is limited to its point of view... G3 fans, give it a read... ~ Azure Drache

There's a lot of interesting stuff treating G3 as a separate dimension from G4 ~ Present Perfect

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Thanks :pinkiehappy: have responded there. You have been a really great reviewer, who has given me a lot to think about!

Another review, this time by PresentPerfect!

“Ah, well. Nothing for it but to see if there’s anything the natives can do.”

Welp þis is gonna end well

“Capitalism can be most unfair.”

should someone tell her about how communism failed quite a lot

The three breezies flutter together in shock. To them, the plant was as much a living thing as they were — talk of plant-destruction was taboo in Breezie Blossom.

Ocean Mist springs into action to prevent a full crying fit. She recites a breezie rhyme.

Ok þat was funny tbh

“They need a carriage, like in Cinderella.”

uhhh Ocean, why didn’t you wish for þe wagon to be unstuck?

With that, Wysteria trots away with the carriage-turned-float.

I’d just be livid for þat

It was one of the first fables that Kimono had taught Ocean. The ancient tale of the 'Bundle of Sticks' was about an unruly family: the mother gave each sibling a stick to break but while it was easy to break them individually, when combined, even the strongest were unable.

Wait þere is a fairy tale for þat concept?

“I know all about the birds and the bees!”

Good luck sleeping at night Kimono

‘Awws’ ring out from the throng. More than one eager waiting pony’s eyes glisten at the thought that they wouldn’t get to parade for the Equestrians.

Good job on Crafty for keeping his cool. I’d lose it at þis point

“Much. They’re just much too much,” she finishes.

Þey’d say þe same about you xd

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